The Mastermind Behind Hogwarts

I seriously doubt that the author has actually read Harry Potter 😎

I feel that the author lacks his own understanding of Harry Potter and his understanding of magic. The author did not make a clear definition of magic, but only based on the use of magic in the original work. For example, the protagonist did not learn how to do magic before school started. There was no clear and practical explanation at the beginning. For example, there was no response after chanting the spell, or there was still a response but the effect was wrong. The later explanation for this borrowed from the system, saying that there is no "devil-suitable physique." The important point is that there is no "devil-suitable physique", which does not mean that there is no magic power. If you take it literally, it means that he has magic power, but his body is not used to it. Is there a logical conflict? This means that there is no relationship between magic and magic in the author's outline. Including Chapter 35 when Professor McGonagall asked about the role of consciousness, the author did not give a detailed definition, just using ellipses. This shows that the author has no self-understanding and self-definition of magic. The author does not "believe" in magic, nor does he consider magic to be part of the logical relationship of the world. There is also the problem of character design. To be honest, it is not particularly strange. The behavior and psychological logic are quite reasonable. However, the character change is a bit abrupt in some places, giving readers a feeling that the protagonist is inconsistent. I hope the author will be better and better, there are still too few Ravenclaws T^T

Just like a child, if you set a boss or something, it would be better to start with an orphan.

Is the third Dark Lord the protagonist 😏😏😏 (It's too small, the pattern is too small 🔨), he should be the master of the magic world, is he the male protagonist 🪖

Why does the protagonist seem like a different person after Chapter 18?

It's boring, the setting is a bit broken

You are really a genius in naming the owl Uncle Cat. You are bored by saying one sentence after another.

The protagonist will later establish his own wizard organization. The prototype is a school club. Do you have any good names, such as Readers Club, Library Club... It is difficult to choose a name.

I still feel that the main character in the middle of Chapter 18 to Chapter 20 is too awkward.

Um, isn't it because Hogwarts accepts students because they are afraid of the appearance of the Obscurus? I remember that in the mechanism of the appearance of the Obscurus, there is a setting where a young wizard becomes an Obscurus without systematic magic learning.