Reborn Canopy: Planning a Journey to the West

Can those who write about Journey to the West stop equating it with the earth? Pangu created the world and the sky is round, but your earth🌍 has a hammer relationship with them? The earth is considered affected if it reaches the top of the sky, and it is considered one of the small worlds in the heavens! The most annoying thing is that two thousand years will be the end of the Dharma era. Time and space are different. Is two thousand years a long time? Calculating one day in the sky and one year on the earth, only more than two hundred days have passed in heaven. If the Jade Emperor and the Queen Mother want to give birth to a little fairy again, it will not be enough, right? Then you told me that the Age of Dharma Ending has come after more than two hundred days, and that the flat Earthly Immortal World has turned into a ball? It's still a smaller version! ! !

The plot is a bit too deliberate, whether it's staying in Yunzhan Cave or dealing with that nest of vixens. Moreover, the protagonist is really not a good person and has a bad character. There is a modern sense of arrogance in knowing the plot. Isn't it time to be obscene and developed?

Am I looking at the animal world?

Chang'e is not the lunar star. ‌ Taiyin Xingjun, also known as Taiyin Zhenren, Taiyin Yuanjun, Taiyin Empress, etc., Is the moon god in Chinese Taoist mythology. Its full name is "Taiyin Emperor, Huanghua Suyao Yuanjing, the Queen of the Moon Palace of the Shangqing Dynasty". She dominates the movement and changes of the moon, and is in charge of yin, cold, water, fertility and other things. She lives in Guanghan Palace and leads many moon palace fairies, such as Su'e, Nishang, Jade Rabbit, etc. Chang'e is a woman in ancient Chinese mythology whose original name was Heng'e. She changed her name to Chang'e to avoid the taboo of Emperor Wen of Han Dynasty. She secretly ate the elixir and soared to the Moon Palace and became a fairy in the Moon Palace. Although Chang'e and Taiyin Xingjun are both associated with the moon, they have different identities and responsibilities in myths and legends.

You wild boar spirit of the mountain, don't touch the True Monarch Tianpeng in Taoist mythology.

Your plot is basically a TV series + starting point. It is patchworked together and there are frequent loopholes in the system. It has names, plans and layouts. It is not on the same channel at all.

I generally don't read books about masters who seize bodies. Isn't it funny that you, a mere mortal, want to seize the bodies of those great masters who possess both life and soul?

The writing is getting more and more nonsense. When I wrote about Journey to the West, I wrote about Journey to the West, and when I wrote about The Great Desolation, I wrote about The Great Desolation. Now I write about unclear primary and secondary lines, making micron and nano runes, being the king of Huaguo Mountain, and performing surgery on a six-eared macaque. I didn't mention whether the big boss behind Journey to the West would allow this, nor did I mention conspiracy theories. It's just such a wild plot. It's getting more and more nonsense. Why don't you just build an atomic bomb?

Journey to the West and Prehistoric World are not the same world at all. Forcibly merging two worlds with different logics, there are contradictions everywhere and it is uncomfortable to watch.

Journey to the West dates back two thousand years. Tianpeng became an immortal during the Spring and Autumn Period, playing a house version of Journey to the West.

Either don't write about the earth. If you must write about the earth, you can write about the fragments of the ancient world that were lost to the end of the future because the battle between the saints shattered the heaven and the earth. When the protagonist becomes a great Luo, the consequences will be the causes. This also explains the origin of many myths and stories on the earth.

Wearing a Journey to the West skin, writing about the animal world

Zhu Bajie, or Marshal Tianpeng, is of a very high standard. The full name is "The Patriarch of the Nine Heavens, the Father of the Five Directions, the General of the Five Directions, the General of the Arctic Zuoyuan, the Grand Marshal Tianpeng Zhenjun", or the Supreme Commander of the Arctic Tianpeng for short, ranked first among the Four Arctic Saints of Taoism. Taoist Protector God-Tianpeng (remember there is the Tianpeng Divine Curse) In addition, according to the Taoist classic "Tao Fa Huiyuan", Marshal Tianpeng is the incarnation of the Beidou Pojun Star, and his rank belongs to the Sixth Division and Seventh Yuan (Southern Six Stars and Big Dipper Seven Stars). He is only under the Five Fangs and Five Elders, and his status is very high. Assume that if the official positions in heaven have grades, the three pure and four imperial officials are super-grade leaders, and the five elders and five directions are first-grade gods, then Marshal Tianpeng is a second-grade great god.

The protagonist casually passed the Golden Light Curse of the Taoist Sect to Sister Mao. If you ask the higher-ups to see you, you are the one who deserves the calamity. Naturally, there will be immortals and gods in the sky looking at you. The human sect itself has few disciples. If the saints don't look at you, the master will also look at you.

Rather than looking at the catalog, it is better to write a biography of Tianpeng, which is closer to the Tianpeng True Monarch in Taoist mythology. The timeline is arranged in the era of various schools of thought. At that time, I happened to be enlightened and became a disciple of the Human Cult. Before the journey to the west, the plot was arranged according to the divine responsibilities of Lord Tianpeng. When he was enlightened, a route was divided to follow the plot of the journey to the west. The clone of Zhu Bajie was arranged. Like the way you write now, the monkeys are all under the Five Elements Mountain, and all the gods and Buddhas have arranged to travel to the west. If you run around at this time, especially when you go to the Flower and Fruit Mountain, what you write is just a mess.

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This is definitely written by a newbie. Big start. Seize the body? Canopy, what kind of golden finger helped you win the body? It's more exaggerated than if you acquired a listed company.

So when I was fighting the nine-headed worm, I looked for Mo Ao. The younger generation are too proud and arrogant to be of any use

I took a quick look and found that I was focusing on farming and upgrading in the early stage... It was different from what I expected from the title of the introduction.

It's not like he traveled through time and became a mortal demon without heels. He's too licking a monkey. Marshal Tianpeng himself isn't that bad either?

It's 270,000 words, why isn't it on the shelves yet?