Draw Cards and Face the Weirdness

"The missing thunderbolt"

"Original Wildness"

"Thin and hungry"

"The Divided Wolf"

The last time I saw an article with this setting was last time! The setting is very interesting, just depends on the writing style!

It's so confusing, it's not a matter of style or subject matter, but the way it's written. Reality and dreams switch too frequently. The stories are all without beginning or end. Is it too vague from the beginning to the climax and the ending? The pace is too fast and the settings are not provided. Mansu is like a copy, but what is the difference between this copy and others? The protagonist seemed to accept it easily and without any questions. If you have a strong talent, what are the talents of others? Don't talk about it at all. What about the background? The background setting has no meaning at all, and is completely left to the reader's imagination until it appears in the story. The way of writing is really arbitrary, and it's a bit similar to a few esoteric articles I've read. The narrative is also super fragmented, but there has to be a thread to tie the story together, right? For example, the cultists who appear in reality can be the main plot, and then give the protagonist a certain motivation, and then use dreams as the protagonist's means. Now it feels like you are really playing a stand-alone game, giving people a feeling that it has nothing to do with you. Generally speaking, the main line is not clear. The so-called main line is the driving force of the protagonist's activities, overtly or covertly. The current situation is that the protagonist draws cards in class during the day, plays games at night, loses the game, draws cards during the day, and continues to play games at night. All I can say is that it definitely has an audience, and the writing is not bad, but I'm not optimistic about it.

Write in narrative form, don't use mysterious metaphors all the time, it's very difficult to read.

I didn't understand 🙂 I am really old 😢

Why not use COC rules?

Overall it's pretty good, but one update a day... Although the number of words is enough, is it too slow?

The card setting at the beginning is very interesting, now I'm looking forward to reading the main text

I'll keep reading until I collect 300,000 words.

There were so many chapters in the dream that I felt like I couldn't tell the difference between reality and dreams, and it gave me some inexplicable mental pressure. If the author feels the same way, he can add more casual and daily elements.

Does the protagonist have an amnesia seal? Why does it feel like the protagonist doesn't know anything?

Do COC themes use DND rules?