Douluo: I Have a Martial Spirit Tree

The author has said a lot of nonsense, can't he just use less numbers? Anyone can pull out two to three hundred words of background 😡😡😡😡 That's too much.

Why are you writing here? The protagonist has not appeared many times

At the beginning of the second chapter, it was written, "The bottleneck of soul power was opened with a pop." It scared me and I thought I was going to fart.

Reminds me of a fantasy novel I read a long time ago. The main character hangs on a martial spirit tree at the beginning. There are all kinds of powerful martial spirits hanging on the back. The martial spirits in that world can assist martial arts training. I remember he also has a sun martial spirit or a golden crow martial spirit, which is a big sun hanging on the tree.

To be honest, the author is a bit too boastful about the Haotian Sect. Compared with the combat power, a group of Soul Douluo with the next title can kill the untitled elders. Counting that the four tribes cannot come out of the enshrinement hall, the Pope's Palace can defeat the Haotian Sect. Hit the Pope's Palace to two Shang Zonghui at the same time, but it will be no problem to defeat one, and then it will be destroyed. Soul Action is a title that Bibi Dong earned through soul rings and a few soul bones, which is a bit exaggerated.

For example: All kinds of fairy grass and heavenly materials and earthly treasures have become soul beasts. Who should their "low-end versions" be paired with? I hope that all my friends can give me their own suggestions for my reference. After all, "one person is short-term, two people are long-term"!

Author, you don't need to write, I have a martial soul tree. Just write that I have tens of millions of martial souls. If you add martial souls one by one, you can add them to the gods. Then forget about the finale. Adding to the god king is not a problem. What you do is pure garbage.

I have read more than 70 chapters, and I want to know if the protagonist has fighting power. He is a soul emperor in his 60s and has only one skill. Does he have fighting power? And don't he always have to be a Machiavellian person? Fantasy novels, who reads this? Can't I read historical novels and write more battles between soul masters?

No, why do you devote a whole chapter or several chapters to some insignificant supporting characters? Is it so watery before it's even put on the shelves?

The setting is generally okay, but the plot and description are too bad. I suggest you transition or rewrite this book. The plot is too fast. After more than 200,000 words, it is still like this: 56, 100,000. Maybe the Douluo main plot is over. What should I write next? The protagonist has too few roles, the characters are not outstanding, and the more than 200,000 words feel like an outline.

Why did my reading feel a bit anticlimactic? In some places, the story line broke off while I was reading. The next chapter skipped directly to another story, and there was no coherence at all.

1- Through the spiritual objects of heaven and earth 2. Is it possible to condense the soul core when obtaining the soul ring when the 70-level soul saint And then through the visualization or meditation deduced by the tendon diagram to create the Nine Treasures Glazed Tower Then use the method of Yuanying to break out of the pill to break through the level to achieve the evolution of the martial spirit 3. Regarding whether becoming a god requires faith to condense the god or the inheritance of the god Is it possible to pass the level 90 title? After Douluo condenses the third soul core break through the restrictions of the divine position through the method of martial soul evolution theory and becomes a free mortal fairy 70-level soul power core - 80 level blood-condensing core - 90-level spiritual core - then through visualization and meditation methods, the 99-level three cores are combined into one, breaking through the core and becoming an infant. When reaching level 100, you can finally choose to kill the million-year-old soul beast or self-condensing the divine ring.

The previous logic is so confusing, and I won't change it, just leave it there.

Luo Li, I have forgotten who the protagonist is. The protagonist has no sense of existence, no sense of expectation, and no desire to continue watching.

It feels worse and worse!

It's hard to update 😅

The writing is okay, but the content of the upper and lower chapters is a bit short.

The theme is not bad, similar to the martial arts of auspicious beasts. However, apart from the introduction of the family situation at the beginning, which is a little bit vague, the rest of the scene is purely chaotic and has no sense of connection. If it is not clear here, it will be cut elsewhere. There is nothing eye-catching about the protagonist's character description. There is no sense of layout and everything he writes is about him laying out the plot and then showing off. Various inner dramas of supporting characters

I had been keeping it before, and then I realized that it was a power generator. Voted

The ancestor of the Tang Sect, the genius soul master, the supreme god king, the compassionate Buddha... These are the status and prestige that the protagonist of my fate has had. One is stronger than the other, and each has a higher status and official position... My name is - Tang San The strongest person in Douluo Continent, my soul power and martial arts have continued to grow in me since I traveled through time. Even though my magical power is only as powerful as the long bow of Son of Light. Comparable? Snort! Maybe my current strength has far surpassed that of my senior! And in order to ensure that I always have invincible power, I will do whatever is needed to do whatever it takes! In addition to dealing with all those who disobey me, they must also give me whatever they can help. If someone disobeys her, I, Tang San, will not let her go even if she is my daughter. Because this is my way, my way. Maybe some people don't agree with me. But when the vast majority of gods or people in the world trust me and think that I am the most noble king of gods and the greatest Buddha, how could I be wrong? Even if it's wrong, it will only be Wuhun Palace's fault, the soul master's fault, and the soul beast's fault. Because without my wisdom and great power, they would still be living in the painful world of war. So, all people or gods who do not want to die or suffer pain should love me, be loyal to me, and worship me! Appreciate me, the founder of the Tang family, and swear to death to be my genius soul master, my supreme divine king, my compassionate Buddha, I, I, I, - I, the third young master of the Tang family! --Roar! —————————— God of Emotions, Master of the Spirit Pagoda, Ice Spirit Douluo, Disciple of Zhou Yi …These are the identities and statuses that I, the Son of Destiny, once had. Some fates that I don't care about but can't get rid of. ... Others call me Huo Yuhao. A person who has been plagued by worries and missions all his life. ... In order to bring peace back to the mainland, I did things I didn't like, fell in love with Wang Qiu'er, who I shouldn't have fallen in love with, and trusted Tang San, who I shouldn't have trusted: causing the mainland to suffer for thousands of years... The word failure seems to be linked to my destiny. Even if I got master Electrolux's true inheritance and peerless magical skills, I still missed an opportunity to escape from Tang San's control. .... It made my master Electrolux make a fatal sacrifice and give me the final element of victory. Leaving behind a holy shrine of the Necromancer, Brother Tianmeng said that facing Tang San was a must for me, a destiny that I could not avoid... But... I just didn't believe in fate. Even if some of the predictions came true, I still convinced myself that they were just coincidences. Something that can be figured out with wisdom and patience. I will not intentionally do the opposite just because of misfortune. Even if I am unlucky, I will not deliberately do the opposite. No matter what God's will, fate, fate and destiny are, I, Huo Yuhao, will only do what my reason tells me is the right thing to do. If you ask me to lead, I will lead. If I need to lie, I will lie. If my life allows the existence of love, I will definitely love. No matter what other people say, regardless of whether they can preserve their true self, I, Huo Yuhao, will do the right thing. Fight the right battle with Tang San! Fight for Wang Dong's safety. Fight for Di Tian's ideals and avenge my mother. Fight for my master. To fight for my son. Fight for the people of the mainland, regardless of whether they understand it or not! Fight, fight—fight! Today, the son of destiny will fight his last battle! ! !

For example: Whether it is a supporting role that will be needed in the future or a character that has appeared now, I haven't written down the soul ring skills of many people because I really can't think of them! So I hope that friends, if you are willing, can you write down your thoughts for me to learn from? In addition, I am thinking about whether the settings and abilities of some characters should be directly based on the anime? !