Yu Xiaogang, the Martial Artist of Douluo

It looks pretty, but Zhu Zhuqing wearing the Guangxiu Liuxian dress is a bit inappropriate, mainly because it's too big for her, and something just doesn't feel right. And the male lead, there's really no need for him to hide his cultivation level. Just say he has the cultivation of a Soul Saint.

Author, you chose the wrong protagonist. Even if you created an original character and embellished their story, they could be someone famous for their theories, on par with Yu Xiaogang, who then travels back in time and changes their life. There would be a comparison between the two, and their success would likely double. Most people don't like Yu Xiaogang these days; he's not popular.

Suddenly I realized that even a master like him isn't bad. First, his Martial Soul (the mutation during Martial Soul awakening is uncontrollable; it's simply fate. He also lacks the means to obtain rare and precious materials that could improve his Martial Soul's mutation). II. Soul Power Level (Grandmaster met Tang San when he was around 50 years old.

Warrior Yu Xiaogang

All I can say is that the author is incredibly brave. Right now, the focus of Douluo Continent is on torturing the Third Master and the Grandmaster, but the author has deliberately gone against the grain.

It's better for a martial arts fanatic to be single. Most authors can't write a female lead who matches the protagonist. Although I've only read a few dozen chapters of yours, your problem is clearly that you can't write a good female lead.

Tsk! What are the good points of Xiao Gangzi in the original novel? Learned? Which advanced academy teacher is worse than him? At most, his status and early experience at the Spirit Hall give him a bit more insight, but he probably doesn't know about the soul shock of the fourth spirit ring, so his knowledge is probably limited! He's insecure, sensitive, fragile, and has a whole host of flaws!

How could this trio possibly come to Shrek Academy? The author is simply making things up...

Those who have read Douluo Continent I but not Douluo Continent II won't understand why certain three are universally hated, or why Shrek Academy has so many "evil soul masters"—it's like talking to a brick wall.

Want Yu Xiaogang as the protagonist and still want neutrality? You shouldn't be writing this fanfiction. If you want to create a martial arts world, just randomly possess a character. What good will it do you to possess a character so many people hate? If Yu Xiaogang were truly a good person, he wouldn't be a clown in hundreds of fanfictions, but a hot commodity in your eyes.