The Glory of Noxus

I just want to say that the pace of the author's stories is getting slower and slower, and the redundant rhetorical techniques are becoming more and more cumbersome, which greatly affects the perception, and it is becoming less and less like a novel with a single protagonist. Is this trying to transform into a group portrait? It is understandable that the author wants to describe more other heroes, but this is not a reason to reduce the description of the protagonist. Take the paragraph just now as an example. Poppy has arrived at the battlefield and fought the clown for several rounds. As for the male protagonist, he has to be almost killed before he appears? Weren't they two walking together just now? A protoss human hero who can't run as fast as a short-legged yordle warrior? Looking further ahead, vn has entered the plot and finished chatting with the man and woman, and then started fighting. Where are Poppy and the male protagonist? Wasn't it still possible to see the distance between the two parties just now? Are these two people watching the show outside? "Hey, there seems to be some kind of ceremony going on. Let's take a look." "Hey, there's something wrong with the ceremony. Vn is going to be beaten to death. Let's take a look." "Hey, Vn is seriously injured. Poppy, go quickly. Even if you can't beat me, I will save you again. This will definitely make me look full." All in all, after writing, doesn't the author check whether his writing is logical or not? I think the author has fallen into an awkward stage of writing, impetuous, and no longer has the patience to write and polish one chapter in the early stage.

Although the Four Sacred Beasts do not fit well in the lol worldview, they are logical. So far, the plot has been smooth and no heroes have been killed. As for the slow updates reported by many book friends. Just calculate the data and you will know. From September 14, 2023 to now, 144 days, I have updated 670,000 words. An average of 4,653 new words are updated every day. The average daily update of the starting point is around 4,000. Just above average is fine. One last update. The author failed to do a good job, I'm really angry.

I've been reading novels from other people, but they don't update them.

I read a few more chapters, and it's so inconsistent. Every time I write about this talent, Nanming Lihuo, etc., I still have to say a few sentences in classical Chinese. If I'm not my buddy, what on earth are you writing about? If you write about a phoenix or a phoenix, I will recognize it. Why do you have to write about a suzaku? Don't you make a play yourself? Alliance is a Western fantasy setting.

You can definitely go from weak to strong. For example, in the early stage, didn't the protagonist hunt a pig with the team? You can get a pig talent Talent: pig, constitution +1, strength +0.5, Health value increased slightly. (Or Ni Kai, which improves armor toughness) After that, there are wolves, tigers, and dragons, right? Give me Suzaku at the beginning. You said that if you make it stronger, you will be invincible in the early stage. If you make it weak, you will not be able to stand up to Suzaku's B character, which is really a failure. The writing is pretty good, but the hang-up is too weird, and it's too cheap. Suzaku's awesome talent can be unleashed in just ten essences. In the League of Legends world view, nb's magic equipment is very rare, but there are many ordinary and weaker ones.

Not bad, not bad, extremely enjoyable, the writing is very good, and the plot so far is also fascinating. I have read a lot of 101 fandoms, and this book gave me the feeling of entering an epic! Hurry up and write quickly, monthly tickets will be given to you. I am curious about the protagonist's later development path. To be honest, I hope that Pig's Knuckle will continue to develop close combat. In my opinion, it is more in line with the iron-blooded style of Noxus. Of course, this is not a suggestion. This is my personal preference, hahaha

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The response from readers is very good, the profit is good, and the payment is quite large. I plan to buy a new car at the end of the year. I hope you will update a few more pictures. Don't let me down and don't make my readers wait. I hope you will not be ignorant, thank you 😊

Although I have been criticizing the author, I actually still support the author to continue writing, but the status of the protagonist you wrote cannot be realized. You like to increase the difficulty and do not like to give the protagonist a matching status. This kind of strength is a guest in Ionia, the master of masters. In Noxus, he is just an errand officer and has no real power.

If we already write about the alliance, why not just write about the alliance? This way, there is no sense of immersion at all.

Why do you have to fight against readers? The people who are still commenting are those who have been following me for a long time. I suggest you not listen at all. Isn't it funny that you have to be so greedy and praise Noxus all day long? Noxus treats the weak as guinea pigs, but they have no choice. If you want to choose Noxus but don't want the protagonist to assume the corresponding position, the demigods in Freljord will have a force under them to protect them.

The writing is very good, but it took me a long time to write. If you are not satisfied with the aristocratic world, then change it! From the beginning of gaining power, it's not too much to be a captain of thousands of people with this kind of military exploits! Then when you become a general and lead an independent battle group, no wonder you were an ordinary person before time travel, and you are also an ordinary person after gaining power after time travel. Not even half the ability and determination of Nuoshou and Swain, at least they acted for their ideals and dissatisfaction in their hearts!

You wouldn't write it if it didn't disgust the readers, right? Suppressing the protagonist all day long, just finding enemies for the protagonist in Noxus. The protagonist has to do any dangerous missions or errands when going out. Every time he fails to make a temporary breakthrough, he will die. Is this the reuse of Swain? What did you take him for? With Swain's mind, would he use the male protagonist with such great potential as cannon fodder?

You didn't start with this, but if you let such a protagonist go to Noxus, what on earth do you want to do? It's just convenient for you to adjust the hydrology. You want to write about transformation, but you have already written it. I feel so uncomfortable when I read it. I have always said that ordinary people, ordinary people, ordinary people, you write books, and I came here to read the protagonist, but you are still emphasizing your ordinary people. You are already ordinary people. I can't think of myself. Why should I read your book? There is nothing special at all. Ordinary people who rely on cheats to survive, what should I see?

It is said that Swain reused the protagonist, but the result is that he is a high-ranking officer who can destroy the city, or he is always running errands. To improve the protagonist's strength, it is obvious that he has to be refined. However, in the end, the protagonist has to slowly collect every magic item by himself. This is called important. How much did the protagonist help Swain? Swain is reluctant to give away any essential items.

I don't understand why the author keeps strengthening the strength of those mortal heroes? The gap between heroes between alliance backgrounds is bigger than the gap between heroes and minions. It's really unnecessary. In terms of strength, I don't think Xin Zhao can block the protagonist of this description, not even for a minute.

I feel like there must have been a lot of people leaving Suzaku. Even if LoL has settings like Phoenix, it's still very dramatic. When Suzaku comes out, it's like stuffing old phlegm sauerkraut and making people uncomfortable🤢

Yes, but the fighting is too rough, with a lot of nonsense descriptions, and then the enemy dies, which is very exaggerated.

After reading about 20 chapters, there are no problems with the plot, but there are some things that are quite disappointing, such as the name of the talent (Ichihara), the choice of weapon (I just said that the long sword is light, so I chose the Miao Dao 💀)

Since changing to Miao Dao, I can see that the author likes the word "slim" very much and always wears it when describing weapons.

The first part was fine, but when I saw a sentence: "Congratulations to the host for unlocking the talent: Suzaku", I couldn't stand it for a moment. After a few pages, something like "The Fire of South Li" came. Sorry, I can't watch it anymore.

There is a panel in League of Legends, but you also have a traditional online game panel, which is still the traditional four-dimensional strength and physique. It looks too ridiculous and nondescript.

The one who fought fiercely in the Freljord, and then came back and was given eye drops by a third-rate gangster but was still obedient 🤐 and the one which only cost 70 cents after being put on the shelves for three days 😐 I am not satisfied with the quality and quantity. I will give it a try after half a year and stop pursuing it.

Dear readers, if you think you can read it, please click on the latest chapter and read it to the end when it is updated. Every one of your follow-up readings is very important to the author! Please! (kowtow~dong dong dong) (kowtow~dong dong dong) (Kowtow~dong dong dong)

It's been five months and it's finally out

Come on, if it's well written, I'll order it all.

I've already given the monthly pass, how does the extra fine work work?

Are there any novels with a good LOL background? Any platform will do

The emphasis on the "slim" long knife is so out of line. It makes me wonder if the author is also slim in some parts.

Wasn't the author level 5 before? Still downgraded?