Yu Xiaogang, the Martial Artist of Douluo

It's pretty, but Zhu Zhuqing's Guangxiu Liuxian dress is a bit inappropriate, mainly because she's too big and it always feels wrong. And the male protagonist, it's really unnecessary, he hides his cultivation. To be more direct, he said he had the cultivation of a Soul Saint. Otherwise, I would always feel like a show-off and be slapped in the face. I would be criticized all the time for being useless and looked down upon. Is it necessary for me to get shocked looks from everyone? So embarrassing. The nature of a warrior is to fight against nature and against others. He should be decisive in doing things and not be vague in what he says. He is afraid of this or that. The content innovation is very good, it has a lot of its own things, if there were not those embarrassing routines of not telling one's own cultivation level, and adding the old routine of being looked down upon by others. It will feel better. Come on, author. I'll give you a monthly pass. I hope it will be better in the future and there won't be any embarrassing things

Author, you have chosen the wrong protagonist. Even if you create a character and then make it up based on his experiences, he is still famous for his theory, as famous as Yu Xiaogang, and then travels to the past and changes his life. There can be a comparison between the two, and the results are probably doubled. Nowadays, most people don't have a good impression of Yu Xiaogang, and they are not lovable.

Suddenly I found that the master was okay. 1. Martial Spirit (the mutation when the Martial Spirit awakens is uncontrollable, it can only be said to be fate, and he has no way to obtain the heavenly materials and earthly treasures that can improve the mutation of his Martial Spirit) 2. Soul power level (the master actually met Tang San when he was around 50 years old. At this time, he was level 29, and he seemed to have been stuck at level 29 for many years. Conservative Counting 4 years at a time, the martial soul was awakened at the age of 6. In this way, the master can cultivate nearly level 30 soul power in 40 years with an innate qualification of level 0.5. He must have worked hard. After all, he is not one of those geniuses, but a waste. If he had not been stuck at level 29, the master would have probably broken through to level 30. Level. Also, he did not look down on Luo Sanpao, but was very good to him. ) 3. Published martial arts knowledge (this knowledge in Douluo seems to be basically controlled by the royal family, nobles, sects, families, or martial arts halls, and is not spread externally. Although the source of his theory is not very legitimate, it is considered plagiarism, and it is not very popular. It is so accurate, but it has been spread out, so that civilians and ordinary people can also have access to some relevant knowledge. After all, everyone in Douluo Continent has a martial spirit, and there will definitely be soul masters with poor talent like the master) Four. A sentence that has been ridiculed by many people, there are no useless martial arts, only useless soul masters. There seems to be nothing wrong with it. Luo Sanpao itself is not useless. In fact, it is a positive mutation. The martial soul itself relies entirely on the development and strength of the soul master! As for saying that he is a waste, that is the truth. He is just an ordinary person who has low self-esteem and wants to prove himself. He is not the protagonist, so why can't others recognize him and laugh at himself? Could it be said that there are only useless martial souls and no useless soul masters? Then there would be no such idioms as defying nature and changing one's destiny, or man's determination to conquer nature. In the end, after the master broke through the shackles with the help of Tang San, the final soul power level reached level 93 (probably). It is unclear whether the martial soul has completely changed and evolved. He can go from level 30 to a titled Douluo in his 50s or even 60s. Even if there is a chance, it is absolutely inseparable from his efforts.

Warrior Yu Xiaogang

I can only say that the author is very brave. Nowadays, the hot spot in Douluo is to torture the three masters of torture, but the author just did the opposite.

It is better for the character of Wu Chi to be single. Most authors cannot write a heroine who matches the protagonist. Although I have only read dozens of your chapters, your problem is obviously that you cannot write a better heroine.

Tsk! What are the advantages of the original Xiao Gangzi? Erudition? Which senior college teacher is worse than him? At most, his identity and early experience in the Spirit Hall gave him a higher level of knowledge, but he didn't know the soul vibration of the fourth spirit ring, so it was probably limited! Inferiority, sensitivity, vulnerability, lots of shortcomings! However, the author arranged for two women with extraordinary talents to be devoted to him, and they wanted to live or die, it was simply amazing!

How could this combination of three and five come to Shrek Academy? The author is just talking nonsense...

People who have watched Dou Yi but not Dou II will not understand why a certain three people shouted to fight, or why Shrek had a bunch of "evil soul masters".

You want Yu Xiaogang to be the protagonist and you still want to be neutral? It's better not to write this fanfic. If you want to create martial arts, it's better to soul-transmit a character. What good will it do to you to transmute a character that so many people hate? If Yu Xiaogang is really a good person, he won't be a clown in hundreds of fanfics. The key point is that you stole the name of such a clown character. It's not because you feel uncomfortable, but why? Write another novel as soon as possible.