The Glory of Noxus

I read a few more chapters, and it's so inconsistent. Every time I write about this talent, Nanming Lihuo, etc., I still have to say a few sentences in classical Chinese. If I'm not my buddy, what on earth are you writing about? If you write about a phoenix or a phoenix, I will recognize it. Why do you have to write about a suzaku? Don't you make a play yourself? Alliance is a Western fantasy setting.

You can definitely go from weak to strong. For example, in the early stage, didn't the protagonist hunt a pig with the team? You can get a pig talent Talent: pig, constitution +1, strength +0.5, Health value increased slightly. (Or Ni Kai, which improves armor toughness) After that, there are wolves, tigers, and dragons, right? Give me Suzaku at the beginning. You said that if you make it stronger, you will be invincible in the early stage. If you make it weak, you will not be able to stand up to Suzaku's B character, which is really a failure. The writing is pretty good, but the hang-up is too weird, and it's too cheap. Suzaku's awesome talent can be unleashed in just ten essences. In the League of Legends world view, nb's magic equipment is very rare, but there are many ordinary and weaker ones.

Not bad, not bad, extremely enjoyable, the writing is very good, and the plot so far is also fascinating. I have read a lot of 101 fandoms, and this book gave me the feeling of entering an epic! Hurry up and write quickly, monthly tickets will be given to you. I am curious about the protagonist's later development path. To be honest, I hope that Pig's Knuckle will continue to develop close combat. In my opinion, it is more in line with the iron-blooded style of Noxus. Of course, this is not a suggestion. This is my personal preference, hahaha

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The response from readers is very good, the profit is good, and the payment is quite large. I plan to buy a new car at the end of the year. I hope you will update a few more pictures. Don't let me down and don't make my readers wait. I hope you will not be ignorant, thank you 😊

Although I have been criticizing the author, I actually still support the author to continue writing, but the status of the protagonist you wrote cannot be realized. You like to increase the difficulty and do not like to give the protagonist a matching status. This kind of strength is a guest in Ionia, the master of masters. In Noxus, he is just an errand officer and has no real power.

If we already write about the alliance, why not just write about the alliance? This way, there is no sense of immersion at all.

Why do you have to fight against readers? The people who are still commenting are those who have been following me for a long time. I suggest you not listen at all. Isn't it funny that you have to be so greedy and praise Noxus all day long? Noxus treats the weak as guinea pigs, but they have no choice. If you want to choose Noxus but don't want the protagonist to assume the corresponding position, the demigods in Freljord will have a force under them to protect them.

The writing is very good, but it took me a long time to write. If you are not satisfied with the aristocratic world, then change it! From the beginning of gaining power, it's not too much to be a captain of thousands of people with this kind of military exploits! Then when you become a general and lead an independent battle group, no wonder you were an ordinary person before time travel, and you are also an ordinary person after gaining power after time travel. Not even half the ability and determination of Nuoshou and Swain, at least they acted for their ideals and dissatisfaction in their hearts!

You wouldn't write it if it didn't disgust the readers, right? Suppressing the protagonist all day long, just finding enemies for the protagonist in Noxus. The protagonist has to do any dangerous missions or errands when going out. Every time he fails to make a temporary breakthrough, he will die. Is this the reuse of Swain? What did you take him for? With Swain's mind, would he use the male protagonist with such great potential as cannon fodder?

You didn't start with this, but if you let such a protagonist go to Noxus, what on earth do you want to do? It's just convenient for you to adjust the hydrology. You want to write about transformation, but you have already written it. I feel so uncomfortable when I read it. I have always said that ordinary people, ordinary people, ordinary people, you write books, and I came here to read the protagonist, but you are still emphasizing your ordinary people. You are already ordinary people. I can't think of myself. Why should I read your book? There is nothing special at all. Ordinary people who rely on cheats to survive, what should I see?