When I Was Taking My Name on the Gold Medal List, I Discovered That My Wife Was the Three Holy Mothers.

It's a pretty good novel. Please update it.

I feel that the plot of immortal love is simply nonsense. If it is not calculated by a more powerful existence, this kind of immortal love is simply nonsense. Think about what is an immortal and what is a mortal. Whether it is cultivating immortals or practicing martial arts, the first step is to temper the body and temper the poisonous gases, bacteria, viruses, inorganic substances, etc. The immortal body is the one who transcends the tribulation and ascends, so it is funny to think about immortal love. If you were an immortal, you would focus your magic power on a mortal body, and then it would be densely packed with microorganisms and viruses. Think about how it would feel. So these novels about immortal love plots are like the author's daydreams. It's funny. Some immortals in the world with incomplete rules are detached. With the eyes of an immortal, mortals will be wiped out, and they can still fall in love. It's funny.

I remember that the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl were like this too. She could descend to earth and take a bath, but she fell in love with a gangster who peeked into the bath and stole her own clothes. Then she got married and had children. This kind of logic is also advanced even now.

... The protagonist is clearly a scumbag, and his character is average and shameless.

Yang Chan is just a concubine, Liu Yanchang has a wife

Yang Tianyou and Yao Ji should be before the Shang Dynasty, because the Erlang God Yang Jian participated in the canonization of gods. In the Lotus Lantern, when Agarwood becomes a disciple of Sun Wukong, Sun Wukong has already fought and defeated the Buddha, so it means that he has finished his Journey to the West to obtain scriptures, which should be the time period after Li Shimin's death, so the protagonist meets the Three Holy Mothers when Li Shimin is still alive. It should be the correct time period.

Um, is this a collapse? A saint is measured in tons, a great saint is measured in pounds. Are they so worthless?

The basis of immortal love is that immortals have to endure the brains of mortals, which are not much smarter than monkeys. Immortals have to endure the mites they see on mortal faces every day, the bacteria on their bodies, and other filth that mortals cannot see. When they kiss, they have to endure the food residue in their saliva. , Especially it can be clearly seen that breathing has to endure all kinds of smells smelled by the extraordinary sense of smell, especially the smell of sweat. Therefore, there are always villains who want to clean the world, but they are so disgusted that they collapse. Therefore, immortals have to live in the heaven, or hide in the mountains and forests without seeing anyone.

In less than two hundred chapters, it's the so-called Dao Sage. How do you write about the subsequent realm? What should we learn, Hunyuan Jinxian, Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian, Hunyuan Taiji Luo Jinxian, Hunyuan Wuji Luo Jinxian, Hunyuan xxxxxian, and so on?

After this book collapsed, the author can consider a new book, and new readers don't have to fall into the trap.

Has this power system collapsed? When did the protagonist become a quasi-saint? Why is it that a random character comes later and is a quasi-sage? This quasi-sage is too worthless.

This is a low-profile version of Journey to the West. The protagonist becomes an immortal soon after becoming a quasi-saint.

According to book friends, if the Three Holy Mothers are true immortals, their energy level must be very high. Mortals cannot look directly at it. For example, how can the sun descend to earth?

My own thoughts, don't criticize if you don't like it: To be honest, your book has a single female protagonist from the beginning. After all, from the description at the beginning, I thought it was a single female protagonist. From the appearance of Zheng Guanyin to multiple female protagonists, I feel that some readers have been lost. I think the author should restrain it. A few more female protagonists are enough. This trend cannot continue to dozens.

The taste of the novel is too strong, so I suggest you read it without thinking.

The Witch King is so disgusting, write him to death. The Witch King in Sword of Immortals deserves to be killed more than Baiyue.

When I saw the title of your book, I just wanted to laugh. Can an ordinary person like you break that membrane?

My wife was pinned down at the foot of the mountain, and in the blink of an eye she fell in love with another woman 🤭

A champion can only entrust a small county magistrate🤣👍

See Chapter Seventeen,. Then I thought of a plot: Wasn't the Three Holy Mothers suppressed? I am not a demigod, agarwood, but an ordinary person. Then in order to save the Three Holy Mothers, I overthrow the imperial court, become the emperor myself, and unify the human race, then I will be the human emperor. Develop science and technology, grow mushrooms, engage in aerospace, and build spaceships. With good fortune and merit as a spear, in the name of the Human Emperor, I asked Heaven to release the Three Holy Mothers immediately. Three emperors of heaven, earth and man, the Jade Emperor and I are on the same level! The saint is outside, and under the Jade Emperor, all the immortals and gods will kneel down when they see me! "Now that I have seen the Human Emperor, I still don't kneel down and worship!" How about it, does it feel better? Luck + technology system = the emperor saves his wife.

Just the title of the book, Dissuade, the protagonist is most likely a chess piece, I don't believe that gods will fall in love with an ordinary person, you can either force the setting so that you can still read it, otherwise, it will be awkward to read.

I found that Heaven seems to be becoming more and more humane. In the beginning, Yang Jian's father and brother were killed directly. Later, whether it was the Third Holy Mother or the Seventh Princess, Heaven would directly take the woman back to punish them, and did not attack the man. Liu Yanchang, you can say that Yang Jian let him go on purpose, but what about Dong Yong? Including the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, they were also allowed to meet once a year.

If it is well written, everyone is the protagonist; if it is poorly written, the protagonist will be disliked by the readers.

I like Lin Qing'er and Cai Die in The First World of Fairy Sword, and I only like Zixuan and Nightshade Nightshade in The Third World of Fairy Sword.

Everything else is fine, I really like this subject matter, but there are no descriptions of skills, fighting, and realms, which affects the reading experience.

Would the title "Three Saints Princess" or "Three Saints Empress" be better?

😰 I want to raise books (skip New World Zombies) The gap is too big and boring

Kuaicanwen

You don't have to force the position of character sentences a dozen sentences in advance. Put it where it should appear, and you will find that reading becomes smoother. More than a dozen sentences in advance does not increase the pleasure of reading at all, but it causes serious reading difficulties. Please focus on the reading experience and listening experience, and put aside the strange narrative methods.

Is there any spirit?