After Being Reborn, I Decided to Return to the Countryside

The female lead is a bit awkward. Everything else is fine. If the author isn't good at writing romance, I suggest reducing its length. After all, the focus is on the leisurely rural life, so the presence or absence of a female lead isn't that important.

Once Chen Wei appears, you can drop this show. The dialogue is extremely awkward, the imagined scenarios are extremely awkward, and the way they interact is extremely awkward. The protagonist is portrayed in no way like a high-level executive at a large company before his rebirth, and he even lacks the experience of working odd jobs for several years in this life. But these are minor issues, until Chen Wei appears, which makes things truly awkward.

The protagonist's mouth is covered in excrement and urine, so he can't speak. What era are we living in? The author is still using this kind of writing style; are you not afraid of it flopping?

I've given up on it. Hope you all have a good time. I just can't stand having a female lead like that. I personally really liked the first few chapters without the female lead, but once she appeared, it felt out of place, and I just couldn't continue watching. As one brother said, it's kind of a double-edged sword—you can't throw it away, but it's not very interesting either!

There's just too much focus on the girls, author. In other words, there are far too many side stories; the main plot should be progressing too!

Having read up to chapter 12, I'm here to vent: The two worlds are roughly at the same level in terms of development, but the point of divergence is a few months before the college entrance exam. The original owner of this body persevered and passed the exam, while the current owner suffered a mental breakdown and failed the exam.

This book doesn't align with the mainstream spirit, which advocates doing practice problems from a young age and then working for entrepreneurs in big cities for the rest of one's life. If everyone were like you, how could entrepreneurs guarantee employment? Who would be exploited and oppressed? How could they possibly make money upfront?

The author started causing trouble after the book was published. After more than 100 chapters, the problematic elements started to appear more frequently. It is recommended to skip around chapter 160, as the character has already died from poisoning. ... There are some flaws later on, sigh. The character design is also flawed. The protagonist is inhuman in his daily life.

The author should really write down the characters' relationships, names, skill lists, and proficiency levels on a separate sheet of paper. It's nice to look at it occasionally; the current inconsistencies are really unbearable!

I don't understand the author's mentality. Couldn't they just stick to writing about going back to their village to become a content creator? It's only a few chapters in, barely any videos, and they've already added a romance subplot. It's incredibly awkward and reads like a diary entry. The worst part is that they've written several chapters in a row like this.