People Are in Zhenguan, Solving Crimes Scientifically

1. When arresting the palace maid Cuizhu, instead of immediately controlling the person to prevent her from committing suicide or being silenced, she started to pretend to be cool. As a result, Cuizhu committed suicide and lost follow-up clues. Obviously, this was intentional on the part of the screenwriter. 2. When the Ministry of Punishment came to the prison to investigate the white tiger tattoo on Lin Feng's thigh, it was not the first time 2.1 Telling the story of the beggar. Lin Feng replaced the doubtful points and cleared himself of guilt. 2.2 Called Lin Feng's case overnight to investigate new clues. 2.3 It is speculated that there is a white tiger connection between Zhen Linfeng and Cuizhu. Zhen Linfeng must be involved in the princess haunting case, and takes the opportunity to bring in Li Lizhi to make tiger skins. Instead: dilly-dallying, hiding the fact that Lin Feng really had a white tiger + delaying, resulting in the destruction of the case file, and giving the people behind the scenes a lot of time to make up for the layout. Obviously, this was still intentional on the part of the screenwriter. Deliberately suppressing the rhythm, in addition to the word count, is also annoying. This poisonous spot is sold so hard!

Let's raise one first. The foreshadowing is too straightforward. The plot is a bit old-fashioned. There are too many homage plots. A suspense that allows readers to see the answer at a glance is not very attractive. The background setting should also be adjusted for some dramas. The police are definitely not thinking like little detectives. How could a big shot just waiting to be thrown into a room with many people? How did the Tang Dynasty have wardrobes that can hide people? The ancients had different knowledge systems and were not stupid. You can't tell the truth if you tell them. It's good to have the idea of ​​writing suspense, otherwise I won't be able to watch anything other than too serious in the future. I hope that the plot designed in the future will be greatly improved.

If you don't mind the sense of separation between the background and history of the book, this book is okay. There are some interesting points, and there are many. Overall, okay? But for personal reasons, I couldn't stand the separation between the Tang Dynasty background in the book and the historical Tang Dynasty background. If it were something like fantasy history, it would still be acceptable if a huge dark organization suddenly appeared. But when I first read this book, it felt like a time-travel novel. A huge Four Elephants organization suddenly appeared in a powerful empire, which really surprised me. Again, it is good to ignore the sense of separation between the novel and the historical background.

Don't write about women anymore. The main reason is that the author's writing style is not up to par, and he keeps turning over and over with eyes drawn. It feels like the taste of women changes as soon as they appear. It's not that you are not allowed to write about it, or you should write it better. Even if you write one or two chapters, it will be fine. As long as the writing is good, it will be fine. The main reason is that it is too strong to intersperse the taste.

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What kind of organization is this? It's so awesome. It infiltrates from the central government down to the local government just for Empress Lu's treasure. When the early Han Dynasty was so poor, Empress Lu could only make money by emptying the treasury. If you have such strength, why not give it a try and see if you can overthrow Li Shimin 🙂

The author's ability to write stories is worthy of my bow, and the author's level of writing is worthy of my punch.

The author's writing technique has been finalized. Although the protagonist of the detective novel is the absolute center, from the beginning to the latest chapter, in addition to the protagonist and criminals, other people from the emperor to ministers, officials to civilians wrote it. It feels like the Tang Dynasty has not been overturned. It is really blessed by the gods. Without the protagonist, the Tang Dynasty will be finished.

How to say it? I feel that the level of the cases written by the author is too high. I even think that the mastermind behind the scenes is Li Shimin. Otherwise, how could it be possible to mobilize so many officials, so many people, so many human, financial and material resources? You must know that most people are selfish and upper-level political creatures. They basically will not treat their bosses, relatives or family members wholeheartedly. It is basically impossible to be loyal to a certain person at all times (ﾉД`)

There is a problem. The official in Shangzhou City said that they had turned it into an iron barrel. What was the result? Cheng Yaojin has arrived, and the enemies have drawn their swords to attack Wei Zheng! Did you leave that night? Just arrest a few people and leave? This is treason! Wouldn't Wei Zheng sit here to investigate and pull out the radish and bring out the mud? What kind of Suzaku organization? Isn't this Shangzhou a bloody and thorough investigation? Went back that night?

There is a serious bug in the first scene. The leaves are not the light source. How can the small holes be used for imaging? The author didn't do well in high school physics. The simplest example is why the spot of light that the sun shines on the ground through the gaps between the leaves is circular, because the sun is round. This is the application of small hole imaging

The advantage is that the case itself is well written. However, there are many shortcomings. For example, the cases are too frequent, and it feels like people are dying and solving the cases every day, without life; then the supporting characters are too flat, and the famous bosses in history are written like Bai Ding; and the author's understanding of the history of the Tang Dynasty is not very comprehensive. The above are just my personal opinions. I also hope that the author can check more information and improve his writing skills quickly. I hope that the author will write better and better. Come on, author! ! !

An emperor who forced his palace to ascend to power, half of the founding emperor, his own palace was actually a sieve, so many spies?

The case was well written, but there were a lot of unnecessary low-level cool points. It was very embarrassing. I was referring to the scenes where the supporting characters brag about the protagonist. Writing too much would really be detrimental to the shaping of these characters. No matter who the high-ranking official is, the protagonist has to brag when he solves the case. The protagonist also brags about every word he says. Some of the protagonists even do nothing. , I also praised the protagonist as soon as I met him. , , These decent supporting characters have all been molded into tool men who can only shout "666, awesome, amazing" next to the protagonist. , If you want to feel good, just write about solving the case, exposing the conspiracy, and fighting the villain. This is enough and not embarrassing. , , There is really no need for those embarrassing routines

When the yamen uses torture, are they still afraid of public opinion? A small craftsman dares to compete with the Yamen? Needless to say, in the Tang Dynasty, even in modern times, there were very few people who dared to roar in court.

The protagonist traveled through time without gaining the memory of the original owner, nor did he explore the world. On this basis, the protagonist heard about "ghosts and gods". The protagonist directly followed the education in his previous life and said that "ghosts and gods" were false, and repeatedly emphasized that "ghosts and gods" were false.

Inexplicably, you, an official from the feudal dynasty, are always afraid of the common people. Are you an official from the feudal dynasty or a modern official serving the people?

The first few cases were quite interesting, a bit like Detective Dee's TV series, but the results got worse as they went on. The routines are repeated, and the logic breaks down... The prisoner can't tell the priority of the crime, and he can't understand what he wants to commit. He has no time to do anything but frame a passerby, purely for the sake of reversal...

The case is good, but clues are always hidden. Clues from other mystery novels will be shared with readers, and then the protagonist will deduce it. It is obvious that the protagonist is very smart. In this novel, he conceals many necessary clues, giving the impression that the protagonist is pretending.

The author also likes to bury clues and basically doesn't give any clues to the readers. The sudden flash of inspiration, surprise, and these rainbow farts make the plot quite draggy. The reactions of others and the mystique add up to half a chapter's content.

There are too few daily routines, it's like rushing to work, it doesn't let people rest at all, and the whole book is written only a few months after the protagonist. It would definitely be good to make into a TV series, but the novel is a bit unbearable. Plus, I am timid and a bit scary. I gave up the book. Alas, it's a pity.

To be honest, I have never seen this kind of ancient crime solving before. It seems fresh and exciting, and I don't see any flaws in the logic of the crime. However, the pretentious plot looks a bit awkward, and then it feels too modern. It seems that these people have no concept of respect and inferiority. For example, they casually enter the princess's boudoir to look through the wardrobe. The person handling the case has free time to tell others the details of the case and force a wave of passers-by to be shocked. Even the emperor knows that the case has spread in the palace, which arouses the curiosity of the princess. A private businessman family dares to keep criticizing the imperial envoy, and it is also weird, including various dialogues, it seems like everyone is equal. Then there is the protagonist, who took the blame and had to overturn the case in order to survive. And this case seems to be really reversible, but in my opinion, this case is a forced death penalty for the sake of the plot. I can only say that maybe I have read some historical novels but not many that focus on solving crimes. It is fresh but feels a little twisted.

The plot itself is not a big problem, and a sense of suspense is even beginning to build. But you have so many historical flaws that it's a bit suffocating. I guess it's based on the ancient puppet show. Don't get me wrong, I'm not talking about the protagonist swaggering into the princess's boudoir. After all, it involves witchcraft and the prince has to send it. It was indeed a big deal in ancient times. Solving the witchcraft problem and turning it into a case is enough for the royal family to ignore it. I mean other aspects. There are too many places that impose the cognition of modern people. I think there is nothing wrong with the protagonist having this kind of cognition. He is a modern person. But it's weird for the ancients to think so. The first case is the one where the protagonist was sentenced. The head of the family beat and killed his concubine and was sentenced to one year for murder (intentional homicide). Involuntary manslaughter, not guilty. Because concubines were considered a type of slaves in the Tang Dynasty, not wives. A wife refers to a wife who is married to a wife, and who kills his wife, so killing may lead to the death penalty. This is the first time I saw a book about solving crimes in the Tang Dynasty, and I didn't even take a look at Tang Law. It is recommended to change it to the wife of the second wife instead of the concubine. There is also a concubine who seduces the son of the family master and does not need to be killed. It is better to report to the official and hang according to Tang law. For those who are not good, open an ancestral hall and be beaten to death in public. There is a second case. The storybook took shape only from the Song Dynasty to the Ming Dynasty. It is not that there were no similar works in the Tang Dynasty. Legends of the Tang Dynasty are examples, but most of them were collections of short stories. Because the cost of engraving printing is very high. In addition, there were very few bookstores in the Tang Dynasty, and there may be more in Chang'an, but the books for sale were very few and so expensive that it was almost impossible to fail to sell them. It is recommended to read the Tang Dynasty's articles urging learning. You will find that ancient books were so expensive that even with the advent of printing, poor scholars would not be able to buy them. They could only find friends to copy them, and they would have to be good friends to lend them to you. Popular literature did not have a market until the price of paper, ink and movable type fell in the Ming Dynasty. It is suggested that if the author wants to continue writing, it is best to read Tang Lv again and have a certain number of sentencing standards for his case.

The process of solving the case is exactly the same. If you keep playing the same reversal, it will no longer feel fresh. Try changing the routine.

Well written! The last time I saw such a wonderful ancient criminal investigation novel was "Concubine". Come on, come on, try to maintain your level until you finish the book

I think the overall writing is pretty good. However, for similar plots (such as the previous two inducements) if you write about such plots later, you don't need to describe them in detail. It would be better to just briefly mention them. I hope to see more interesting ideas. I hope this book will get better and better.

You can consider using a title like Locked Room Murder 1 or Locked Room Murder 2 for a case. This way we viewers can clearly know where a case begins and how many chapters it ends. Maybe we are used to it. I used to read novels with titles in this format.

Looking for similar books! This book is really good, but there are too few of it, so I'm asking you guys to recommend some similar books!

Author, I hope you can wink and don't force me to kneel down and beg you

"Datang: The Lord of the Criminal Department, Unscientific Solving Cases" should be the author's new book