The Mastermind Behind Hogwarts

I seriously doubt the author actually read Harry Potter. 😎

I feel the author lacks their own understanding of Harry Potter and magic. The author doesn't provide a clear definition of magic, merely relying on the book's depiction. For example, the protagonist hasn't learned magic before school starts, and there's no clear explanation initially—whether he chants spells with no effect or reacts but the effect is incorrect.

They're like little kids, with a leader or something. It would be better to start with an orphan from Qidian.com.

Is the third Dark Lord the protagonist? 😏😏😏 (Too small-scale, too narrow-minded 🔨), or is he the master of the magical world the male lead? 🪖

Why does the protagonist seem like a completely different person after chapter 18?

It's boring, and the character setup is a bit off.

Naming an owl "Grandpa Cat" is truly ingenious; the repeated use of "Grandpa Cat" is getting annoying.

The protagonist will later establish his own wizarding organization, which will initially take the form of a school club. Does anyone have any good names for it, such as a readers' club or a library club? I'm terrible at naming things, so this is really difficult.

I still feel that the main character between chapters 18 and 20 is really awkward.

Um, wasn't Hogwarts accepting students because they were afraid of Obscurials? I remember there was a setting in the Obscurial mechanics where a young wizard who hadn't received formal magical training could become an Obscurial.