All Heavens: Become Invincible from the Martial Spirit

I've read more than half of it, and I personally feel like it's stretching my crotch. To say it is a cool novel is not cool enough. The protagonist is too invincible and a genius. There is no difference between invincibility and genius. If I could rate it, I would give it a 7 out of 10.

I've read it, I don't like it, I personally think it's a bit too much nonsense.

Very few people write about such unpopular worlds as the God of Death. I hope the author can persevere.

​ After reading this book, I had some thoughts, and I had the prototype of a novel in my mind, so I wrote this article. It is recommended to define Wuhun as the concrete and visual manifestation of talent, bloodline, and soul strength. Combined with the solidified witchcraft of the wizard system, wizard apprentices are divided into three levels and nine levels, namely elementary, middle and high, levels one to nine. Each level corresponds to a fixed witchcraft model to form a witchcraft ring surrounding the soul, corresponding to the soul ring of the martial spirit. You can use the rich witchcraft model of the wizard world and the reflection of the martial soul's qualifications to select fixed witchcraft to form a comprehensive witchcraft system. You can also use the wizard's exploratory spirit and the specific practice of witchcraft use to improve the witchcraft model. Later, according to tradition, wizards were divided into three levels and nine levels, namely wizards: first to third levels, great wizards: Morning Star, Bright Moon, and Sun, and legendary wizards: you can think of it yourself. Traveling through all the heavens and realms, start with the martial soul, take the wizard as the path, and follow the path.

The protagonist's martial souls are blood martial souls and bone martial souls. The author's inspiration is limited. What kind of soul skills can you get from this type (mainly the amplification type), or what kind of martial arts, spells, fighting skills, etc. Can you learn? Let's brainstorm. Thank you Chunyang🥺

After roughly looking at it, I feel that the protagonist is more like Tang San than Tang San.

Disadvantages: Outline flow, the outline flow cannot be simpler. The development of the power system only has results but no process. The emotional drama in the harem can only be given a line of words temporarily when cheating is needed. Write a reason related to the harem, emotional drama? There is no emotional drama. After omitting the third chapter, almost all of them are outlines. It doesn't look like writing a novel, but like writing a plan.

Let me comment after reading Chapter 145. For me, it has advantages and disadvantages: Advantages: This book is a book about astronomy Disadvantage 1: There is nothing exciting about reading more than 100 chapters. Even if the protagonist fights with others and the blood flows into rivers, I can't get started, and I can't pretend to be B. New Even after the protagonist of Shoecun (Douluo Dalu) became a god, he didn't know how to let the news out or go out and show off to pretend to be bad, which could help the protagonist better unify the continent. After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist finally became a god and left behind a clone. It was like playing a game and completing tasks. After completing it, you must exit the interface. Disadvantage 2: I want to open a harem but do not do it thoroughly. Many female characters have no role at all. What's more, some female characters suddenly appear next to the protagonist without knowing when they have crossed paths. For example, "Qing Lin and the Little Medical Fairy" never appeared before, but suddenly one day they followed the protagonist. Then the author just said "We have met a long time ago" to fill the gap, but there is no foundation at all. Then there are the candidates for the harem. There are currently only four women around the protagonist (Qing Lin, Little Medical Fairy, Medusa, and Xiao Wu). The others have nothing to do with the protagonist. Hahahahaha, the author even wanted Xiao Wu but not others, such as (Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong, Bo Saixi, Gu Yuena, Bibi Dong's master and apprentice, Ya Fei Fei, Yun Yun, Nalan Yanran, Xiao Xun'er) none of these have been confiscated. Now they have no scenes at all, and some of them have not even appeared once by name. I am really afraid that they will suddenly interact with the protagonist later. After all, this is not the first time the author has written like this. They have not shown their faces at all in the front, but suddenly appear next to the protagonist later. As for readers who want to see the emotional line, there is no need to read it. The few women currently around the protagonist have little role, let alone the others. Disadvantage Three: The protagonist kills without eradicating the root cause. He goes to kill Di Tian and Xiong Jun for the soul ring in Douluo Continent, but ends up letting Di Tian's wife go. He kills all the Silver Dragon King's men, but ends up letting the Silver Dragon King go. These are my feelings after watching it. I do a task here and a task there. I don't feel any enjoyment at all, no matter what aspect.

The more I watch it, the less I want to watch it. The character of the protagonist doesn't suit me, and everything about the power of world correction. Anyway, for someone like me who believes in the butterfly effect, the more I watch it, the more uncomfortable I feel.

It's obviously a reserve food, why are you strengthening her? Are you feeling soft after staying together? The protagonist relents even though he has determined his goal, so I can only say that his mind is not firm. Can't achieve anything big, typical cannon fodder mentality! No, it should be said that the kind of cannon fodder who can't live without a halo, don't tell me anything about the Holy Mother, even the Holy Mother is not soft-hearted after clarifying the goal! You don't think those holy ladies also softened their hearts after clarifying their goals, right? That is kindness before the goal is clear, not kindness after the goal is clear. Also, after it was determined that she was going to hunt down the target, she became the female supporting character and the heroine. All I can say is that you wrote this book and was immediately thrown into the street! Note: As a Douluo fan, there are very few people who fall in love with Xiao Wu, and most of them are just having fun. The few who are childhood sweethearts are pitifully few. You clearly wrote before that you should list it separately, but now that you are like this, all I can say is, don't cause trouble for yourself.

When Tang Hao beat Zhao Wuji, he said that after beating the old, the young came. When Tang Hao was enshrined in the Wuhun Hall, he became a dog with ambitions but not years, and a hundred years without ambitions. Those who bully the weak and fear the strong. Whundian ran away when he was attacking Haotian Sect. With the help of the other three sects and the two empires, I dare to call. Those who bully the small and bully the weak are no different from Tang San.

To be honest, if I hadn't seen names like Peerless Martial God and God of Death, I would have just left Douluo Continent... It is recommended not to write too much about Douluo Continent. To be honest, there are really not many people who come there. They are all here for the old books I got in the past... In fact, many of the old books in the past were good, but they did not catch up with the good times and were stolen. The version is flooded... For example, the God of Death against the Cangtian, the Martial God World of the Cangtian White Crane, the Sword Master of the Sword Traveling Taixu, the Peerless Martial Spirit, the Fighting God World, First Grade Servant, Warcraft Lord, Nine Yin and Nine Yangs, Wu Tomb, Wu Breaks the Universe, Sword Against the World, Cultivators in Another World... Etc. They are all very interesting. During this period, Tudou was still writing about Warcraft Sword Saint and his adventures in other worlds.

Since the protagonist has the luck interception cheat and the heaven travel cheat, the best solution is to go to Wuhun Palace, take out the fairy grass information, lead people to kill Dugu Bo, and abolish the early stage cheat of Xiao Zhan San; report the Hundred Thousand Year Rabbit, and abolish the middle stage cheat of Xiao Zhan San. Xiao Yazi can't get into the two late-stage plug-ins of Poseidon and Shura God with his own qualifications, so the entire main plot will be scrapped and cut off. The protagonist shrinks into the Wuhun Hall and becomes a ten-mile slope sword god. He goes to other worlds to develop quickly. After development, he emerges and wins the upper three sects. The Douluo world ends. As for the problem of not being able to explain the sources of intelligence, it is completely unnecessary, because the protagonist will definitely bring back various miraculous skills and rapidly growing cultivation levels when he returns from other worlds. These can be explained by explaining the sources of intelligence. If no one asks about these, then no one will ask about several sources of intelligence. The author can't write without the original plot line, and I'm afraid he won't be able to write plots in other worlds as well.

After reading it, it was boring. I thought it was written by those old books, but it turns out that I am still wandering around Douluo Continent now. I have become stronger in other worlds faster, but I keep looking for all kinds of nonsense reasons to return to Douluo World. Rather than Zhu Tianwen, I would rather say that I am a Douluo fan wearing the skin of Zhu Tianwen. I clearly know that readers are here for those old books, but they never write the plot of the old books. How can this test the readers' patience?

Can the author make the protagonist more human-like? The last dozen or so pictures of the protagonist give me the feeling that they are a tool to advance the plot. The protagonist has no thoughts and ideas of his own. He breaks through level 50 without getting the soul ring. He doesn't even know how strong he is, so he goes to Shrek and kills Tang Hao without even a plan. It is obvious that Tang Hao is about to die. In order to strengthen Tang San in the future, he forcibly refuses to pursue him. The feeling of the protagonist in these dozen or so pictures is that he is arrogant, arrogant, brainless, and useless.

In the early stage of development, safety is the first priority. You have to choose the path that is safe and profitable. Instead, you follow the original work, put the cart before the horse, and put yourself in danger. An anonymous report in the early stage can cause the whole plot to collapse. The male and female protagonists, Tang San and Xiaogang will not be able to contact each other at all, and they can also test whether the world plot is inevitable. It's all a waste, and of course it doesn't matter if you can't grasp it, but the embarrassing words are too dense, the plot advancement is weak, and it's a headache to watch.

I feel that the protagonist suffers from a common problem among time travellers, and hooks up with Xiao Wu under the nose of Tang Dachui. The faults of the time-travelers, arrogance, self-righteousness, are gradually revealed.

Invincibility is a joke. I dare not seize the opportunity in the world of God of Killing. It is also related to fate. Everything is doomed, so why practice?

The Peerless Martial God My Childhood, Lin Feng😭

What a collection of ancient novels, Wai Ri, the memory of ancient times belongs to 🙂

This book is quite zzzq, so you can read it with confidence. The protagonist's personality is equivalent to an enhanced version of Dou Yi and Tang San, pure and independent. The plot is not well designed, and all the brains are focused on being embarrassing and pleasing some readers. It takes prejudice and embarrassment to the extreme, completely abandoning plot logic and character development. Classics cannot be written apart from the original works, and it is also true that classics have no difficulty and create difficulties on their own. There is no need to make the protagonist look upright. It is normal to have calculations and small thoughts. It is too boring to always cover up with accidents. It is too boring to pretend to be innocent after taking advantage.

Keep it up, and this way you will become the best in the humanities. I hope that I can develop my own martial soul fusion. Bones produce blood, the two are related.

The protagonist looks down on Tang San, but still does Tang San's things...

Holy shit, I thought this book was too bad last year, but the author was resurrected and now he's a eunuch again

Write two chapters and die 🙂

Looking forward to updates

Author, write faster and reduce typos! Blood = The first soul ring you wrote is the burning blood burst. I recommend it ~ 1. Blood replenishment skill - blood sucking, which controls the vitality contained in the enemy's blood to heal yourself. 2. Blood God Son~~You know, it's the swallowing skill! The Blood God Son pounces, and everything the enemy has is yours! 3. You know, copy a lot of blood ghost techniques from Demon Slayer and JoJo! The protagonist's second martial soul, Bones, is recommended for horizontal training + recovery. I can't think of any ideas, they are all about physical fitness.

Update it quickly and customize it for you

Can he still live? It's okay if you can't live to see some closure.

Six people have titles and I am ranked seventh?