After Developing a Villain Heroine, They Came After Her

The direction of the whole book is actually quite good, and the author's writing skills are pretty good, but when I read the latest chapter, the bugs that existed before suddenly became a bit difficult to fix. The author's current ability to control the plot makes me feel very panicked. If this continues, I might end up bleeding all over my face later on. The author has some skills in characterization, but the more I look at the male protagonist now, the more I feel that it is just the author playing with the female protagonist's remote control. Really, otherwise I will completely lose my memory and don't even think about it. If you don't lose your memory, it will show that the male protagonist has not improved in the past few decades. My mind was wandering up and down about the male protagonist. Not to mention, the originally good indifferent character now seems to be more than just a fucking indifferent. He just has no conscience. Why should you be emotional if you have no conscience? This sense of separation makes the male protagonist look a bit disgusting. A single unit, well, no problem, but the problem is that it doesn't work when each unit will be connected in series. It directly turned the male protagonist into a pile. Mo Sanniang is a traditional character that I like very much. The plot is very smooth and the logic is understandable. However, the male protagonist's waste treatment plan to forcibly reduce intelligence and energy is really like forcing a girl to go into the sea. To be honest, the completion of the plots of the first few female protagonists is really good. In Sanniang's case, you force her to become a prostitute, so that the male protagonist can't hold it back and use it as an excuse to seal her heart with cement and officially become a dog, right? You obviously have the ability to push the plot based on the characters, but you are just trying to save the trouble and just force it. It's really uncomfortable. Isn't it going to be the next step where the mistress cuts off the knife, the father-in-law cuts off the original wife with great righteousness, the protagonist takes the knife and goes offline, and the original wife goes crazy. Author, please stop and add two more chapters to get through this plot quickly, otherwise you will be scolded.

It's really well written. Although it's also a refreshing article, it's refreshing and refreshing. It's the most interesting book I've seen recently.

From what I've seen so far, it's the top one in this genre that I've seen. It's so good that I love to read it. The author should update it soon 😍

In fact, the narrative technique at the beginning is quite attractive. Shura Field runs through the memories of past lives. I personally feel that I have a desire to explore. Sanniang is not written badly, but the plot is a bit delayed. I almost forgot that there are other female protagonists. That is to say, there are too many scenes. For those who like other characters or want to know the characters you haven't finished writing, Sanniang does describe too much here, and the protagonist's personality has indeed changed a lot. The biggest reason is that your article is too long (I have no objection to the Minotaur). The key is that the other characters were not released before they were released, and the previous articles were well-intentioned but led to the darkening of the heroine, and finally learned the truth and crossed the world wall to find the protagonist. This article can be said to be off-topic if compared to the previous ones. Also, I said it for so long! ! ! When will today's chapter be released? ! ! ,

I was deceived by a scumbag and became penniless. Now I am divorced and have two children. My spirit has been hit. Now my mental state is worrying. After reading your article, I feel that my youth is back and my mental state is much better. I hope you can update it soon. This is saving my life.

Chapter 39 is a whole chapter about the shock of the evil cultivator. Everyone was shocked. The protagonist walked a few steps past and resisted the bite on his foot. Everyone was shocked for a whole chapter 🙂

If it hadn't been updated, anyone who is more than an apprentice would be a clown Me too 😆😆😆

There are still 6 stories in Ninth Life. I originally thought that the rest of the story would be a cookie-cutter master-student relationship. The third generation of siblings kept me awake at night. If the subsequent 6 stories maintain this quality, that would be great.

I thought it was a grinding plot. When I saw the protagonist meeting the first heroine, I could see that the heroine had failed, and I was thinking about how the author would make it up. I really didn't expect it. I directly tied up the protagonist and took advantage of him. It was really refreshing.

It looks like a new book is coming again. I already reminded you when I opened the book that I have already ordered it. Xswl, if anyone reads this eunuch's book in the future, I will laugh at him forever 🤣

It's fun, so fun. The new book is so much fun. Originally, this book was so long that I thought I could read it again after your new book was finished, but your sudden outburst made me very happy 🤭🤭🤭🤭

Well...😶I did hear a lot of voices👂🏻 Some voices were special very special (choked) sharp😢 Then they reduced my book from Saving Desperate Girls to useless (choked)😭 Many people said that I think I am very arrogant as an author😤 I can't listen to everyone's voices, In fact, I am like everyone else, I am also a book lover, What everyone feels (choking) I feel it too😭 It's just for me🧐 I hear too many voices🤯👂🏻 I need to calm down and figure out🤔 Which of them are the real voices from all the book lovers😭

Nanbeng, I just said that after almost two months of stocking up, I only updated about 40 chapters. I originally wanted to fatten them up before slaughtering them, but I came back to see the eunuch of TM 😅

I said that the book was not well written. I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning, but I was still able to push it forward. It turned out that this book had accumulated a foundation. The first part of this book is quite good, and I keep following it. The second part of the Dragon Girl chapter is just like a lump of stone. I gave up after reading it twice. If I hadn't seen a lot of people talking about the unnatural operation of your new book in other books, it turned out to be written by you, a rotten eunuch. No wonder the rhythm is out in the mid-term. Dogs can't change their eating habits. This is true.

First of all: I have read the update, and my evaluation is all based on my first impression after reading it. It is purely a personal opinion, and there will most likely be errors and omissions in the details. The preface does not match the afterword, it is pure emotional output. Everyone is welcome to refute 😌 The author's short stories in the first and second volumes can be said to be very good at pretentiousness and emotional control, but after the third volume, it feels a bit boring inexplicably. My feeling about the third volume is that there is a separation between the two female protagonists and the separation between the male protagonist and the first two volumes. First comes the brother and sister. The emotional foreshadowing of the sister and brother is only in the part of escaping from famine. The feeling of dependence on each other is not written. Instead, there is only a strange and twisted feeling and possessiveness. The unreasonable possessiveness runs through all the scenes of Sanniang in the third volume. This kind of unreasonable character is really very easy to make people have high blood pressure. In this process, the male protagonist highlighted a blind accommodation, he had to be good to her unconditionally, but he didn't know why he was good to her unconditionally. The feeling of mutual dependence that was missing before made their emotions seem to be a setting added by the author. They did not figure out why she was a female villain, and the system did not appear a few times. It felt like the male protagonist was like an aboriginal child of this aspect, especially middle-aged and impulsive. But after the first two volumes (especially the performance of the male protagonist as a priest), my impression of him was that of a person who can restrain his emotions through a mission mentality. This led me to feel that his personality was a bit broken when I watched him pay for love in his third life. Then there is the enchantress. The enchantress gives people the feeling that she is getting along with the male protagonist inexplicably. She is interested in sex (qualification), she is entangled with the male protagonist, and she is dedicated to the male protagonist. Then the attitude of the male protagonist is passive enjoyment, and then "sister, sister". Personally, I think the enchantress is completely separate and redundant to the main plot of the third volume, and this person can be completely eliminated. The other heroine who is just giving everything in her face only highlights the sparseness of Sanniang's characterization. As for Sanniang's ultimate identity as the chosen villain, whatever is written in the outline is written in the text, and it is mentioned at the end of the volume. It ends like this after the long third volume. It is neither bitter nor shocking. It is a bit rushed. It also gives the male protagonist the choice to erase his memory and choose the least compelling reason. I think it is Ying Yi, but it is a matter of opinion. What if other book lovers just like this? A world contains two or three, and there are more than a dozen female characters in the back. I hope the author can stay steady🙏🏻

No need to wait, it's been determined that you have no money, so come back and write two circles of money to continue.

This makes me laugh so much. Brother, how did you manage to have the same rhythm in both books?😁😁😁

You can't even understand the ban. Have you forgotten that you still have a book? Did you also cut off the memory of writing this book when you were still a eunuch?

Only the author of this book can stop updating the book that book friends are most looking forward to and start a new one...

After reading the new book, the rhythm was fine, but when I clicked on it, it turned out to be the eunuch I had chased before. All the previous book club groups were disbanded, and it was invincible. What else can a person like you do besides feed people? My suggestion is purple sand

What a great book. I read it here and there with a hammer and a hammer. I didn't know if I should pursue it or not. I stopped chasing after it. I cheated on myself from time to time. Does the author know how much monthly ticket I will give you?

I just post this to commemorate it, and I hope I can update it again one day.

I finished the book secretly. This kind of author never releases any updates. I wish you will enter the palace in real life and open a new book.

Laughing to death🤣👉Book friends log out and reward 10,000 The cyber stain has escaped

🙂 What does the author think? If the writing style is good and the character is good, it will be a guaranteed success. Those who are in the same genre as you but whose writing skills are not as good as yours are all in the top tens of monthly votes.

Author, I have finished reading your book. I forgot how many times I cried. I really like it. I hope to see the follow-up in my lifetime😭

This book is really good, why do you want to stop updating it 😭

This book is similar to one of the best of the year on Mao. Com😏😏

It is indeed a sit-up. Looking at the title, does the author want to end it?

I feel like it's been ruined by the present world. Or maybe the present world takes up too much space. The dungeon story is quite good. If I finish all the dungeons and then write about the present world, the pace will be better. If you open a new pit, please call me?