Shi Jian: as the Great Emperor, I Should Suppress All Enemies in the World.

Linking up with Zombie is boring, and the world view is messy. It's better to link up with foreign movies and go to the West to fight monsters, such as Dracula, The Mummy, The Conjuring series, Ghost Nun, Lord of Hell, etc.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is so poor, it is several levels lower than AI writing.

There are too many explanations. It takes up more space than the plot. I talked about one thing halfway and then switched to explaining the popular science. I talked a lot about the other half before picking up the previous ones. The fight was only halfway through, and then the fight started again. It was too grinding and the feeling of separation was too heavy.

I was originally very interested in the subject matter, but who taught you how to write this sentence by paragraph? Haven't you ever been taught by a primary school Chinese teacher? It was so painful to watch. Moreover, there are narrations interspersed in one sentence, without beginning or end. I'll withdraw first, bye!

Why do characters stop talking mid-sentence? There are a lot of things in the middle level, and the viewing experience is very poor. I don't even know what the characters are saying or doing. A bunch of descriptions are inserted inexplicably. The perspective can be changed several times. You are a narrative, not prose. It's such a mess, it's uncomfortable to look at.

He has an unpleasant personality, is headstrong and arrogant. The real strong man has a tiger in his heart and smells the roses carefully. Being too domineering on the surface will only reduce his character, just like a street gangster.

What kind of egg is the Great Emperor? It would be good if he changed it to the Heavenly Master.

The author's knowledge of Taoism is a bit shallow. Maoshan has many branches and branches. The full name should be Maoshan Qing Sect. After the exchange and integration of various Taoist sects in the Tang and Song Dynasties, Longhu Mountain (Tianshi), Pavilion Zaoshan (Lingbao), and Maoshan (Shangqing) were three mountains of talismans, and they formed an alliance with the Southern Taoist Sect to establish four major altars. So strictly speaking, Master Shi Jian is not a master at all.

This sentence is broken and I don't want to read it anymore.

It started out well, but then it became verbose like an idiom solitaire. Halfway through the fight, I started talking about cross talk. What's wrong with that?

Hahaha, when I saw the story about Shi Jian, I immediately clicked to read it. It turns out that the setting of dirty and pure air is really not good. The environment of the world has changed drastically. Shouldn't the spirits of all things be affected? And to be honest, the writing is a bit verbose and lacks a sense of empathy.

The Great Emperor and the Zombie World don't seem to match up to me. You said that I can still accept the realms of Heavenly Master, Human Immortal, Earthly Immortal, and Heavenly Immortal.

Your sentence is divided into several paragraphs, and they are not connected. It is easy to omit and make typos. The subject matter is good, but the writing is really unpleasant. I just read it again after a long time, and I can't help but complain. I like your idea very much, but at least you should stop making typos and typos.

There are only a few words per line, and the experience is extremely poor. Wouldn't the author revise it?

I think this book will become popular if it continues to be written like this. This is the first time I have seen Shi Jian written so well.

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Did your physical education teacher teach you how to break sentences like this? Write more than 10 lines for one line of things.

Holy shit, it's so exciting to see the eunuch? After waiting for a whole day, I saw that it was actually my father-in-law.

Just cut it 😭😭😭

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