Huo Yuhao Has a Narration for Douluo Zhi Dang

You don't even call this a narration. The narration is usually used by the author to introduce interpretation or simply to sigh. It is simply an unconscious thing. The protagonist cannot affect the narration in any way, because the narration is purely the author's high-dimensional consciousness. Your narration is simply another character in the novel, a spoiler character in the live broadcast. Writing a narration like this is not as interesting as the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm written by the third young master of the Tang family.

Huo Yuhao is too dramatic. All kinds of modern Internet sentences are said casually. He is not like the original but a time traveler. If you write it like this, you might as well say that you have traveled through time and become Huo Yuhao to obtain the narration system. And you write a narration that's less like a narrator and more like a person.

A few opinions, but they can't be considered opinions. Not many readers are as bored as me to read the first few chapters of Douluo. The problem of Tang San's innate soul power was explained in Chapter 29 of the original work, which was that the practice of Xuantian Gong and martial arts were mutually exclusive. During the fusion process, the innate soul power was washed away. The original sentence does not use the word "wash away", but the general meaning is that because of the practice of Xuantian Gong, Tang San's innate soul power has become elusive. Second, the Iron Blood Sect does not have Xuantian Kung, and Xuantian Kung has not been castrated. Its original effect is just that. Tang Ya's martial spirit is Blue Silver Grass. The quality of her innate martial spirit is there. She has four rings because of her powerful Xuantian Kung Fu. Huo Gua is because after the Ultimate Martial Spirit reaches level 30, the speed of cultivation will be slowed down. What should be complained about most is that Tang Sect skills such as Dou Yi Zhong's hidden weapon techniques all need to be based on the internal power of Xuantian Gong, and in order to learn Xuantian Kung, the original soul power must be abolished. Wang Dong won't mention Xu Sanshi, Mo Xuan, and Xiao Xiao in Dou Er, but it's not a big deal if the first three are transferred directly. Let's talk about the talent issue a little bit. Tang San's innate soul power that was washed away should indeed not be full soul power, but it is too much to see a certain chapter saying that he cannot compare with Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong. The most talented among the seven monsters in Dou Yi are Dai Mubai and Oscar. I don't count Ma Hongjun as his grazer. Dai Mubai, this sixth child is really outrageous. He has three dates a day and shoots every time. He enters school at the age of 12, is level 30 at the age of 13, is 37 at the age of 15, and is 38 in the second half of the year. What level is this? Yu Tianheng is called a genius at the age of 19 and 38! It is directly compared to Thunderbolt Beibei, but Beibei has the bonus of Xuantian Kung Fu, and the quality of his martial soul is still high, which means that his innate soul power is basically higher. With Shrek herding sheep and his own indulgence, it can only be said that he has a strong innate foundation to be able to practice to this level. But I prefer to think that Zhang Wei forcibly lowered the level of other peers in his later period. He set the age level and so on based on how he wanted to write it at the time. The cheap eldest brother Huo Yuhao, the White Tiger Soul Emperor who was the same age as Ma Xiaotao, looked even more outrageous in terms of numerical values. The above is a lot of verbose words, and I say them out of curiosity. What I want to express is that Zhang Wei wrote randomly when using age and soul power level to express a person's genius. If these are used to determine a person's talent and then determine whether he can become a god, I think this is also quite ridiculous.

I can't stand it anymore. The narration is crazy the whole time. It's just like a narration, and it can be heard by everyone. Apart from the word count, it seems dispensable. The 7-year-old Huo Yuhao is written like a social person, which is not at all consistent with the image of a kind-hearted country bumpkin who is easy to deceive in the original work. It's just a superficial novel.

I can't stand it. The whole novel looks like Aha, a disgusting clown.

Update it! Damn the author! ! ! 😍

It is recommended to change the name. The story of a Tucao slave drinking and playing with Huo Gua There is a saying that this narration is not even a Tucao slave.

It should be considered original, but most of the settings are completely different.

All I can say is that there are a lot of typos, and there are narrations that other people can hear, and it feels like a fun person

I thought it was interesting and prepared to watch it, but it turned out that it was different. . . .

I am number one🤓

Is this Huo Yuhao the protagonist of the original work?

I have a criminal record as a eunuch, but I still don't want to subscribe. After finishing the book, read the comment section to decide whether I will watch you.

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Why don't you put aside Douluo IP and write something original? Except for a few Douluo nouns, all your content is original.

Lin Daiyu