With the Wind: The Leisurely Life of a Manor Lord

Xu Hongdou

I like the fanfiction "Wind," so please don't leave it unfinished!

It's practically a carbon copy of Xie Zhiyao's story, and you're the protagonist, yet you're not even as good at pursuing girls as Xie Zhiyao. Why did you start four years earlier?

The protagonist's character is written too sentimentally, with too many internal monologues, causing a serious distortion of the original plot and characters.

It's drawn-out and hesitant; it doesn't really talk about romance, and it fails to capture the right atmosphere, making it very tedious to read.

It seems he's a eunuch.

I can't write articles that everyone will like, so I'll basically just write according to my own ideas. If you like it, great; if you don't, please be kind with your words. Thank you!

The plot moves very slowly. The beginning was alright, but later it revolves entirely around fishing. The author is a fishing enthusiast, and most of the content focuses on fish-related topics, such as fish prices, best fishing spots, and how to cook them deliciously. There are over 10 chapters of this, and I subscribed to the entire book but then abandoned it.

It's really awkward reading your novel. After reading the first chapter, all I remember are "millions," "tens of millions," and "nearly millions." I can't remember anything else. Would it kill you to just state a real number? Five or six million, seven or eight million—doesn't that sound uncomfortable? If it weren't for Liu Yifei in the picture, I doubt anyone would have read the second chapter.

Dude, stop with the same old formula. Nearly a hundred chapters and you still haven't gotten a single woman, and you're even writing it four years in advance! It's like a TV drama, just with different timelines, and you've even omitted some key elements. It's all about the two of you, a hundred chapters and you haven't accomplished anything, it's getting increasingly padded out, no substance at all.