Humans in Marvel: All Heavens Appear as Saints

I want to see Hu Yifei fight against the Kirita army

The author has a single female protagonist, many female protagonists, and no female protagonist. How many times have you been in love? How do you feel about love? How many times have you served as a strategist for others? If you have too few love memories and viewings, I personally do not recommend that you write a heroine or multiple heroines, because you can easily write a teddy that becomes a sperm. Personally, I still recommend no heroine. After all, it is just a career. Don't think about porn.

The author hates Japanese people, and I hate them too, but not all of them. When writing a novel, you have to include too much personal information, otherwise it will be very fragmented when you read it. Who you hate, what you hate, you don't need to emphasize it over and over again, it just needs to appear once or twice.

This kind of book may be a little popular if you add tomatoes to it, but as a starting point, forget it. It's better to practice with tomatoes

The protagonist of the Dragon Clan has a somewhat twisted mind, and can fight for the truth without fighting back or scolding him, and can even step into other people's traps. So why should Lu Mingze tell the protagonist the truth? You can use the truth as bait to make the protagonist step into the trap again and again. And does the truth matter to the protagonist? Is it important to readers? It's not a detective story

The writing style is average and a lot of places are blunt. Personally, the most toxic point at the moment is that the protagonist has a strong dick smell. After reading twenty chapters, judging from the author's writing style, don't write about the heroine, harem, and emotional drama. It might be another dog-licking nanny dog-blood story. If you don't have Feng Chaohuang's writing style, don't write nonsense.

All the dragons jumped. I haven't seen it yet, so I'm not interested. It feels like they are not as famous as Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit. Too niche. Is it said to be depressing or tragic? Horrible. Horrible. Even less interested.

This kind of scholar who travels through multiple worlds at the same time is basically a loser. Do you dare to imitate others without their coquettishness?

Why is the protagonist written with a kind of crazy character? Isn't Zhu Tianwen a plot-loving person and a PhD student in scientific research? The protagonist is always negatively affected and unstable. What is this meant to show? I came to see Zhutian, not to see the protagonist go crazy.

I'm a little confused. After reading a few chapters, the words are all contemptuous of the United States. Then why don't you write about Chinese comics or the world of cultivation and say you are patriotic? If you write American comics and say you are not patriotic, you still have a strong stance. So why not write Chinese comics? There are many excellent works.

It's too scattered. There are also prehistoric novels like Dragons that many people know the names of. Those who have read them are already old and will not be the audience of this book!

He shook his head with a wry smile... Touched his head... Touched his nose...

The core of the beautiful country's superhero movies and their literary works has never been about various superpowers or reversal of the story line. In the future, it will be said that no matter what level your civilization has reached, how high it is, or your civilization has just started, as long as you do not follow the routine planned by the Americans, there will inevitably be big problems such as genocide and so on. From Stargate and so on, these American dramas have been watched all the way, and it has always been the same, and it has never changed. A woman of other ethnic groups will naturally fall in love with an American man, no matter his background or personality. Even if the American man is a drug addict, these women will fall in love with him. Other men of color must be short, poor, or stupid. No matter how noble their status is, they must have physical defects or major flaws in their character. This is the universal value of European and American politics. To belittle the males of other ethnic groups, praise the females of other ethnic groups, and praise the females of other ethnic groups is so disrespectful to the Americans!

In the Swallowing Starry Sky, the Black God Suit can ignore the God of War-level attacks, but it still feels painful after being hit by a 15-ton punch. The author has never seen the Swallowing Starry Sky? The minimum punch power of the elementary God of War is 64 tons!

I haven't watched it yet, I hope there are no mutants in the main world of Marvel!

After reading the author's Marvel chapter, I also thought of a martial arts novel that I had read before that really annoyed me. Authors always like to use accidents, coincidences, luck, or luck to push the protagonist and plot development. It's really annoying to watch. Is the protagonist a puppet? Can't you allow your supervisor to take action and think of ways and actions to advance the plot? Here, the protagonist as an off-site factor can obviously do better subjectively, but in the end, he kills the soldiers nearby and pushes the protagonist away through various unpleasant factors.

Isn't getting points to improve your strength? Isn't it a loss for the protagonist to get 800 points after spending more than 1,000 points? Isn't there a personal training room for strength training and improvement? Why do I write down the settings but don't use them? He writes about everything he does and hides behind his back, but the mission he writes down is to show off his holiness in front of others, and he can't even pretend to be so, it's very vicious.

As a treasure, the Marvel Gem is not that weak. Although it has lost its energy after going to other universes, it itself is a symbol that embodies the rules of the universe. It is of great use in a world that understands the rule system, such as swallowing the universe. The Marvel Gem is probably no less than the Chaos Monument inside, at least it is a treasure.

Is it really interesting to have one person become multiple people? Always feel bad

Also, the world chosen is a bit too idealistic. To be honest, if this kind of multi-faceted book wants to be out of the circle, you can't choose according to your own preferences. It must be something that everyone knows. It is obvious that September the Star Stealer is only what the author likes, and then he took it for granted. How many people are still reading this Star Stealer September? Those comics were from many years ago. To be honest, the plot style is not suitable for this kind of pretentious and slap-in-the-face novels. Although Dragon Clan is very popular, not many people have read the whole book. If you choose these two worlds, you might as well choose novels such as Journey to the West, Lotus Lantern, and even Fighting to Break the Sphere. It is obvious that the number of people who read it will be greatly reduced after September.

There are too many worlds, and I have to write about behind-the-scenes and other important settings. I also like to pair up with each other. The two people have already decided to be lovers before they have a relationship. It has the flavor of ancient fan fiction. The time travel is just to change the tragedy and become a nanny to help the original CP get a happy ending. As for whether the original CP has an emotional protagonist, who will care about such nonsense.

Things are not easy to do, and the front is devoured. Marvel has nothing to say. It starts with the Dragon Clan. It is indecisive and hesitant about relationships. That woman is also a love brain. She is a pig teammate. She doesn't want to think about why people are nice to you for no reason. When it comes to stealing stars in September, I really can't stand it. The foreshadowing is that September is bad and that is bad. Then Yuan Liuxing is a dog-licking servant, and then she turns around and becomes entangled with September. I don't believe that you really can't break up with her? It's very exciting to watch!

I feel like after Dragons is finished, it will become shit. The more I write, the more rubbish it becomes. It feels like a different person. There is no logic at all in writing. The more I read, the more disgusting it becomes.

Didn't I read the first chapter, is the protagonist a licker? Spider man licking dog

It's a bit interesting, and it's quite burning.

How is the writing? Can it be called good grass? Grass

I looked at the name and the synopsis, thinking that I could focus on one and write it well, but it turned out that if I couldn't write one of the protagonists, I would switch to a bunch of them to make up the number. I wrote a plot twice and then skipped to another one. If the article was not right, I would reverse-screen it.

Why is it so watery at the beginning of Devouring? It's too bland.

The real "introduction" of the book is in the author's comments at the end of the first chapter. New readers can go and see if they want to continue reading. Putting aside the writing and logic of the book, the author's conscientious operation can avoid a lot of scolding posts.

The emotional drama about Yuanshen you wrote is too much. It makes others extremely embarrassed to watch.