Dou Po: I Came from the Secret

I can only say that you are not suitable for writing novels. You have made no progress at all in the three golden chapters. If it weren't for the title of the book, you don't even know where you have traveled through time. You have already written a third of the chapters over and over again. Is it true that after these three chapters and three games, the protagonist traveled to ancient fantasy, Goldfinger is the Source Castle, and Tianzun is still very dangerous before he is completely dead. Where did you travel to? What's the main character's name? Where is the main line? What is the identity? Is there any danger now? Why on the street? When a normal person travels through time, don't he find a quiet place first? Crying and laughing like a fool on the street? I can only say that Mijia copywriting has harmed you. I really can't stand it if it's still like this

The ability to break the world view and the pillar of "Fusheng Xuanhuang Tianzun" in Lord of Mysteries is very thoughtful, and the abilities in Lord of Mysteries are very good among many fans, and they are a panacea.

The protagonist has a flaw in his mind, so just give him a golden finger to someone else, but if you give him a witch's path, he will definitely turn against you in the future.

Are Earth Supreme and Heaven Supreme both sequence one? I really don't know how big the difference in combat power between the two is 🤔. The destructive power of the Heavenly Supreme can reach stars, and the description of Klein becoming a true god and moving stars also requires a lot of effort. Don't step on each other. At most, the true gods are highly mysterious, but it's hard to say who is stronger in a head-on battle. It's too much to take advantage of the theme of fighting. The Great Overlord is at least acceptable at the galaxy level and pillar level. After all, the creator is at the cosmic level, but it is outrageous to say that he is a true god. A group of true god angels have not seen anything that can cause damage in a place as big as the earth for many years.

It's already messy enough, but now there's a model month setting. How long can you write this hodgepodge?

The first three chapters, time travel, there is a mysterious golden finger, these two points are written over and over again in the three chapters, I am speechless, who can read it?

Well, there is something wrong with the proportion of the text... 80% Of the text is in various descriptions and explanations of the mystery, which makes the progress of the battle very slow. The long monologues and sometimes mysterious dialogues for several chapters are really a bit watered down... I hope I can control them later.

My evaluation is that if you want to open a harem, just use the secret ability as a golden finger. There is no threat from the God of Heaven. But if you want to have a harem and have secrets, you also need a God of Heaven... You can't even get high with yourself.

Now I think the biggest problem is water! It's really too watery. The protagonist basically pushes everything equally, but I write a chapter about an idea, think about it for several chapters, and then kill the enemy with a few sentences. I'll put it here to understand your inner life, thoughts and experiences, right?😅

After reading the first ten chapters, the author is writing his own thoughts on the seventh floor and above. The plot advancement cannot be said to be a little bit, it can be said to be completely absent. The protagonist is sober and then makes up a plot of "apprenticeship" with the great elder, and then there is nothing. Ten chapters? What did you write in the ten chapters? Is it all about your own views on the mysterious world and the world of struggle?

Protagonist: I traveled through time. The Lord of Mysteries in the Body wants to seize my body. In a few years, the Soul Palace will still come to trouble me. The three paths in my body may get out of control at any time, but it is not important. I came to Dou Qi Continent for only one purpose. Open a harem, open a harem, or open a harem As long as I can open a harem and other problems are not solved, it doesn't matter.

What you wrote makes me feel demeaned just by saying you are watery... You are completely like a sea! In the beginning, just to understand my own situation, I wrote an incredible four or five chapters (it was five or six chapters, I can't remember clearly), a lot of meaningless psychological descriptions, personal monologues mixed with a lot of personal emotions (or complaints)... The plot did not advance at all. I also saw many readers talking about this issue earlier, and the comments became less and less as it went on. I must have failed to stick to it. I haven't learned my lesson yet. I wrote back and forth about four or five chapters before and after the meeting between Shangyuan Castle and that clone. It's still the same, a lot of inner monologues mixed with a lot of complaints...😥😥😥 There are only so many things to explain. For example, give it to that clone. It's just a chapter to give personal details 😰. My inner monologue on various tasks is true. I wiped my butt with gauze and missed a hand 💀 Finally, I'm sorry, I really can't hold on anymore. I won't say anything about wasting time or emotion. The subject matter is novel and attractive, but your content really persuades people to quit.

Why do so many people who write about playing mysterious systems in other worlds do soothsayers? Are there no gates, spectators, hunters, black emperors, etc.? In the ancient context, these approaches should be better developed!

First, the protagonist stood in a daze on the street for 3 chapters, and then returned home and was in a daze for 5 chapters. Really awesome

I feel that all those who write Secret Golden Finger to other worlds have a common problem, that is, they always follow the cultivation system and fighting methods of this world. I mainly want to see the evil skills of mystery shine in other worlds, and give the aborigines a little bit of a shock to the restraint system. What I want to see is to be different from the fist-to-bone fighting style of the fantasy system. However, most of these novels end up with a mysterious skin, and then fight to the flesh with the fantasy world, completely failing to show the master of mystery, the evil and restraint system of authority. I haven't read the second part of this novel. The first part is awkward and boring, which makes people feel that this golden finger is completely useless. The main character's thoughts are boring and lengthy. It's not surprising that I will jump straight to the street.

The main character's psychological activities throughout the story, mental patients have broad thinking, right? 🥵 The plot is very little.

After reading Chapter 21, let me tell you my thoughts. It's too verbose and gives me a headache😩. I like reading your novel, it's quite good, but it really gave me a headache when I read it.

The writing style is average, and if you write a fan, just write a fan. Why do you want to use a confusing and mysterious setting? It's like you are writing a martial arts spirit in a fighting fan. It's a bit poisonous.

How can I put it this way? It's hard to find such a long-winded novel these days. Then I went too far to enjoy myself. There's no need to bother the author.

Shui Wenshui is outrageous. Sometimes I don't know what is said after reading a chapter, and updates are interrupted. If you want to read it, I suggest you get a QQ reading membership and watch it for free 😐

There is too much nonsense talking to oneself. The audience of this book is basically those who have read Mystery and Dou Po, so there is no need to go into too much detail, as everyone will understand. He has been exporting his own opinions, like there is no chance, and he can grab the opportunity of the protagonist if he can. The most powerful thing about Xiao Yan is not the medicine, but his own outrageous understanding. And if you steal Xiao Yan's opportunity, you can't beat the Soul Emperor. It's funny, and even if I give you the opportunity to reduce inflammation, you can't use it. If Xiao Yan can easily become a Dou Emperor just by relying on some so-called medicine masters, there will be no one knows how many Dou Emperors there are among the eight ancient clans. The most awesome person is Xiao Yan. There are too many descriptions in my heart. The three golden chapters alone can persuade a large number of people to quit. Moreover, it will be more cost-effective to wait for Xiao Yan to become the Dou Emperor or the Lord of Heaven. You can win even if you lie down. There is not only one Dou Emperor, but after you go to the world, you can do whatever you want, and you have a backer.

Please, please read at least ten chapters before deciding whether to collect it or not. After reading 20 chapters, you can decide whether to cancel the collection or not. Your collections and clicks are really important to me, as they determine whether I can sign a contract. I will insist on updating every day, 5,000 words a day. After all, the author also has to eat, and he has no income, so he will definitely not be able to write. Alas... How can I put it, I don't ask everyone to collect and vote for it But at least give it a chance to read the first ten chapters. I am a slow-burner. If you don't like it after reading 20 chapters, then cancel it. Maybe you really don't like my writing style? But before that, give me a chance, how about we read the ten chapters carefully?

A Sequence Nine worries about the original being resurrected in his body all day long. Even if Tianzun wants to find a container to seize his body, it will only happen after becoming an angel. It is impossible for a weak individual to accommodate Tianzun's divine resurrection. His body will be exploded in an instant, and he will not even have the chance to twist into a god.

It's pretty good to watch Lehe

Nothing but nonsense, nothing but nonsense