With the Wind: The Leisurely Life of a Manor Lord

Xu Hongdou

If you like Youfeng fan, please don't finish it

It's almost like writing based on Xie Zhiyao's template, and you are still the protagonist. Xie Zhiyao doesn't know how to chase girls before, so why did you go four years in advance?

The writing of Pig's Knuckle is too pretentious, with too many internal dramas, resulting in serious distortion of the original plot and characters.

It's so boring, it's not about falling in love, and it can't capture the atmosphere, which makes it very draggy to watch.

Looks like he's a eunuch

I can't write an article that everyone likes, so I basically just write according to my own ideas. If you can read it, read it. If you don't like it, I hope it will be a good word. Thank you!

The plot of this book moves very slowly. The first part is okay, but later on the topic of fishing becomes inseparable. As a fishing guy, most of the content is about fish topics, such as the price of fish and where to catch fish. How to Make Delicious Food, with more than 10 chapters, I read all the books and abandoned them.

It's really awkward to watch you write a novel. After reading the first chapter, I remembered "millions", "millions" and "nearly millions", but nothing else. Would you die if you just reported a real number? Five, six million, seven or eight million sounds uncomfortable. If it weren't for Liu Yifei, no one would read the second chapter of your writing

Brother, don't always follow the same routine. I haven't gotten a girl in this chapter for almost a hundred chapters. It was four years in advance. It was written like a TV series, only the time is different. It also omitted a few major ingredients. It was just about the two of you. After writing a hundred chapters, nothing has been accomplished. It is getting more and more sloppy. There is no useful information.