Dark Rise of Beast Control

After reading it, the writing style is very good, and the subject matter is also good. When I first read the two pages, I thought it was a dark film, but there was nothing obviously dark about it. The only poisonous point is to save people. Doing good deeds no matter what the purpose is in the dark flow is the poisonous point.

Readers, if you have any suggestions or opinions, you can feel free to point them out in the comment area. At present, the author has a good mentality and can withstand everyone's criticism and accusations. You can post any advertisements you like to promote books, but I won't delete them and will even close them. So I hope you can support me a lot, thank you.

Although it is a rabbit, it feels roughly like this.

Overall, it's not ugly, nor very good. The author seems to be telling the story very seriously, and the description is also very detailed, but it just feels a bit bland and bland, just like all serious Cthulhu novels. It is not suitable for being made into a web novel. It is too traditional and cannot be read at all.

Is there anyone from Tieba?

I've rewarded you with 5 meters, can you leave a supporting role for me? Name, David Looks like this, gentle uncle: The beast is a muscular lamb, let's call it Baa Baa, the holy shepherd lamb: The skill is the same as the paladin, Holy Light (ಥ㉨ಥ)

I hope he is the real villain mentioned in the introduction, rather than the protagonist who saves the world, takes justice first when encountering injustice, and helps the old lady cross the road. Banmu is not half-hearted and merciless, he is truly ruthless.

White Walker Death

Wandering Mist Spirit [Nature\Thinking Energy]

That's probably it.

Pray to the gods.

So farming, so farming, I can't sleep at night.

How is this book? Does it look good?

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There are long clouds and dark mountains, and the Japanese invaders destroy Beiguan. The bones in all directions are withered, mud and blood, how many children and wives will be saved? The country is destroyed and the mountains and rivers are burning. How can we forget the resentment of millions of people? All bitterness and hatred are difficult. Kill Yama in a hundred battles and return me to this world. The rising sun is shining, the floating clouds are opening, and everyone is happy. Fortunately, I was born in my arms. How many places will I shed tears tonight? The eight deserts and nine states are surrounded by mountains, the four seas and five lakes are turbulent, and the journey is endlessly bitter. But try your best to repay your family and country's wishes.

The red flowers are rustling at the end of the day, and the mountains are wide in a corner of Hanchuan River. The dead sing songs on the road, but they are alone but nowhere. But I am lonely on the bridge, and I meet the wrong person when I leave. Watching the fireworks from across the bank, I forget myself in all my life.

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A gift to the ordinary us.

Possible sources of inspiration

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Okay, okay, I just started watching it. There are too few serious dark streams. Come on.

I feel like Xiao Hei might as well call this rat group "all in one". The main brain is in a single body. Each of them is an extension of the consciousness of this cluster. There is no priority in whether they feel cool or not. The more clusters there are, the stronger the power. The more outstanding the intelligence.

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Why do you feel a little confused?

It is too obscure and difficult to understand. The battle of wits in JOJO can be presented through pictures, but online articles cannot explain a battle in large quantities. Over time, a battle will be skipped, and then the reader will be confused and end up running away. In addition, the protagonist's abilities and beast control are not dazzling enough, and every battle is not fist-to-pound, which is quite difficult to grasp, as a web novel.