Invincible to the Heavens Starting from the Demi-Humans

Also, let me remind the author. You write that Xiao Hei has no fighting ability because the protagonist stretches his hips too much. Then the next step should be for the protagonist to realize the problem and work hard to improve himself! But if you let the protagonist continue to mess up, then why did you write it or even raise this question repeatedly? Disregarding readers? Even if you want the protagonist to be severely beaten, you can't hint like this, right? This kind of operation can only poison readers, but it cannot increase the number of readers... What's more, I don't see the author's intention of wanting the protagonist to be beaten severely.

If you have demi-human abilities, why not start from a low-level world of martial arts? Immortality is an absolute advantage. You can infinitely try and make mistakes on the meridians, and finally optimize your own strongest skills. It is not a problem! And you are not afraid of the side effects of the technique. Anyway, you can refresh your status once you die. How great! The most important thing is that there are no meridians in martial arts skills that run to the brain, but the protagonist is different. Even if he gets a headshot, he can try again infinitely. Finally, he tries out the internal skills that train the brain. Even if the body exercises train the brain and internal organs, it is not a problem, and there will be no shortcomings later. Brain exercise may be able to awaken telekinesis, and it may also be able to extend perceptions similar to divine consciousness. In short, the world on the cultivation side is very suitable for demi-humans!

What kind of garbage is this written? I always feel a sense of frustration when I read it. There are plug-ins, and I don't do any big things that go against my will, or do something big. It completely follows the original plot, and there is no originality at all. The protagonist looks like a fool and a tool.

The author listens to my advice, you, the protagonist, must change! The protagonist's performance is too awkward and has no personal charm at all. To attract readers depends entirely on animation. If what you wrote happened to be my favorite anime, I wouldn't beep at all and would delete it directly. The whole Gundam? What else can that thing do besides show the protagonist's crotch stretching? Scrap it as soon as possible... Either this book is about the protagonist's transformation after being severely beaten and begins to grow, or else it is abandoned and rewritten. If the protagonist is not attractive, unless you write wonderfully later, the book will have no hope... I personally hope that the author will continue writing for the time being, but this protagonist is too stretched. Moreover, the Gundam's combat power is a bit low, and I feel that the protagonist's combat power span is too large. I want to know what the author plans to write about the world behind? And I think the system should give talents and abilities, bloodline, and imperial gear. I'm really speechless. Teigu is something that the protagonist has to collect by himself. It's a big deal if it's limited. What's so good about the Protector of the Nation? Isn't it good for you to give a "cow, horse and beast" ability? For example, the ability of the oxen beast "Tylande" (the material of the demon-haunted Tei Gear), isn't it awesome?

I originally thought it was the type that would bleed like rivers of blood with the help of demi-human abilities, but in the end, I looked forward and backward, and was disappointed.

It's too bland and cumbersome, and it feels like it has no beginning or end. If it doesn't matter whether it ruins the plot or goes through it smoothly, then what's the point of the protagonist?

Come on, there are too few demihuman fanfics.

Anyway, if you are not afraid of death, go to Jojo to get an arrow and evolve Xiao Hei into a substitute 🤓

Go directly to the full-time hunter and develop the telekinesis ability to attack at the cost of your own life. Even the ant king has to kneel down. Look for the substitute arrows and keep trying them on yourself. The substitute will always be awakened Then go to Stone Sea to steal the priest's CD. It is easy to get it in the warehouse under the tractor. If you get all these and include the black ghost, you can have three substitutes at the same time

Since it was put on the shelves, would you like to see what Gouba stuff you have written about? How many chapters have you written in Collecting Eight Fangs? What you spend money on is how good you are at word count. Could you please use some snacks? I regard you as the author, do you regard me as myself? Chinese chives?

I really couldn't read it, I felt like the main character's logical skills were lower than most readers. I couldn't take on the role of the protagonist even if I took off my brain.

I don't understand, why do you always pretend to be a prophet 🤔

I don't know why the system asked you to change, but if you don't make some adjustments, you will still deal with Sato like in the original drama, which is useless. It's not like your hometown in childhood. Following the original show, it really doesn't make sense at all. FL has a book about demi-humans. Even though it's a eunuch, it feels a lot more refreshing to follow Sato.

The immortality of demi-humans is the beginning of your slutty routine. Think about Mr. Sato, an ordinary person can play so much, why are you so far away? Mr. Sato is suitable to be a time traveler, that kind of game world, with the mentality of having fun.

This book has already been completed, and there is no need to waste time for those who come later. Zhanchi failed very badly in writing it. He is already immortal. He does not write about strengthening himself in other worlds, about collecting imperial tools, and that each one has to die several times before it can be used. I don't understand why, so I ran away.

The first world is okay and the speed is okay. The second world is too ink-stained and it is not finished yet. The rhythm is too fragmented. In the second world, the Crimson Eyes, there is a divine machine to protect the country at the beginning, but it can be inked till now I think the biggest reason for this is because of the sense of expectation. Every time you go to a new world, you can get a new ability. This is a very important reason. As a result, I got stuck when I got to the second world. I haven't gone to the third world yet But the writing is okay. I just think it's too ink-stained and I can't stand it.

If you don't write an Asian protagonist as a fun person, you should write it as a joke.

Why does such a strong golden finger look so plain and flowing?

Isn't the best way to control a demi-human something like cutting off the front lobe of his brain, and just make him a fool?

What are some Asian fan fiction? Any website will do