One Piece: Kaido of the Beasts Playing House

After reading the Wano Country chapter, I felt sick to death. My original enthusiasm had turned into cheating and destiny, and my favorable impression of the protagonist group was greatly reduced. On the contrary, Kaido wanted strength, brains, structure, and dreams. Later, I chatted in a friend's book club and proposed this idea. The more I chatted, the more excited I was, so I decided to write it myself. Because I didn't want to write about Kaido as a time traveler (I think Kaido as a time traveler is not the original Kaido), so I designed the character Lily (thank you Oda for not drawing Kaido's wife), hoping to write a different beast. I hope you can support me. If there are any shortcomings, please correct me. The author will humbly accept it.

Yamato welcomes new mother after Mrs. Al😄😄😄

The Navy is really in a bad state now. Every three years, the Tianlong people will massacre a non-franchised country to cheer up, and they have massacred 288 so far. The navy also sent a large number of people to participate in the Celestial Dragon carnival. Valley of the Gods was one of those times.

Is this a male channel or a female channel? Why is it that the female protagonist is the main point of view? Damn it.

Why is Kaido a native? I thought he was a time traveler.

Kaido and Yamato (young)

It seems awkward to describe the pirates as the People's Liberation Army. The author might as well write a new book in which the protagonist becomes the leader of the revolutionary army, and then write about the revolutionary army like this. It's pleasing to the eye. Do pirates deserve to be described as the People's Liberation Army?

From the current point of view, there are no explosive points. The three golden chapters are not attractive. There are too many originals, but the beginning is not interesting enough. In terms of genre, it feels very similar to Impel Down. There are a lot of originals, but the writing is very good and interesting enough to make people want to read. However, this one is too slow and not attractive enough. You want to know what readers who read fanfiction want to see? Isn't it just an interaction with the original work? Funny painting style, realistic painting style, and brainless cool writing are all acceptable. The key point is to bring a sense of the original work. Otherwise, why would you read a fanfic? According to the current plot, although there is nothing wrong with it, it is not interesting enough. It belongs to the kind of book that is on the bookshelf and will not be read without deleting it. The book is exhausted and I don't want to find a new one without clicking it, but it will not delete it. The number of words is still too small at the moment. I hope it will become interesting in the future.

I have read more than 400 chapters, and in summary, it is boring. There are too many original characters, so it doesn't look like Pirates, and I have no desire to read.

Kaido's description is too positive.

Native Kaido, how could the world line of the original work change? An original character is inserted into it. Is the protagonist Kaido or your original character? Speechless

How do I get a female protagonist in a boy's novel?

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I remember there is a saying in Sherlock Holmes, when the law can no longer deliver justice, then private revenge will appear extremely noble at this moment. Pirates will almost disgust people to death in the later stage. The justice of the navy has become a clown. On the contrary, heroes like Rocks and the Golden Lion are even more admirable. Roger helps Garp, but his fate turns him into half a clown. This comic really makes people angry.

No, your half-spoken words have troubled me. Are you doing this, Pirate Man?

The book really lives up to its name. No one will read this kind of humble work for free.

The author describes pirates so beautifully. It's really just like the title of the book, Pirates Playing House

Female channel book, right? In the introduction, Kaido is OOC. Why does Kaido turn into a henpecked character in the eyes of women? If a woman really dares to touch her nose, Kaido will definitely give her a thunderous gossip.

The first two to three hundred chapters at the beginning are really good, but later on it becomes a bit streamlined. After five hundred chapters, it feels like the plot has not progressed very much. Also, are there too many types of fantasy beasts? I can accept three or four, but your total of almost ten is too abstract.

I only read your character Zhiyi The writing is very good, not procrastinating, and clear. The background story is excellent enough that people can't help but feel involved in it. It establishes an image for readers very well. It sets the stage for the following story very well, and a complete background introduction is a good supplement to the character image.

Pastry Fruit - Fruit Type: Superman Devil Fruit, the superior fruit of all Pastry Devil Fruits, has extremely powerful and comprehensive abilities. - Abilities and characteristics: - Pastry making: Able to produce a variety of delicious pastries from any part of the body, such as sweet macarons, soft chiffon cakes, crispy cookies, etc. The quantity and scale of production are only limited by the physical strength and imagination of the person with the ability. - Confer special effects: the pastries produced have special effects 😁, the chocolate cake can quickly restore the eater's physical energy, the mint biscuits can refresh the mind, and the strawberry tart has a healing effect on minor injuries. - Size and quantity control: Freely control the size and quantity of pastries produced. During battle, you can create giant cream puffs to trap enemies, or a large number of spiked biscuit darts for long-range attacks. - Form change extension: Give cakes the ability to change simple forms, cakes can change into defensive shields, and biscuits can change into ropes for binding or climbing. - Pseudo-elementary transformation: The ability user can turn himself into a cake and achieve pseudo-elementary transformation. When attacked, the attack can be dissolved into a pastry form. It can also turn its body parts into detachable pastries for long-range attacks and reconnaissance; or it can turn into flowing cream to shuttle through small spaces, and turn into crisp biscuit pieces to attack enemies. - Weaknesses: - Physical consumption: Making large quantities of cakes or maintaining pseudo-elementalization will quickly consume the physical strength and energy of the ability user. Excessive use may cause physical exhaustion and coma. - Environmentally sensitive: Pastries are prone to melting and deformation at high temperatures, and are prone to softening and deterioration in humid environments, losing their original shape, special effects and attack and defense capabilities.

By the way, has anyone recorded what kinds of phantom beasts have appeared? I've just read dozens of chapters. Isn't it a bit too much to turn the phantom beast into a horse pile?

Why have I recently discovered that there are some typos or inappropriate sentences in previous chapters? When I listen to books, I often find one or two typos or inappropriate sentences.

Ability cannot conquer the world, only domineering power can surpass everything!

Recommend a pirate fan novel: "Pirates: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" [Decisive Killing + Dominance + Great Swordsman + Pirate Group + Age of Rocks + World Domination] Return to the Age of Rocks, join the Rocks Pirate Group and become a cadre, grab the gold from the sky, massacre the Celestial Dragons during the Battle of the Valley of Gods, and form a pirate group after Rocks' death to dominate one side. During the second celebration of the Celestial Dragons, all the pirate groups in the new world of the Alliance once again launched the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, snatching the Celestial Dragons' treasures and devil fruits, massacring the Celestial Dragons again, killing Lord Garin, Army General, and CP0 Chief... Hawkeye Homick: The world's greatest swordsman? No, no, no, this is not me, but Li Yuan. Ever since I started learning swordsmanship, I have been pursuing his path of swordsmanship. Whitebeard: The strongest man in the world is not me, but Li Yuan. That guy is so outrageous that even my ability to awaken the Shock Fruit cannot defeat him! Five Old Stars: Obviously I am immortal and can passively teleport to save my life. Why am I still being killed?

The protagonist starts on an empty island and eats the thunder fruit. It is a half-invincible story and half-farming story. It is fast-paced and you are welcome to try it.