The Mysterious Time Manipulator

After reading Chapter 5, I can't stand it anymore. In the first three chapters, we founded the country with the Loen royal family, and they are still the mainstay of Loen. The family does not have a Sequence 3+0 sealed object, so why should the royal family be afraid of you? The original Princess of Loen is a Sequence 3, not to mention that the royal family also has a Sequence 1 judge, and the fourth era of demigods can only be regarded as T3-T4. The gap is so big, why should we be the mainstay. Also, in Chapter 4, the Time Stone and the Secret-Peeper are not very attractive. What should be paired with something like the Time Stone should be fate or mistakes, like The Fool. The author directly drove away a wave of old mystery readers in the first three chapters, and in the fourth and fifth chapters, there were voyeurs and fighting scholars who were not compatible with the time stone, and he sincerely persuaded them to quit. If you can change it, it's better to change it.

With the blessing of the Time Stone, can it slow down the madness of the potion, turning a wave of 100-point impacts into 10 to 15 waves of 10-point impacts? If possible, find a sealed object that can deprive the extraordinary substance, drink a bottle of magic potion, peel it off after digestion, and continue with the next bottle. The extraordinary ability will disappear, but the instinct and knowledge of transformation will not. Sequence nine has twenty-two abilities, sequence eight has forty-four, and sequence seven and sixty-six... Even if you only choose one sequence as the main sequence after reaching sequence seven, it is much stronger than ordinary extraordinary people, whether it is in terms of diversified abilities, various knowledge bases, or the will to resist madness.

How should I put it? I just read this book for more than 2 hours. Well, I kept reading. Before I clicked in, I skipped it many times because there was a post in front of it, saying how could the royal family be afraid of a small and broken family? However, the fact is true that the royal family will definitely be afraid of this family. It is not that the royal family is worried that other nobles will be worried if they see it. It is that under what circumstances will a nobleman build a luxurious church in his own castle, and it is also a steam church. The protagonist's family has been promoted to the extraordinary in the past generations, and the church is sheltered from the attention of the hidden sage. The person who can play a shielding role is at least an angel, right? Based on the financial resources described by the protagonist's family, do you think those research geeks at Steam will protect the "Xiao Po Decline" family for research funds? Roen's army has high-pressure steam rifles, artillery, and ironclads. Do you dare to say that steam is not significantly involved? Moreover, with the money of the "Xiao Po Decline" family, I think there will be people below Sequence 5 who will be moved by this. Can you tell me how much trouble it will cause if the royal family forcefully wipes out the "Xiao Po Decline" family.

The character of the protagonist is too disgusting. He is obviously a noble. He recruited Genna, gave him Sequence 9 and Sequence 8 potions, and personally bought materials for Sequence 7 potions for his subordinates at the trade fair. Genna did not show any gratitude to the protagonist He is just a subordinate. In the end, it depends on his face, the two of them dialogue, behavior, Either the author is gay or a petty sufferer, otherwise he would not be able to create such a disgusting character I can only say that the first dozen chapters are barely readable. After meeting Genna, he became the licking dog of his subordinates, but this subordinate cannot play a big role. It is disgusting.

Let's talk about the protagonist's family strength As a marquis family spread around the world at the end of the fourth era, such a family should be a demigod family, and is by no means comparable to the likes of Earl Hall. The strongest person in the protagonist's family must be at least Sequence 3. It doesn't matter if there is no demigod now, but there must have been one in the past. Otherwise, how could it be feared by the king's family? Sequence 3 plus the identity and power of the "Pillar" of Moss Ascetic Order are worthy of Augustus' suppression. As the most powerful country in the northern continent, the Kingdom of Loen has twenty or thirty demigods all year round. This is an extraordinary world where strength is paramount. If the head of the family is always Sequence 5, and any demigod can destroy the whole family, is it still worth suppressing by others?

Two and a half years in advance Don't go to Xiao Ke's field, you have to run to be a licking dog

What the author wrote is too poisonous. It poisoned me so much! Here is a scene where a vampire angel breaks a wall with one punch. It is so stupid. There is no use for any extraordinary ability. It is just a physical body that becomes a saint! Are you writing about mystery? When I saw this paragraph, I thought it was Gao Wu? Although the original work does not reflect the ability of the creator of sequence two, judging from the sequence name, it is not physical. It should have the power of creation and the ability to summon. For example, you can make walls come alive, open a door yourself, or summon other angel-level creatures to fight. Show the abilities of the creator and summoning master. Even if the original work does not show the ability of these sequences. But on the road ahead, I turned into a bat. I obviously had the ability to turn into moonlight, so I had to turn into a bat. Later, you said that the angel had actually exposed the monster's conspiracy long ago, and turned into a bat, an entity that could be attacked. I felt that this vampire angel was so stupid and had no character at all. I wonder if the author has read the original work carefully. What is it about? Also, when digesting the wizard's potion, he was so stupid that he didn't even understand how to act, so why should he write this? The role can be played from multiple angles. Red Angel said in the original work that the role of a hunter is only war. But other methods can also be summarized, except that war is the main direction. If you play as a wizard, you can learn a lot of witchcraft and digest it when you reach a certain amount. Or if a large number of people think that the protagonist is a wizard, you can play it. Where are you? I have to create witchcraft. Isn't this sick? The protagonist plays the role of a wizard, not the creator of witchcraft. This kind of problem is not limited to these. There are too many questions. I don't know how you signed the contract. I ordered more than 20 chapters and couldn't stand it at all. So disgusting. Vomited

Don't hug the goddess' thigh again. Although the goddess is good. But after watching too much of the fandom hugging the goddess' thigh, I really got tired of it. Moreover, the goddess favors Klein because there is no conflict of interest between them. Just the behavior of the goddess from ancient times to the present. If she were another person or another way, it's not necessarily what she would do. After all, no one thinks they have too much power, even if they don't need to develop a puppet, they can

I saw the latest chapter, and I was very disappointed with the protagonist. I almost died because of my arrogance! Moreover, champagne has been opened at half time several times. Those who are familiar with the secrets know to be cautious. The protagonist relies on a golden finger (time stone) to have all kinds of sex!

From the setting point of view, moderate or above fans of the original work will not be able to read it; from the writing point of view, even fans of the original work will not be able to read it.

The geographical setting of this book is not my original work It is a map I found online I think some book friends want the map I will send it out for everyone to see If there is any infringement on this map, please contact me to remove it

He recruited a character with no plot at all and aired it several times.

No, how old is the author? The writing is so childish! No matter how good your creativity is, you really can't stand it 😒. I saw around chapter 11 that the 23-year-old protagonist was talking to his father in a coquettish tone unconsciously? You are neither a woman nor a child! And you call your dad "Daddy"? This sounds really awkward. It is definitely not the speaking style of that era. I don't know where in reality other than children are like this. Anyway, in my understanding, there is usually only one "Dad", and in novels, people usually call them father. I had been working for several years before traveling through time. . . A lot of the dialogue is incomprehensible and could not be said by a person of that identity. Also: But, ah, wry smile and other unnecessary words keep appearing over and over again. The accumulation of many small details is really unbearable and makes me unhappy! This is a suggestion to the author, take on the identity of the other person when writing the dialogue, and think about the language carefully! ! !

He was not an extraordinary person, but he could actually defeat Sequence Eight, and he was still very powerful in combat. He couldn't understand it, but he was greatly shocked and persuaded him to retreat.

The author has too many early settings, such as the time stone, the way of the secret spy, the identity of a marquis, and being appointed to a naval position by Duke Negan. It would be fine if the novels were written slowly and slowly, like in the past, but now they are all told in one go, the sense of immersion is reduced, the plot is too predictable, and the golden chapter will dissuade old bookworms. It is suggested that some of the background can be moved back. For example, the family background can be introduced when the family power is needed, and the intersection content can be introduced when meeting the corresponding characters. As for cheats and extraordinary paths, it can be introduced when using abilities. The gimmick serves the novel, not the novel is written around the gimmick.

The author's setting for the protagonist's family is simply unspeakable. If you don't know how to set it up, just use Earl Hall's family to create a new noble of the Fifth Age? Very poisonous

It feels like the protagonist has entered a misunderstanding. He has to digest all the potions before being promoted. It seems that as long as the potions are not digested and promoted, he will definitely die. How embarrassing is it for you to make the mysterious world not know how to act, how embarrassing for the golden finger time stone and the meditation method. Does the failure to digest a small part of Sequence Seven affect the ascension to an angel or to becoming a god? Besides, why can't we digest high-sequence spells now? There are a lot of high-sequence abilities. I don't believe that the family notes can still include spells with high-sequence abilities. They are probably all mid- to low-sequence ones! Do you have to turn left and right in the early stage of rapid development, as if you have plenty of time? Knowing that the end is approaching, you are still so leisurely, so sure that you will succeed within the time? The protagonist seems to have clear ideas in dealing with things, but in fact he has no structure at all. He comes up with ideas one by one, regardless of priority.

Author, if you can't write a plan, don't lean over, okay? He's both good and fun-loving. The first few chapters can poison people to death. If he doesn't know how to write about strategies, let's write something else. No one will say anything.

Well done, I subscribed to every chapter and was finally poisoned. The title of the book is high-end, but there are no plug-ins, so I was forced to find another way. Bye-Bye. If you are reading this book based on the title, proceed with caution. If you think the cheats and the main character are awesome, proceed with caution.

Is there a female protagonist? It's important to me

There is no such useless protagonist. He was crushed to death by steam.

This book includes both Sequence Five Soul Masters and Sequence Seven Devil Dogs. How can you judge for yourself?

The character Gena is the father of the protagonist, right?

Because I am 008, this book is very reasonable.

Isn't it that this is too poisonous in the end?

The writing was okay, but he was a little too kind to his subordinates. Later on, his subordinates were of little use to him. But overall, the setting is still very reasonable. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on.

The main character is not as impressive as the original Susie. After reading twelve chapters, I didn't remember the main character's name•ᴗ•💧

Monthly ticket financiers all say they can't stand it. Le The time stone reads out the sound directly at the beginning Lele Lele

Nowadays, the reading level of readers is really high. The most talked about in the comment area is the shortcomings of the author. Isn't there any praise for the author's merits? By the way, the author's advantage is that he updates well.

This is just a piece of Oli, let's scatter it.