Journey to the West: Reincarnation of Canopy

After reading the first chapter, there are no other questions, just one. In a world with reincarnation, a disciple of the Great Master Xuandu of the Human Religion cannot return to the Human Religion because he is reincarnated as a pig. Not to mention reincarnation, the person in the Human Religion should refer to sentient beings. The religion of a clan cannot be said to be taught by a saint. It is too narrow, not to mention that it has no memory. With the pattern of modern people, can it really achieve anything? Then there is the Pure Altar Messenger, this is pure oil and water. All living beings believe in him and pass it through his hands first, and the false incense is passed on. These offerings and fruits are all good things. In addition, the pig head is one of the three animals. It is a natural shortcut to the Shinto. Since everything is planned to be sewn, why not open up some patterns?

It is outrageous to want a wild boar family to practice cultivation. If this is the case, does that mean we have to establish a wild boar family? Wild boars have one or two babies a year and can live between 20 and 50 years. How many wild fathers do you want to recognize? How many brothers do you recognize? Just awesome

You are so verbose😯, chapter after chapter is about introducing this and that.

In reality, one pound is 500 grams, while in the book, one pound is 250 grams. Author, what is the meaning of this sentence? Are you a fast food writer who wants to redefine the unit of mass?

When I saw the rabbit Guan Guan, I wasn't in the mood to watch it. I didn't like this original character. The second sister without eggs was pretty.

Marshal Tianpeng is the first general under Arctic Ziwei Emperor and the leader of the Four Arctic Saints. Zhenwu has to stand back a little, and he can't make a living wherever he goes, for fear that others won't accept his teachings. Also, the Canopy Technique is the most lethal and powerful spell in Taoism. Just practice your own Canopy Technique. Do you need to learn anything else?

Yes, but don't pay too much attention to feelings. This is Journey to the West, and feelings are only part of the story and cannot be the main line. Strength must be brought up as soon as possible.

I can't figure out why in the world of mythology, dynasties are so important to history

There are a lot of common-sense things, and the author's information is a bit scanty. I feel that there is no relatively detailed outline. The outline should be about 20,000 to 40,000 words. The writing is okay. I should have written short stories before and have a foundation.

The second senior brother is also miserable, even in the prehistoric period, he is rarely given good treatment. Thinking of the high-end second brother I have seen before, the first glutton in the world turned into Pangu's mouth, the Taoist hymn version of Tianpeng Zhenjun that even the Holy Mother is afraid of, the later three corpses beheaded to realize Pangu's dream and Monkey Brother's heart and heart are one, and the low-end version of Haotian God created by King Swallowing Jing De Shi is easy to do. I can be regarded as the most domineering second brother I have ever seen.

I am really speechless when I see that I want the Wild Boar family to practice cultivation.

The reason why the book is not popular is that the author adds too much, deviates too much from the original work, and makes too many messy things.

Why do you feel that at this pace, you won't be able to write a million words until Journey to the West?

Why did you delete so many?

The pace is too slow, and there is no focus, and there is no climax. It is written like this when it is released, basically it can only be said goodbye.

Just practice, just practice, what the hell is holding a maid in your arms every day? This explanation is so long-winded and watery.