I Just Want to Outlive You All, Don't Make Me Beat You to Death

When I first started reading: Great book! The beginning is exciting, the subsequent development trend is also good, and the description of the protagonist is also very good After reading for a while: This is not the routine of writing fantasy novels in the past. The people around me are those who like to pretend to be pigs and eat tigers 😥, and slowly I feel that the following plot is not interesting anymore.

After it was put on the shelves... In one sentence, I am a historian, and this is history

Three major poisonous points 1. Buying and selling lifespan, although the conditions set by the author are unreasonable, if lifespan can be bought and sold, the consequences will be disastrous; 2. Suppressing the growth of the protagonist, forcibly binding the black snake is annoying, deliberately slowing down the pace and increasing the difficulty. The protagonist gradually becomes a waste with low talent and requires a lot of resources, and the fun point disappears; 3. The amazing beginning, the plot of crotch pulling, gradually degenerates into a cliché map plot, like a patchwork of several Tomato novels, nondescript.

Maybe I didn't look at it carefully. Isn't it the lifespan of a pill and its strength increases with each passing day? Why didn't I see any signs of strength later?

This book was well written before it was put on the shelves. You can take a look at it. I suggest you delete the book and run away when you see "Advancing to the Immortal Realm through the Teleportation Formation Under the Palace" here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Of course, if new readers who are new to the Internet can continue reading, it is also beneficial to eat more poison 🙂

Are you really not going to fix such a big bug? In the alchemy competition, didn't the protagonist assume someone else's identity? Why did the people in Windy City know that the person who made the alchemy was actually the protagonist? Of course, if you patch it later, just pretend I didn't tell you. It's really uncomfortable to see such a big bug 😰

The writing is good, but it's a pity that the protagonist turned into a greedy and cheap villain in the later stage for resources, and could not escape the fate of cultivating immortal novels.

Run! Run! All I can say is that he is worthy of being a great master. Really. He started poisoning as soon as he put it on the shelves. If you don't know how to write about conspiracy and calculation, don't write about it. It's purely abstract. Did you agree with the studio to just write the beginning? It's about to be put on the shelves and someone will be replaced. I still have the nerve to lick my face and say that I cried while writing it.

It's too greasy, and I always do what I did in my previous life. Being rich and rich is better than being an internet celebrity. A martial arts fighting story was written for the main character, who is a greasy middle-aged man in his forties and plays petty tricks all day long. The author must be playing tricks on himself. The confrontation between the good and the bad factions is all about shameful and underhanded tactics. Can't write a little about a character who is upright and proud

Do you like deleting so much? Can you delete so many bad reviews?