I Have Become an Immortal, You Want to Take Me to Buddhism?

Is the author here? I hope you have some common sense when it comes to writing. The provincial examination tests people, and it takes place in the provincial capital. Those who will take the exam are tributes, and they are in the capital (or the royal capital as you wrote). Please start revising it from chapter 10 onwards! There's nothing wrong with you writing for the imperial examination, but don't make people laugh

In fact, Xiao Qing is not called Xiao Qing, but Qing Qing, not a green snake but a green fish. He is not unruly and unreasonable but considerate. Xu Xian's name is not Xu Xian but Xu Xuan. Xu Xian's sister and brother-in-law are not so kind to Xu Xian but dislike Xu Xuan. The white lady is not in love with Xu Xuxian, but she covets Xu Xuan's stunning appearance. The White Snake is not a rich girl but a succubus who steals to please Xu Xuan. Xu Xuan is greedy for the beauty and wealth of the White Snake rather than the person. When Xu Xuan learns that the White Snake is a female snake demon, he immediately abandons her. Fahai was wronged, not as a villain who broke up the couple, but as a warning to mentors like Xu Xuan who were addicted to illusions and glitz. Feng Menglong writes about naked human nature, which is different from Feng Menglong's TV version of White Snake in 1992, so it is called "The New Legend of White Snake", which is also a well-known fan adaptation now.

The best thing about Xu Xian is the Xu Xianzhi I watched that year

Why do you still care about fame in the world even after you have retired from immortality?

How to say it! The beginning is still very good, and it makes people want to read it again, but the content is a bit lacking and the updates are a bit lacking.

Brother, the two saints of Buddhism will not shake the green lotus. Even if you become an immortal, I should ferry you or you, unless you become a quasi-sage.

A piece of history is very unreasonable

At this beginning, I really have no desire to continue watching, because after traveling through time, Xu Xian has been running to the West Lake since he was a child to wait? Bai Suzhen went to Xu Xian to repay her kindness. Didn't she meet him by chance?

First, only the emperor can confer gods. In ancient times, the emperor was not only a secular leader. In religion, the emperor is equal to the supreme god. The emperor is ordered by heaven. This heaven is called Tao by Taoists, Haotian by Confucianists, Laotian Ye by the folk, Jade Emperor and so on. Only gods who have been consecrated by the emperor are eligible to enjoy folk incense sacrifices. Those who have not been consecrated by the emperor are demons and ghosts. The sacrifices are called obscene sacrifices and are illegal. Second, about animals asking for seals. This primitive belief looks like an alien species at first glance. We do not have the custom of worshiping animals in our country. When Liu Bang saw the big snake blocking his way, he not only burned incense and knelt down to worship, but also drew his sword and cut it. We have written about the curative effects of all kinds of strange creatures in the Classic of Mountains and Seas. Is it delicious? How to eat it? What will happen if you eat it? So when did this primitive religion come in? Qing Dynasty. Before entering the customs, it would not be an exaggeration to say that they are savages. What sophisticated religious system can they develop? The belief is shamanism brought directly to the grasslands. As we all know, whenever a system is moved into China, it will be assimilated into our shape. After shamanism was assimilated, it formed the "Chu Ma" and "Tiao Da Shen" in Northeast China today. Legend has it that during the Qianlong period, Emperor Qianlong went to Changbai Mountain to worship his ancestors. Two foxes led the way. When he went to bed at night, he dreamed of the two foxes begging him to give him a title. These two foxes are Mr. Hu Santai and Mrs. Hu Santai of Dongbei Xin. As for the Huangpizi who sought out ordinary people for a title, they first came from the Tianya community. It was made up by a horror novelist.

The writing is a bit long-winded, the plot is dragging, and it's very tiring to read.

Change the title of the book. . . The eldest disciple and the deputy leader can transform into Buddhas, so what are immortals?

More than 50 chapters in, White Snake hasn't come out yet, the heroine, Qingmei, the maid?

I haven't read it yet. Does the synopsis mean that Xu Xian wants to open a harem?

Occupy a building and be reborn: Starting from snatching the fate of immortality, the number of words has reached 120,000, and it is time to start killing. The book contains a catalog of fortune and destruction, using the fairy gourd as a reference, and drawing on the settings of the Taoist fruit, which is full of fairy spirit.

Several oirans joined the team inexplicably without any names. The innocent little virgin immediately turned into a hungry stallion.

Wasn't Kaifeng the capital of the Song Dynasty? How did it become Chang'an?

Is this a female channel mixed into a male channel? ?

In this society, when did eating soft food become a natural and beautiful wish?

One sentence is followed by long paragraphs of narration that do not advance the plot. This is my deepest impression of this book. The description of the interaction between the characters is as ordinary as eating and drinking, and it cannot arouse people's emotions at all. I was defeated before the White Snake appeared.

A character appears who is a beautiful woman, and they all have a crush on the protagonist. One or two is okay, but is it too much to say that the characters in your protagonist camp are all stunning beauties?

This book, if it doesn't hit the mark, is only covered by old silk's ink.

This description of the fight is the same as if there was no fight.

After reading the first chapter, I was defeated. It was me who didn't deserve it.

The beautiful scenery of the West Lake is in March, and the spring rain is like wine and willows are like smoke! !

It feels like Tang Xin is seeking scriptures. Someone is always protecting you both openly and secretly.

After it was put on the shelves, it was completely messed up, everything was included, such as Yu Xuanji, Nie Xiaoqian, Centipede Jing, Zhen Ji, etc., And the character creation was also a mess. Fahai's hatred of evil became that as long as Buddhism did it, everything was good, even if he knew that Centipede Jing was stealing the country's destiny and causing great harm to others. Bai Suzhen's character is also a bit ridiculous. Do you think Bai Suzhen would say "good morning" to you when she wakes up in the morning? Is this the way modern people would say hello?

Why are you just thinking about a fairy marrying you? ?

I can't just tell you about the website. When I open it, it's garbled. I've deleted it.

I haven't finished it yet, and I didn't expect you to finish it again. I also read your book at the beginning. To be honest, when I was following it, I was waiting for the scene where the protagonist waits for the White Snake by the West Lake. As a result, Xiao Qing came out for a long time, but the White Snake still couldn't come out. Finally, she finally came out, but the famous scene was gone again. I just created a meeting scene by myself, which felt boring. I still like to read the urban rebirth genre you write, but it seems that this genre is not popular now, and you probably won't make any money writing it.