The Wizard's Journey Begins with Awakening Consciousness Factors
巫师从觉醒意识因子开始
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- Completed
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- 617k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 2y ago
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The book cover resembles an old friend I've known for a long time.
Excellent, excellent! I love stories about academic geniuses, not stories about useless brutes who get a cheat code and become arrogant, relying on deus ex machina to overcome the power gap.
Shennong here, comment: It's good for killing time when you're bored, but whether it's a good or bad product depends on whether you can accept the very old tropes of the plot.
Advantage 1. Fluent writing style 2. The logic is not bad. The 3-address and settings are very well provided. 4. A good worldview The character designs of the five main characters are currently quite complete. 6. The main storyline is well-organized. Let's talk about the shortcomings.
Goodgood
Well, the writing is decent, but could you please stop using those clichéd plot points from the last century? It's so boring. Aren't you tired of explaining each of those clichés one by one? It's completely unnecessary. The rest of the writing is quite good, but this aspect seriously drags down the overall quality of the book.
This supporting male character, Lun En, has so much screen time. He's constantly running around and it's quite annoying, plus he acts all self-important.
Hifit is the disciple of a Level 2 powerhouse. Investigating someone isn't something that can be done with just a few words. You haven't written anything about that at all; it shows his power.
He's already this strong before even reaching the intermediate apprentice level; it remains to be seen whether the author can maintain that level of skill later on. Nevertheless, it's still quite enjoyable, logical, and flows smoothly.
Look at the cover, Little Blackie, you've exposed your weakness!
It's good. The protagonist is a genius with ability, not a useless loser. Without a cheat code, he's nothing. It would be even better if the protagonist was handsome.