The Wizard's Journey Begins with Awakening Consciousness Factors

The cover of the book looks like an old friend I have known for a long time.

Not bad, not bad. I like to watch the genre of academic masters and geniuses, rather than the genre of useless and reckless people, who get a cheat and rely on mechanical gods to solve the gap in strength.

Advantages 1 The writing is smooth 2 The logic is not bad 3 The plug-ins and settings are very good 4 The world view is very good 5 The main characters are currently well-designed 6 The main line process is well arranged Let's talk about the shortcomings 1 The routine is too old and rubbish, which makes the plot seem to be completely forced to create conflicts, which will be very discouraging, even if the logic is well written and explained. Suggestion: Don't write these old plots , write something new, and explain the plot. At least explain it clearly first instead of finishing the plot, and then explain it later 2 The supporting characters and ordinary people are too witty, and everyone is very jumpy 3 The protagonist is more inclined to be a good person, not Speaking of being heinous, the protagonist of the wizard novel suggested that it is better to put profit first, otherwise most people who read the wizard novel will not like it Complaint: Many settings want to please both sides, and both salty tofu and sweet tofu will be offended

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. . . How should I put it? The writing is good, but can you not write some routines from the last century? They are very boring. Aren't you tired of explaining these routines one by one? It is completely unnecessary. The writing is quite good in other aspects. This aspect seriously drags down the quality of this book.

There are a lot of scenes with this male supporting actor Lun En. It's quite annoying to jump up and down all day long, and he also looks so self-righteous.

Xifit is a disciple of a level 2 strong man. If you want to investigate a person, it's not a matter of just one sentence. You didn't write it down at all. The power

It's so strong before I'm even a mid-level apprentice. It depends on the author's ability to grasp it later, but it's still pretty good-looking, logical, and natural and smooth.

Look at the cover, little Heizi, your chicken feet are exposed, right?