Shrouding the Heavens: Defying Heaven on the Path to Enlightenment

Forget about going to Yaochi. Think about it, do you think they'd even know you learned their Imperial Scripture? Yaochi is a sacred land; if their Imperial Scripture were to leak out, they'd be willing to sacrifice an Imperial Weapon. You think you can trade with them? What are you thinking?

It's one thing to portray someone as a useless character at the beginning. After all, becoming stronger always takes time. But if you become stronger and some supporting characters fight you for ages without you being able to kill them, doesn't that make you even more useless? Does that count as becoming stronger? The novel *Covering the Sky* is full of invincible characters.

The protagonist is constantly being mocked. Even though everyone knows he has a sacred weapon, a kingly weapon, and saintly abilities, they still keep coming to kill him. And many of them can even escape after mocking him. It's really exhausting to watch; it's incredibly frustrating.

Wait, what's going on in the latest chapter? Are they going to get involved with Ye Fan from now on? You, a Source Master with a perfected Source Eye, can't detect someone approaching? Getting ambushed in your most proficient area... And they're already filtering readers?

The tag "Invincible Flow" turns out to be "Useless Flow," so what are you even writing? You're desperately trying to suppress levels and pad your numbers in this game, I'm truly speechless.

Do you think those bandits who've been digging in the mines for years don't understand the wickedness of human nature? How can someone be so naive?

Your writing before that was absolutely terrible, like a pile of shit, and you still expect people to accept it and see the final cut? Are you crazy? 🤭 Don't you have any idea how many readers you've already lost? What makes you think we'll keep reading your rubbish until we die?

Judging from the book's timeline, the Dark Turmoil is still over two hundred years away. If the protagonist's cultivation speed isn't fast enough, is the Dark Turmoil planning to force him to hide in a corner and act like a coward, watching Jiang Taixu and Gai Jiuyou die? I've read 120 chapters, and more than half of it is about gambling on stones.

This protagonist is a complete waste. Trading a humanoid immortality elixir and a Qilin immortality elixir for a peach from the Jade Pool and a dragon loach is a terrible loss. With that time, you might as well gamble on consuming an immortality elixir seed. You have no guts, no karma, no luck, not even an invincible mindset. Do you deserve to become an emperor?

Fan fiction thrives on a fast pace, stringing together major events from the original work within concise segments. If you're writing fan fiction, not your own book, who's going to buy your filler text for excessive cultivation? Especially if you're writing a "trash-to-hero" story, it's even less suitable for the market.