The Game Starts with Confession to the Devil

Almost all the chapters that have been published so far have been ordered. Let me talk about the problem with the book. The previous writing was pretty good, so I subscribed if I thought I could follow it, but the pace of these recent chapters has been too slow. I have written more than a dozen chapters about a plot about going to the Duke's Palace to negotiate, but I haven't even finished it yet. Even the latest chapter hasn't even been started yet. It really affects the viewing experience and feels a bit watered down. I suggest you speed up the pace. 2. Regarding the female supporting character Nora, to be honest, I don't know what the author's positioning is for this character. In the first dozen chapters, it felt like a standard vicious female supporting character template. But then I was saved by the protagonist and I thought I was going to clean it up. However, in the latest chapter, she harmed the protagonist in various ways. I felt very confused and I didn't know which side she was on. 3. The problem of the proportion of descriptions between the heroine and other female supporting characters. At present, this book should be based on the harem style, but after reading it, I found several problems. That is, the female supporting character or female supporting role has too many emotional descriptions of the protagonist, making it difficult to distinguish her role. Specifically, it's the female supporting characters Ilsa and Jennifer. These two should be supporting roles, but they like the description of the protagonist a little too much, which feels a bit abrupt. It would be better to write them as simple friends. Let's not talk about the good parts of this book. The most important thing is the rhythm. The pace these days is really too slow. I hope the author writes more what readers want to see and tries to keep the sense of anticipation.

Hey, what kind of classical opening is this? Does it have to be a scene where the soul of the original owner competes with the soul of the protagonist for the body? I thought the author would have some special design? As a result, the soul of the original owner in Chapter 2 is gone? Is it just to show the truth that licking a dog will lead to a good death? It would be better to write the protagonist to clean up the original owner's mess at the beginning, change a paragraph of text, and then delete the dialogue when the original owner dissipates in the third chapter, then it will be OK, and it will have no impact on the rest. So I'm really curious what the author thinks

Although I haven't read it yet, I took a look at the synopsis. How about changing the title to Confessions of the Demon King in Another World? I feel like this is more attractive.

The names of the characters are always unclear. The reason is that there are too few updates, so I will update them soon.

It was a bit overwhelming to watch. If you think about it carefully, some of the plots were developed just for the development of the plot. The protagonist did not get any actual benefits from it, but instead made him feel embarrassed. 😓

Although I didn't watch it but just passed by, I still want to say something "Ah, Shirley"

This is the boss's trumpet. It's well written and has no poisonous points. It's just that the moonlight gauntlet is a bit abnormal. The energy converter usually wears out. He can convert moonlight into other energies and release skills that other systems don't have. This conversion device Only a small gauntlet is used to carry it. The strength of its material can currently support the conversion of fourth-level spells. And how much budget did he have when manufacturing it? The manufacturing strength of the gauntlet is high and the parts are small. It also requires machine tools and various tools. He can't make it with his bare hands, and it only took a day or two to build it. This doesn't make sense.

The writing of this Nora is really disgusting, and then this Duke, I don't know how big and small brains develop, obviously wants the younger daughter and allows the older daughter to abuse her. He leaves Nora alone and wants to kill Aaron. Before, he said "I want to thank you on behalf of Nora" to thank the savior. It is a joke. It's finished 🤔

Sure enough, you can't lick a dog in the house

I saw a lot of references to the Shepherd's Tantra, and the two gave me similar impressions. However, the writing and plot control of this one are obviously much worse, but it can be watched as a meal replacement. Okay, average. Evaluated as food and grass (acceptable to satisfy hunger)

It's too early, why should I get this book so early? 🙂

The protagonist is so stupid, but he has so little strength and dares to help terrorists get away with it.

Is it a single heroine or a harem?

The plot is very rough, and the situation is evenly matched at the beginning. Normally, it would be better if you fail to express your love and disappear on your own, because later if you show up and refuse, you can contact and give. However, it can be seen from the beginning that it is simply the author who is poor in this aspect. You still need to pay more attention to it. I like the subject matter.

I just caught up on the update. This book is so cool. I only read it after a few hours.

It only took one day and one night to finish reading the latest update. Can you do it?