Start Hanging up and Earn Treasure from Kongang Temple

Crazy about the white porridge made by the protagonist. I almost couldn't hold my nerve

What are you writing about? What cooking skills are you writing about in Kongang Temple? The food is also speechless. Is this a gourmet restaurant or a handyman's academy? What we want to see is the profound martial arts and Buddhism

One section is okay, one section is not. The bad parts are basically about the brothers. The protagonist is in trouble. How did the brothers catch up with their strength? No foreshadowing. Then I went to kill a strange beast for the protagonist out of nowhere, and was robbed of the beast's meat and was seriously injured. The protagonist immediately got angry and poisoned me. What is written is all nonsense. How dare you be so reckless with this kind of AFK system?

Are there any temples that do not chant sutras? That's a bandit's den. I'm going, I didn't tell you earlier!

Even if you write a symbolic recitation of Buddha's name and don't study the Dharma, it's better than not reciting Buddha's name at all.

If a monk does not recite the Buddha's name, what is the difference between him and ordinary warriors🤔

Why do we have to write about the Vajra Temple, the fire-burning monks, any sect or Taoist temple? The effect is the same! Many people are saying that monks don't chant sutras, so why bother writing about which temple and which monk?

The first three levels of martial arts are so difficult to enter, I'm not even in the mood to watch them. The first three levels before entering the martial arts are divided into so many small realms.

Why does the time in these chapters not decrease but increase? Mathematics is taught by the physical education teacher

In the first two chapters, the protagonist had 29 merit points, and his friends exclaimed that it was a lot. In the last two chapters, it was said that the meat that the friend shared with the protagonist could only be purchased with 999 merit points. Isn't this inconsistent? Fill in the data blindly, write as much as you think of...

It's okay, but the comments are a bit abstract, like a short play

The author likes to lay eggs and there are ellipsis everywhere. I want to know what you mean by putting the ellipsis directly in the middle of the character's dialogue? How about using an ellipsis as a comma? No matter how bad my Chinese is, I at least know that ellipsis means omission, even if it is used to interrupt the tone, but you used it in the wrong place. It is obviously a normal sentence, but you insist on adding an ellipse to interrupt it. Apart from affecting the perception, I don't know what other effect it has.

I can watch it, it's a martial arts novel with a very unique plot. The protagonist works as a chef in the world of martial arts, which is really weird. Goldfinger advances by becoming stronger and learning cooking skills, and will be rewarded when it is full. Even for the time being, many aspects have not been developed, and the conflicts that the protagonist personally participated in are all trivial. The reading is a bit bland. It depends on how it is written later.

The latest two are not very good for my senses. First, the idle level. If the level is too low, you can't idle on a high-level map. This is wrong. If you want to limit the protagonist's golden finger, you can't limit it like this. It will easily cause resentment. Second, you can't gain experience by hanging up in cycles. You can only gain experience by clearing the level for the first time. The protagonist is currently idle at level 2. If you want to go to the level 3 map, you can only go to the quarry and hunting room to gain experience, which is very bad. Third, to lay the foundation, we will talk about three levels at the beginning, and then four levels, and a monk who enters the house. The protagonist comes out of the kitchen. Logically speaking, he should enter the temple and the kitchen. The promotion channel of the protagonist is wrong. , Fourth, there are too few promotion channels, which is the biggest problem. In the handyman room, you should have at least three or five people who can be promoted from the handyman room in a year, but there is no such thing in the whole article. With so many handymen every year, can the handyman room accommodate so many people? It cannot last for decades, and it takes decades to get promoted. Personally There are a few questions to follow. I would like to ask, if the temple wants disciples and does not recruit people from the janitor's room, should the temple directly recruit famous masters from outside, or find orphans to train them?

How come these paragraphs in the first few chapters are almost all slander? And most of them are just for the sake of trolling. Has the author offended someone? Readers of similar new books are not so violent.

This idle level is very abstract. Can you explain in detail what this level is? Logically speaking, if you set the kitchen as a map for a level, then there must be monsters and bosses. Defeat them to complete the level. Now it depends on time, and you will clear the level as soon as the time is up. In the novels I have read before, the protagonist goes to the map to explore or kill monsters, and then there is profit. You, a cheat, only spend time, and do not see any connection with the level.

Especially in order to counteract cheating, we forcefully "invent" various reasons to suppress. In that case, cheating will be in vain...

If you like to see other worlds, can you travel back in time? Two worlds

The writing is quite good, but I don't know what attitude the book reviewers hold in their evaluations!

The later levels are slow, why can't I clear the previous levels to get supplies? If not, isn't this plug-in still a God-given reward for hard work?