Evolution from Scratch with Added Points

This book, so far, is at a good level. It is told in a eloquent way, and apart from falling in love, there are no too embarrassing plots. The shortcomings are probably the lack of drama and tension in conflicts, and the main line is not bright enough. The former is a problem with writing skills and can only be polished slowly; the latter seriously suspects that the outline is not done well and there is a bottleneck. The main plot should be the super human project, but with 0.01 Screen refreshes all day long, there is less and less expectation for growth. Internal strength has also been added, but there is no need to increase it... Is there any value in combat power? The protagonist has never had a fight so far. This story is not originally about fighting and killing, right? In fact, occasionally we should return to the main line, just like when the measurements reach 1, it should be a summary of the early suspense. But in the book, the past is gone, so bland that nothing happens. The expected physical transformation and so on are spread into countless 0.01, So diluted that it is undetectable.

Dark blue with a bit of farming/daily writing, an ancient flavor, you can take a look. The story is nothing new, but the unique skills are quite creative. The whole thing is just plain practice, but he actually gets a lot of experience, he performs unique skills, everyone is amazed, and the cycle continues like this. I read more than 200 chapters in one go, but I haven't read them back. I can't comment on the update speed.

The author is great. I have read Chapter 36. The first part feels good. Will the later plot develop in the direction of extreme sports players? After all, this system is so suitable. The protagonist is a loser in front and gradually becomes a big player with a strong mind. This development is very interesting.

The first chapter persuaded me to quit. In the first chapter, the company went bankrupt. He yelled at the HR of the company, complaining that the company was gone. Where could I find such a good job! My company has been liquidated and dissolved, so I still have to worry about your future? What does the company owe you? And this company is quite good. When he resigned, he was given n+1 compensation and was introduced to a new job. However, he complained all over the place and felt that the bosses of the company did not care about his life and death. You are a part-time worker, and the company was dissolved and gave you n+1, and even found a job for you. What else do you want? Then the author's inexperienced side emerged. The protagonist's monthly salary is 12k, with no car loan, no house loan, and no family to support, but he complains that his salary is not enough, the rent and living expenses are too heavy, and the pressure of life is too high. He feels that after leaving his job, he may starve to death. Are you kidding me? You are a single man in Hangzhou, and 12,000 a month is not enough? How do people with lower wages than you live? You go to bars and red light districts every day, right?

It is indeed well written. This is the only well-written novel about diaosi. The author of other books is not as good as others. The protagonist is as embarrassed as a diaosi. He writes like a diaosi but not a real diaosi. But the author writes this diaosi really well 👍👍👍

In fact, if you are really extraordinary, you really can't find a wife! At first glance, the face is full of large pores. Unless this person has the skin of a baby, it is basically impossible!

This is the first time I've seen someone write about cheating in such a distressing way.

Don't talk about the national level. It's easy to get involved and you can't control it. Just like the book "Forty Not Confused", it was originally well written and talked about the love and hatred between family and country. It's like he's a different person, and the bullshit written next is incomprehensible.

As soon as the protagonist's father was kidnapped, the book fell apart in my opinion. The father is suffering, and the protagonist cannot save anyone but can only wait and develop slowly. The author can't cut through the mess quickly. Every time a chapter is delayed, it feels a bit frustrating. Coupled with the author's update speed, it is absolutely killing it. I don't know what the author's brain circuit is thinking, so I can only give it a 6.

Wu Fang

Don't write about women 😰 Dude, you are already extraordinary and why are you still thinking about women? The perspective is wider and extraordinary. Even if you don't reform the world, you can leave the earth and explore the unknown universe. How many years can you find a woman to support you? After all, you will be a beauty with a dead body.

I feel like the protagonist is a bit stupid. If a normal person has a proficiency-adding system, who is going to practice skimming and darts? Can't I use this for running, squatting, jumping jacks, reading, practicing calligraphy, and answering questions? If you have to practice it, it will be of no use to your own life.

Shocked that a diaosi could be portrayed in such an image. But I want to make some comments. Real losers have never seen a woman with so many psychological activities.

? How did you create such a 2b protagonist? He doesn't know anything and is surprised by everything. Damn it. Is he a caveman? I really can't stand it. I can't even read Chapter 30.

I added a little bit to the real world to become stupid and start a new life.

An ordinary person getting a plug-in is the same as not getting one. I wonder how the protagonist lives to such an old age without any plans for the future? I don't even have any idea about how to make good use of plug-ins, and I don't have any conditions to explore the content of plug-ins. I still live the same way as if I didn't have plug-ins. Isn't it okay to explore plug-ins and change myself while going to work? The protagonist is so stupid that he doesn't even have any emotions after receiving the external hexagram.

After feeling the various gains brought about by upgrading in vain, he did not immediately find something to practice that could truly or better improve his body. This shows that the protagonist does not have the way of thinking and behavioral logic that normal people should have. Forced wisdom, hydrology

Boring and boring. The subject of "Realistic Independent Law" is difficult to write because there are no rivals, and there are not many similar books that can be used for reference. But once you write it, it is a genre that is bound to explode. Obviously, you can't write it well. You have successfully shared with us the tragic life of a 30-year-old man with a mentality of a 3-year-old cowardly second-rate. Thank you, the author. I still don't understand one thing. Why do all authors who write so-called-me novels include ancient martial arts? I really don't understand Tai Chi Monkey Boxing or Shit Beetle Boxing. If someone has practiced martial arts and real-life fighting for several years, if you ask them to fight, you can figure out who will win with your feet! So under this premise, why not write about power techniques and fighting techniques? Physique can be written in terms of muscle density and body fat. For example, muscles are more extensible and developable. In the later stage, you can write something similar to a muscular tyrant. For example, Superman maintains a human figure and appearance, but can burst out with incredible power, including a body as strong as gold and iron! In terms of character creation, compared to the cowardly and nonsensical character, readers prefer the characters to have their own ideas, calmness, composure, perseverance, and online IQ. However, in the first chapter alone, you successfully showed the readers that the protagonist is incompetent, angry, and useless. You wrote him as a 3-year-old at the age of 30, with an IQ and EQ of minus 300! We make the most basic assumption. In reality, if a 30-year-old man's company is dissolved and his middle-level leader is laid off, how will he behave, what is his mentality and what kind of presentation skills will he have? A calm smile? Is he free and easy? Is it dismissive? Are you mentally prepared? Is it confidence in oneself? Lots and lots of ways to write it, right? But you chose the most retarded way of writing! Let's talk about the plot, because the uniqueness of reality leads to a lack of extension of the plot. It can be supplemented by women's drama, career, and status. You can refer to the book Becoming a Vampire. Let's talk about cheats. I think some readers have made suggestions. Why can't some very good skills be included? Your answer is that Goldfinger does not approve it! I don't understand, I really don't understand. It is clear that some skills are more attractive to readers and win their favor, but they do not write about them. Instead, they write about skills that are tasteless and a pity to abandon, and they are completely worthless! For example, we can sum up the skills, strength and accuracy of exerting force, right? There are many ways to write skills, power, and accuracy, but you chose the most boring one. You are the author, so you have the final say. In summary, a 30-year-old man has lived a trouble-free and loser life. I don't know if the author will read these, and I don't know if he will delete the comments. Let's encourage each other!

It's truly a Renaissance. I feel like I've gone back to 10 years ago. When I go out, I will meet a girl. If the girl has a grandpa, the grandpa will definitely know martial arts. He fights in the park every day. The protagonist must pretend to be awesome. The grandpa will be impressed and teach all kung fu. Hahaha, it's really numb.

As soon as the plot of saving his father came out, he almost poisoned people to death. In reality, in addition to abducting children and evading responsibility, if an adult disappears for more than two days without any reason, the probability of survival is very small. The protagonist's father has been missing for more than ten years, and the kidnappers ignore it. When the protagonist has the strength, they start blackmailing. The mentally handicapped plot is too deliberately created. In order to write that the protagonist is a filial and affectionate person, the author is just like a lunatic who has lost his mind and has become mentally ill. The chance of finding someone when looking for a needle in a haystack is almost zero, and there is no official guarantee that the person can be found. The protagonist first donated five million, and then donated 100 million (not counting ancient votes, he only has tens of millions in cash). Are there such fools and saints in the real world? In the real world, there are countless examples of relatives turning against each other because of money. Author, since you want to write about such a great relationship, why don't you simply write that the enemy threatens the protagonist's father or girlfriend's life and forces the protagonist to commit suicide, and then wouldn't the ending be the most perfect?

I can't stand the feeling of having my thighs ripped off during a martial arts competition with the Japanese. You just do this in a martial arts competition and teach others how to handle it. If the Japanese government doesn't do it, who will you do?

After going to Japan, burning the God's Toilet, assassinating people, engaging in mold, and engaging in submarines were really a failure! It doesn't fit with your calligraphy and painting style, it's too abrupt. The most enjoyable part is the upright and upright one. Now the plots are too petty. Especially the news that an Internet celebrity went to spray paint. It's not pleasant to watch at all

After the protagonist got the plug-in, he immediately thought about improving his skills in cheating. He did not consider boxing, basketball, football and a series of better skills. He just thought about cheating in his mind.

I was a little embarrassed when I started smashing the signs in Tokyo. I haven't read these chapters. I want to ask if the plot in the next few chapters can be smoothed out? It's not that I lack the money, but I'm mainly afraid that it will get into my bones and I'll be completely embarrassed. I quite like this book, and it's one of the books I've been following for a long time.

I see my beautiful sister every day and then yy, please don't write like that, please. This kind of spiritual writing is suitable for a heroine who constantly challenges the limits and strengthens herself step by step. She has no future in engaging in bloody plots and dealing with females every day, brother.

Mycoplasma infection, severe cough, still not cured I still can't sleep after coughing at midnight every day, so updates will be slower these days. I am recovering, my strength has not returned yet.

Very good theme and rhythm, I like it very much. I also remind you that if there are fantasy elements, try to wait until later. Because they have been written all over the place, if I write more, I will inevitably suffer from aesthetic fatigue and weaken the competitiveness of this book.

It's quite a two-stroke book. In order to clear up Chuanwu's reputation, he just made a setting. He must be taught face to face to have real skills. If you want to write, follow the example of other authors and just make up the setting. Just write that Chuanwu is awesome. It has to be so hard-hitting and off-putting.

The work should not have the same name as the author, or go off the beaten track

The more you look at it, the better it looks 😁, recommended. It's not a piece of writing, it's not a brainless pretense. After reading it now, it's just my own approach, and the author has made it clear that it is. The protagonist did not become a superman all of a sudden. Instead, he exercised step by step from a thirty-year-old man, worked hard to become a healthy person, and finally became a strong man, from which he learned a lot of rehabilitation knowledge.