Douluo: the Peerless Slaying of Evil and Demons

Instructions for readers entering this trap: This is a hands-on work, very amateurish, with a novice writing style, so be cautious when entering this trap. I do not accept contracts for my practice works. All copies are free for everyone to read and feel free to comment on. Updates are very random. Recently, there have been three updates, but it's hard to say later. Firstly, I don't have any outline. I just think about the plot before going to bed . If I don't think about it well, the update will be slow. Secondly, I was looking for a job, and later found a busier job. If I had to study for work, updates would be slow. In saying this, I am afraid that if you adapt to the speed of my third update, you will not accept it if I slow down later. Although I am writing about Dou Er, I want to improve my plot control and enrich the content, which contains many original plots. I relatively respect the protagonist of the original work, but I prefer the protagonist I wrote. Someone asked me before who the heroines are, but I actually haven't thought about it. After all, there is no outline. I have one idea before going to bed and another after going to bed. Criteria for choosing a heroine: not a vase. I want to create characters more. All the plots and character relationships are to create the male protagonist. The creation of the male protagonist will also drive other characters, and try to make other characters more three-dimensional. I guess it will be difficult for me to do this, but this is my goal. So there will be a problem, what is written is different from what is read. You may not be able to understand my thoughts when I write them down. Then it proves that I failed and the work is not good either. So be cautious and cautious By the way, everyone is welcome to join the group and chat. ——Dividing Line—— (October 19) The contract was signed later, but it was still free. Because I don't understand it well, if there is a VIP program in the future, I will apply for a free operation confirmation. Some people may ask, since it will cause trouble, why sign it? Don't you think novels with character cards are really cool! (Tremor) I am still looking for a job, and one of the pleasures is to see the number of collections increase. Vanity. Even if the writing is not good, I still want to get feedback. Thank you for collecting it if you like it!

These two characters are a bit too much, and the protagonist is too mediocre, because he looks down on Douluo logic?

I always appreciate people who are truly attentive

A novice author just writes three male protagonists and creates a second setting. Is this really awesome? Can't you tell the difference between the weight and the weight?

The author has personally cleared the mines for you, so there is no need to ask again and again in the comment area. 1. Don't fall into the trap just because it's free. Time is also a cost. 2. Don't worry about the protagonist of the character card. This book is the plot line of two characters, so they are two male protagonists. Of course, whether what I write counts or not is up to you. 3. Without an outline, the look and feel may be a bit confusing. 4. Very busy and slow to update. 5. Author I like to challenge things that are not suitable for my level. 6. No polishing, no saving. The rhythm is weird, not much fun, and bland. (If there are other questions in the future, I will add them. Or if you have already read them, add them under this comment to help newcomers.) (The editor notified me on the 10th that he would give me a test push, which happened to be the 12th, which is today. Although I posted this comment at this time It's really stupid, but I think it's necessary to say it. Otherwise, there will always be people who say nothing about me. I accept criticism, but I don't like criticism from people like this. The only thing I'm sorry for is the editor. After all, he said he was testing the waters. The main reason is that I feel that I am facing troubles in life now, and I want to see if there are any comments. I hope to put the troubles behind and think about the work based on the opinions. It turns out that I read one comment at a glance. I didn't read it at all, and I just made irresponsible remarks. I'm a newcomer, I'm very ambitious, and I don't have a clue. But can you just read a little bit and say something like this? A novice can't write it well. Yes, that's it. Of course, in your eyes, I should be a fool, thinking that I don't know. But have you ever thought that writing doesn't mean you can write well. Wanting to write just means that I have this idea. Don't I have some ideas if I write a work for practicing and not intending to make money. ? Let me make it clear here that practicing writing has become a burden. I just don't want to disappoint those who are still reading my books. We are all passers-by. I never take myself seriously, and you should not take yourself seriously either. Whenever I have nothing to do, I will read the comments of book friends and the backend collection. If I want to modify it, I will consider it. I will be happy when I see someone praising me, and I will be depressed when I see someone abandoning the book. Then, I figured it out today. The groups I follow are limited, and I don't need to bother to go there. I want to comment on it. I definitely want it, but it is what it is. If I don't have the ability, I won't pursue it. If I don't make any progress, others will leave after reading a few chapters, so there is no need to keep it. )

I don't know if you like it or not, but I think it's quite satisfying. Let's put it this way, when I look back at what I wrote, it doesn't feel like something I would have written. The original plot of Zhuyue City took half a month to write. I was afraid that I could not control the length well, so I cut some of the plots I imagined, such as the encounter between Zi Mo and the young city lord, and the verbal confrontation between Huo Yuhao and the city lord. Since I didn't write it, forget it. At first I only thought about the beginning of this plot, and there was also an ending scene. I thought about the stories in the middle while I was sleeping every day during the past half month. There was an idea every day, a style every day, and finally it was integrated into what it is now. The picture below is my original plot idea. Comparing it with the current plot, it is actually very different. The original idea was that the plot of Zhuyue City would be Zi Mo testing Huo Yuhao and handing over the leading role of the plot to Huo Yuhao. Mainly this. The plot now is to treat it as a small part. Why do you want to hand it over instead of continuing to write Zi Mo? This is related to the setting of two male protagonists that I originally planned. Now that Zi Mo has been positioned, he has his own obsession and cannot stay in one place. He must fight to the end of the world and make the world his home. Then he is not suitable to participate in the core disputes of major forces. For this reason, I chose Huo Yuhao as the protagonist in this aspect, as he is more suitable to participate. This is also the reason why I decided to have two male protagonists. This resulted in the heroine's appearance that I set to be extended indefinitely (crossed out). Of course, it is also possible to have a single protagonist, that is, Huo Yuhao and the major forces serve as the background, and Zi Mo travels around the mainland. But that would require too much originality. It's very difficult for me. It's too troublesome for me as a newbie to create original plots. So, I chose to change my perspective. The follow-up is the college line. This line cannot only be about the college. My hope for this is that I also suddenly imagined a better plot.

Come on! ! The most innovative themes I have ever seen, time travel, rebirth, two male protagonists

I can't understand this novel. I'm banging here and there.

I am here to praise a book friend for reading too carefully. Thank you, otherwise I wouldn't know it myself. Originally, you said one thing to me, and I thanked you once. But there are too many, so I will open a post to thank you.

It's very well written. I always thought that I didn't like emotional dramas, but you made me understand that what I like is emmm. I understand that delicate emotions are neat and not fragmented or abrupt.

What about the promised update? Why hasn't it been updated yet?

Come back soon for an update. It has been gone for a month.

Write well and don't lose it. Next door, I have lost my life for Changshengxian. Otherwise, I will give up. It's pretty good now.

When did you write about the heroine? I'll read it again

What I hate the most in these Douluo books is not the little Yakuza, but the slave rat, starting from when he blew up Mingdu and turned him into a dog.