My Tokyo Love Game Has Big Problems

Personal views. If there are any questions, the author's original intention and subsequent development of the work shall prevail. 1. I guess there are certain problems with the protagonist's physique (soul or body), so he will attract several inhuman and dangerous heroines. 2. This work is about love, but it contains a lot of extraordinary elements, especially bloody violence. Please read it and cherish it, and there is a possibility of being forced to delete it. (To be honest, Qidian is now more powerful in catching pornographic than violent people, but looking at the current trend, the author is very likely to combine the two) 3. The protagonist's mental state is not normal, which is manifested in extraordinary adaptability. (Say oh (no emotion) to the surreal factors). Also towards life (I suspect it includes both the protagonist's own life and the lives of others, currently mainly manifested in his own life). There is a kind of detachment that is calm when it is lost and calm when it is gained. 4. There is a system, which is currently the biggest drawback for the protagonist. It allows the protagonist to understand the heroines, analyze the situation, and the rewards obtained give him a certain ability to resist. (It's not yet given enough ability to resist) But I don't rule out the possibility that the protagonist himself is a bigger trap than the system The overall style should still be a little bit dark and niche (this aspect is okay, mainly because it is difficult to portray absolute despair with a system, but without a system and any means of becoming stronger, it is a truly dark death struggle). But if you just want to watch normal love life, you can moisturize it in advance.

I feel like I saw it on a certain website. Did the author plagiarize it? Let's do this, you code another thirty chapters to prove that you are not plagiarizing.

Now that Yachiyo Yayoi can be resurrected, can she play some heavy-tongued Play?

What's wrong with us gal players😭😭😭 Correct, galgame is like this, the industry💊

Sure enough, there are objective reasons why this book is not popular.

Just started watching Can this system give the protagonist any abilities? If everyone except the protagonist has extraordinary abilities, but the protagonist has no abilities, then it is basically a story about abuse of the protagonist. If you don't believe me, check out other similar light novels.

Finished? ? ? ? It's funny. It feels like it's over at the climax. Is it possible to write more about daily life before it's over? It's too hasty. It's really fake to keep it and then disappear.

Hey, will there be a mother and daughter?😌

The protagonist and his daughter are together, this time travel is so exciting 😍😍

The author's latest plot is getting into the groove! To be honest, I was really surprised when I first read it, but the plot was too bland later on, so I started to skip reading it. I was still wondering if it was another novel that starts high and then goes low. I even thought that I could no longer accept slow-burning novels. The latest plot turns out to be surprisingly good! Looking forward to further developments! But does the mystery of the protagonist's life experience end like this? It feels a bit sloppy, and the heroines haven't opened a Shura field for a long time. Is it because they want to go through a single-line plot first? Are there any foreshadowings for the protagonist? I always feel that the protagonist is a bit too ordinary. How should I put it, there is less mystery in the protagonist himself.

Nice looking, rewarded. It's up to you to update it after it's put on the shelves.

I take back what I said before. The setting of this book is quite good. The plot in the front is a little too strenuous, but you can read it later.

This book is too abstract for everyday love. It should be placed in suspense, and everyone started to gnaw at each other. Amazon! ! !

Is this author the author of Tokyo Gods Only Wants Beautiful Girl Priests? It feels a bit like the author has been typing the protagonist's name into Yuchengguang in the last few chapters.

This... Is written too harshly! Don't you care about the review? It is predicted that this book will definitely get 404 if it breaks the circle The police have been called, the author is feeding juice to rats.

😭😭When will the update be updated? You don't know how to be a eunuch, do you?

Is this book really a daily romance novel? I wouldn't find it inappropriate if you add any superpower to the protagonist and start fighting in the next second, turning it into a Western fantasy?

Is the book almost finished? I also want to see more about modern Shura fields? Quite creative

Isn't this serious 🙂

This Aye must be the mother-in-law, right? Can this be written?

The writing is very good, but not enough to read 🙂

I feel like there are too many female protagonists. There will be more than 30 chapters.

It's very well written, good luck to the author

The beginning may not be very eye-catching, but the middle content is good. As for the ending, if it is watery, it can be a lot watery. If you add a plot, you have to change the environment and add events, which is difficult to write. If it is the first time to write, it is already pretty good. I don't know when a new book will be released.

The story is quite complete, everything that needs to be explained is explained 🌹

Is this really the author's debut novel? It's quite well written.

After reading and fully ordering it, to be honest, even 50% of the content and rhythm before it was released was something that I could read but didn't want to support at all. The content and rhythm of 50% to 70% were just right. 70-85% Made me decide to fully order it. The last 15% of the holes that needed to be filled in were all written, but the pace was still too fast (but not unfinished). The ethical relationship is too stimulating, and I don't know if the poor performance has been affected by this aspect (it is said that even if the starting point is written about mother and daughter or sisters, it will affect the recommendation even if they are not banned, not to mention the relationship between the male and female protagonists in this book is n times more complicated). Overall, it is a book with a weak sense of system and little use. Maybe the author has not thought about the role of this system. If he does not think about its role, the system may be a demerit. And for the last 30% of the plot, there may still be too little foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Although the rationality is still maintained, the rhythm problem cannot be solved by ensuring the completeness of the content (it may also be because the results are too poor and I don't want to be a eunuch). Maybe the next one will be a little more conservative and have a more reasonable rhythm in the early and late stages. It may also have a mythical or magical background theme, and the results may be better. All in all, it is a good book, and I look forward to continued improvement in the next book (if there is one).

Is there any Shennong? Let me give you an evaluation. Is it because I have an appendix?