Cultivating Immortality with a Status Panel, Starting at Qingyun Sect

You always complain that Realm looks very messy. I have changed everything back to the original. I lost a lot of my brain cells in order to compile the description of Realm. Now that I have changed it all, I feel a little heartbroken!

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Lu Xueqi likes the protagonist to be incomprehensible and write like an inflatable doll. Baguio likes Zhang Xiaofan mainly because he shares joys and sorrows in the Blood Cave. If the plot is changed, can Zhang Xiaofan be loved at first sight because of his good looks? What are you writing? Childish characterization

Something doesn't feel right when I read it, a novel about cultivating immortals! Doesn't that mean that the master is a teacher and the strong is respected? But here you are, the protagonist is obviously the number one in the sect, but he is shorter than others. And if you ask a second realm person to be the leader and lead a sect with thousands of people, are you sure you can conquer both the inside and outside? Shock surroundings? The overall feeling is: the protagonist is too soft. He has one foot in the fairyland, but he salutes the novice and calls him senior every day. The key is that the novices know that the protagonist is very high, but they take it as a matter of course. What's even more outrageous is that he is always on call, which makes the strong man lose his face...

Recently, there was a small recommendation, and the number of people who read it suddenly increased a lot, and many people criticized it. The author is a complete newcomer, and this is his first novel. It will definitely not satisfy everyone. You can just read it reluctantly. I will also accept your reasonable suggestions. I hope you will be merciful. Thank you!

Does the power of plot revision mean that no matter how the protagonist struggles, the big hands behind the scenes can dial the plot back to the original? Wouldn't it be better if the protagonist lay flat? It's easier to write this way.

The author likes his own ➕ setting so much that he changes it too much and it's ridiculous

Nowadays, novice authors often suppress the word count of the main character and want to write a thousand or hundreds of chapters. I think if you can write five or six hundred chapters and keep readers interested in reading, you are already very successful.

I think this is what Xue Qi looks like in my heart

After reading the free chapter, let me talk about the main poisonous point of this book: the author is too single-minded when describing the characters, and his facial expressions are solid. His mentality has not changed with the growth of age, status and cultivation, and he is still so naive and simple. For example: It is hard to imagine that an elder from Shangqing (forty or fifty years old) would blush from time to time; it is also hard for me to imagine that the protagonist would immediately panic and explain quickly because of a small question from others (students with lower cultivation and status than himself). Anyway, after reading the free chapter, the biggest impression I have on the protagonist is that his mentality is always 18 and there is no growth at all. For adults with social experience, it is difficult to have a sense of substitution and the readability is extremely poor.

Recently, many people have said that the Ya of my Tian Ya Sword is written as Tian Xie Sword. The author has changed it, and the spells of various sword techniques have been changed. I hope everyone can give me more opinions. I can change it if you see it. I hope everyone can support it.