The Immortality of Mortals

If you want to make money, just study that book. Although the harem novels are not special, the ones without harem are all short and eunuch-like, but the ones with harem are longer! Those who eat money are fully charged. This fanfic is so satisfying to the end, otherwise why not read the original version!

There is no sense of crisis at all. Don't run away even if you are targeted. Move first. Then find a way to pay your family in advance. I don't even know how to eliminate the risk. It's better to strike first, you idiot. There is still a period of Qi training to do so many bells and whistles. What's the use? It's a waste of training resources and time. Unless your skill is directly connected to the transformation of gods and has supporting magical powers and magic weapons. Anyway, there is a purple gas immunity bottleneck. Otherwise, it would be worse to change to Changchun Kung in order to build the foundation. The writing is pretty good. But this poisonous point can be avoided. This is a world of immortality where people cannibalize people. Have foresight. It is necessary to plan before taking action

I was convinced and started accepting girls again. 666 I'm leaving, goodbye

I don't want to read any more of what you wrote about the exercises. How many levels are there in the wood system and how many levels are in the metal system? I'm speechless.

Mana is also divided into spiritual roots. Have you really seen a mortal? Is it possible to form a few golden elixirs after forming elixirs? You can innovate, but you can't make magical changes.

Playing Five Spiritual Roots 666 In the human world, if the five spiritual roots are slow to cultivate, it is almost impossible to build the foundation. If the five spiritual roots are cultivated quickly in the human world, they can still break through the foundation building and golden elixir stage. Depending on the situation, let the Nascent Soul stage and the Golden Core stage have miscellaneous thoughts. Obviously this person must have a valuable treasure on his person. If no one discovers this, then it means that his brain is broken. The male protagonist is obviously seeking death, or else he has come to the mortal world to make fun of him.

Nice! I feel that the author's writing of female characters is more unique. I felt that it was quite smooth after reading it in one sitting. It was not overwhelming and had no negative points. Hope to add more in the future!

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yin Yue, Bing Feng, Han Zhi Xian, Mei Ning, Wen Si Yue, Liu Yu, Bing Po Fairy, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Yuan Cha Saint, Bao Hua Saint, Dai Er, Black Phoenix Fairy, Jin Yue, Xian Xian, Liu Le'er, Bai Suyuan

It was originally well written, but at the beginning it was quite innovative. There were no big problems with the plot design, but as soon as it was released, a highly poisonous character, the old monster Qiong, was too disgusting. Hong Fu was a little poisonous at the beginning, but he didn't get deeply involved. One of the most poisonous points of the fairy tales is that they write too deeply about high-level monks. It doesn't matter if they occasionally hunt down and offend them, but letting them affect the main plot is extremely poisonous. Not to mention writing several exercises is even more poisonous.

The research and development of Bigu Dan has persuaded me to quit many times. This time I forgot to read it and it didn't work out. After seeing it, I was persuaded to quit again.

In the first chapter, it was mentioned that you came from time travel. Looking further back, why did you not react when the more famous disciple among the lower-level disciples called out his name when he entered the Yellow Maple Valley? And all cultivators have a photographic memory, right? You should be able to recall the memories of watching it before. You are not clear about it, and you have no idea whether you have read the original work or not. It is easy for people to complain! Because you have met Han Li before and recognized him, Xin Ruyin could have recognized him even earlier, but you can't recognize Dong Xuan'er when you arrive at Huang Maple Valley? So he offended Dong Xuan'er, who had a backer in the Danji period. You should make it clear whether you have read the original work of Pig's Feet. You are making enemies everywhere like a fool.

Don't engage in so much ambiguity, and don't always talk about how handsome and beautiful the pig's feet are. What do you want to do by stressing so much? If you open a harem, then open a harem. If you flirt with someone and start an affair, there will be no further story (Sisters of the Shogun family). Don't engage in a life-and-death fight and let him go (Don't say it's not happening, Duobaonu)

A chapter like the Ascension Conference can be passed, there is no need to write it in such detail.

Your emotional line is really difficult for people to watch. You can have sex with other women in front of your main wife, and she still doesn't object. Although your plot arrangement is very necessary and you have a red Buddha, the people who are watching are disgusted. They even say that they are ready to solve the heroine's Dragon Roar. I can't control myself when I turn my head. I feel pretty good in practicing fighting, but the arrangements and confusing operations of these women don't give me any sense of satisfaction or sense of involvement. Is it really necessary to accept a woman like Dong Xuan'er who can do anything for her? There is also the issue of self-proclaimed cultivation. How can someone with a high level of cultivation claim to be a native practitioner? , It should be me, this is the first time I feel that a senior expert among mortals is so self-effacing!

I won't go into detail about this novel. Everyone has their own understanding, but I always write something that is unnecessary. It's embarrassing to watch. I feel like the protagonist is like a dragon king. I suggest you write pure and refreshing novels.

Six spiritual roots and foreign spiritual roots are the fusion of several five-element spiritual roots. You can say that the protagonist has a golden finger that can fuse several spiritual roots among the five-element spiritual roots and transform them into one or more foreign spiritual roots to increase the speed of cultivation. There is nothing to do. The protagonist is directly related to Hong Fu. The protagonist is still a handsome guy. I am afraid he is not too long-lived. There is also Hong Fu's self-proclaimed, "I am a cultivator, are you serious?" And the female cultivator from the Hidden Moon Sect is also a cultivator. You said that I should either give it a beating or just kill him, take the treasure and return it and let him go. This is a world where people cannibalize people. Do you really think that I am the protagonist and can't die?

After reading a little bit, I feel that it has nothing to do with mortals, and there are many settings conflicts! Fellow Taoists, do you still remember what kind of cultivation level the master Jin Guang was in the beginning? What age? What spiritual root? Five Spiritual Roots, fellow cultivators of the Five Elements, before the age of thirty-five (after being stuck for a few years, and there are still two years of the Ascension to Immortality Association, which requires under forty years old) to practice Qi at the peak of the fifth level, what is the concept? Before you have golden fingers, the cultivation speed is at least a thousand times that of normal monks with the same Five Spiritual Roots! This is much more exaggerated than Han Laomo! Even taking medicine may not be able to catch up! As mentioned earlier, he is a child of a declining family and has few resources! I almost practiced by eating air! 6

After reading Chapter 20, there are logic problems in many places. Let's not talk about the exercises for now. Let's just say that you can ripen the elixir. Does eating the elixir raw have the effect of making elixirs? Even if you have unlimited elixirs, you can just practice unlimited elixirs. Why do you sell your high-end elixirs that ripen them from time to time? Are you short of spiritual stones? There are already a lot of spiritual stones. If you don't buy talismans, magical weapons, or pets, you can just practice hard and take spiritual medicine. Why do you have to keep writing and selling and still being followed? Is there something wrong with it? Besides, you don't know how to make elixirs and then sell them? How can an elixir be as eye-catching as a magical elixir? It's normal for alchemists to sell a lot of elixirs

The heroine and the supporting characters in the original novel all lived hard lives. Why can't you take them all and let them live a miserable life?

It's a very smooth book so far, and the writing is not bad. Come on, I look forward to writing a plot about the real world of immortality!

It's really awesome. In the world of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals, the protagonist has 5 spiritual roots. Each spiritual root skill is practiced separately and consumes 5 times the resources. Breaking through requires 5 times. Each spiritual root is considered as a separate level to practice. It's really awesome. It's so suppressed that it will be buried in the ground.

What if the protagonist is the Virgin? If you don't kill the old monster Qiong earlier and leave the grateful one alone, why not just kneel down on his crotch and lick it?

While normal fairy tales can be read, fan fiction cannot be read.

Except for the little green bottle that took away all the opportunities from Han Lao Mo, Han Lao Mo could only build a chicken

The timeline is messed up, hammering here and there, one thought comes out one after another!

Instead of running away after killing a big family member, he went to rent a house in the family's ancestral territory? Not yet disguised? Are you starting to practice slowly? Who do you think you are? So damn poisonous

After more than 20 chapters, there are more and more narrations, almost the entire story

I can only read a few chapters of the main character when he was a casual cultivator.

It made me laugh. The author was tricked by Qinghu into writing about mortals cultivating immortality. It's 670,000 words.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁