Idly Cultivating Immortality in a Chaotic Martial World

I suggest modifying the requirements for future cultivation techniques. Currently, leveling up requires defeating three monsters of the same level, but as higher-level players become increasingly rare, isn't this clearly a way to get stuck at a certain level? Wouldn't it be better to require some materials, or simply make the requirements achievable directly in the game?

Using vulgar language like "fuck, fuck" all the time is something some truly talented writers would never even think of.

Even in chaotic times, he remained so kind.

The protagonist isn't even cultivating immortality; he's only at the Foundation Establishment stage, yet he has the power to choose any law in the world. He seems even more powerful than the Immortal Emperors in other novels. It's more like an immortal cultivating for him. 🤓

There shouldn't be too many realms. The seventh level of martial arts has already appeared in just a few chapters, and there are even hints of the tenth. Dozens of realms would be confusing.

It's all over the place, a chaotic mess of power dynamics and plot twists.

Stop writing books, go find a factory to tighten screws! You'll write one book and then abandon it.

The appearance of sacred or divine bodies in the world of martial arts and chivalry seems rather awkward.

It's written like a diary entry, or rather, it's not even as good as a diary entry. It's far worse than the previous book.

After reading ten chapters, the first interesting point is: leveling up requires killing someone with a higher cultivation level than yourself. It's like how I need to deposit 100 million in the bank first in order to earn 3 million a year.