A Superpowered Hero Starting in The Qin Empire

If the protagonist has the ability and ideas, he should unify the land himself! Nowadays, people with normal values ​​and a sound moral compass who travel back in time are practically saints compared to ancient rulers. Most of us are used to the peaceful daily life of the real world.

Don't be a simp, unable to move when you see a woman.

The writing is alright. Although siding with Ying Zheng is a cliché, it still feels like siding with him is more in line with the author's wishes. I suggest the author take a detour and help Ying Zheng, since you're writing about the martial arts world, not a power struggle. Just use existing solutions instead of creating your own faction and wandering around aimlessly. Don't try to do everything yourself.

The impact force of a truck is at least several hundred tons. If that force were applied to a steel wire, it could easily cut down a tree, just like the Guzheng Project in "The Three-Body Problem". So here's the question: if the protagonist's static field can withstand the impact of a truck, can it also withstand the impact of a steel wire reinforced with hundreds of tons of force?

It's watchable, but I still have to say something. The protagonist's personality shifts too quickly. Suddenly he possesses extraordinary abilities. In less than a few days, he becomes transcendent. Indifferent to beauty. Indifferent to wealth. How is that possible? After gaining superhuman abilities, one inevitably experiences a period of egocentrism.

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The protagonist's power growth is excessively exaggerated. Whenever this happens, it basically leads to mindless buffing of NPCs. My impression of the protagonist is that of a kid carrying a bomber and beating people up, in every aspect. Even with its drastic modifications, *Qin's Moon* at least avoided the trashy plots of realm clashes typical of fantasy novels.

As the title suggests, let's offer a little comfort to this newbie author.

Anyone want to skip Dragon Raja and not watch it?

Everywhere you look, you can tell that the protagonist's combat power is being suppressed. He can't control his combat power and starts at level 1. Later, when he upgrades to level 4, his commonly used skills are turned into restricted skills, which is very frustrating and depressing to watch.