I Am Writing a Diary in Douluo, and Huo Gua Is Actually Me

The main character is smart. But he is a eunuch. Tatan's two licking beasts were ignored. The reason was that they were afraid that Xiao Zhao San would have a back-up plan, and the connection with the God Realm was cut off. He was also afraid that the back-up plan would recover, so he immediately complained. Well, although the author did it for plot development, it did bring down intelligence and poison. The two eyes of ice and fire wiped out all the spiritual intelligence of the fairy grass, and also removed the poison barrier, but only picked a few flowers and left... Waiting for others to come and get them, right? There are more plots in Xiao Hongchen than the heroine, can you believe it? And where there is a female protagonist, 80% of the time there is Xiao Hongchen (a real female protagonist?). At the end, it's all about research and development of equipment and the story of unification with the empire. The heroine and the diary system basically have no role. Even the diary system directly failed to find this person. My evaluation is that you can read it before Chapter 100, but after that... It depends on the beholder.

It's true that even people like Zhou Yi were scolded for not fighting at the beginning of school, punished for fighting at the beginning of school, expelled for talking back, and expelled for not being able to run away. In the end, those who stayed were all amazing guys. This was why her admission rate was so high. If she is really capable, with her "qualifications" and her husband, she will be a first-grade class teacher Don't say anything about how she treats Huo Yuhao, As a teacher, as long as those who don't go as she wants are all poor students, they will be eliminated. This approach is quite explosive Let's put it this way, my class teacher in junior high school, he sometimes commented on certain people during class, and even From his mouth, he could say that students "look obscene". In addition, we are in the county's No. 1 Middle school. At that time, the school issued a notice that our grade could dissuade those who often violated school rules, such as jumping out of the window from the stairwell between the first and second floors, skipping classes, and often bringing mobile phones. There was no mandatory requirement As a result, he asked us to vote in the class for the person who usually likes to talk the most. Classmates, combined with their grades to persuade them to quit, this operation simply blinded me But later, because the classmates did not do too well, the votes of some of the more "annoying guys" were not raised too high. Later, the five with the most votes One was a particularly noisy student, but the leader was his uncle One was me, my grades dropped, but still above average, and I was often caught reading novels One was an adult The discipline score of the average grade student is very low There is also one who has mental illness and unscrupulous and another who has no impression of his grades and is very noisy during get out of class time In the end, he was nominated, but none of them could be moved, and the reasons were not sufficient Compared with Zhou Qi, he is still a little democratic, but you just take a look, whether such a teacher is what you need, or whether he should teach and educate people.

Can you praise this in the comments section? The diary flow is written in the same way as the heartfelt flow. The difference is that your heartfelt voice can be played across the continent and only by the original female. As for the idea of ​​​​taking people as your own in your diary, it will be weird if they have a crush on you. When the diary entered their minds, you also drugged their minds, right? It made me happy🤣👉🏻

I couldn't stand it at the beginning. Tang Ya's emotional intelligence was low. Even if she offended unintentionally, she apologized later. If she really didn't like it, just don't contact her. Just because there were so many people on the street, someone bumped into you. If the apology wasn't over, you still had to bump into her? I'm concerned about the author's mental state. Could it be that in real life, you are so used to being bullied that you don't dare to speak, and then you have an orgasm in a novel?

In fact, the plot of Dou Er is just that. In the diary, you can write some personal thoughts about soul guides, as well as thoughts about souls. Anyway, according to my idea, without knowing that this diary is only read by me, I may write some research notes or something like that.

If Zhu Qing Ice Toad evolves into Ultimate Ice, it will no longer be poisonous.

It depends on when you write about the Messenger of Death. That is the second most famous achievement of the honorary elder of the Holy Spirit Sect.

Suddenly, it was discovered that Ji Juechen was born to become a god who could hold the position of god without relying on the divine world. Let's make an assumption that the reason why the gods in the divine world are restricted to the divine realm is because the divine position is an ethereal aggregation of will, and because there is no carrier to dissipate, the gods become gods by embedding the divine position in the divine realm. When Ji Juechen first appeared in the original work, his martial spirit was not a companion soul with a hazy will like other people's martial spirits. His martial spirit was a companion soul that was fused with the meteorite iron that he had always used as a sword due to his obsession with the sword. It had a physical form. He can completely turn the martial spirit and the obsession in it into a god, and embed the god on the sword through the connection between the obsession and the sword. Ji Juechen who has reached this point has reached the ultimate Douluo even because of the upper limit of Dou Er World. If he publicizes this matter, Ji Juechen will gain a lot of power of faith to improve his strength. The protagonist can also take a similar path, first use the gold of living beings to open the third eye, and then use his own will to transform the second sea of consciousness brought by the living beings' eyes, transform the living beings' eyes into the carrier of his own will, and then absorb the evil emperor's piece that can advance infinitely due to the laws of the world. The eye-shaped soul bone attached to the body (the reason why the evil emperor's attached soul bone was chosen is because the evil emperor comes from the Divine Seal Throne. In the entire Tang Buddha plane, the God of Creation occupies the absolute c position, and the Divine Seal Throne is the only place recorded by the Buddha where a creation inheritance occurred. There is a little bit of the breath of the God of Creation, plus the Evil Emperor is a member of the Evil Eye clan who traveled through time and space and came to Douluo Continent. I don't know what other evil spirits were like at that time, but the Evil Emperor's soul must have been contaminated with the breath of time and space), and then let the protagonist run into the small world of Dragon Valley due to an accident, and then use the power of the diary Obtain the recognition of the Dragon God's Heart and limit the Dragon God's Heart (the reason why the Dragon God's Heart was chosen is because the Dragon God's Heart is something that has been with the Dragon God since birth, whether it is the will of the Dragon God who was born when he was split in half by absorbing the Dragon God's soul fragment as a child, or the intention at birth. His character must have the same negative emotions of cruelty and anger and positive emotions of rationality and wisdom as the Dragon God), and then arrange an opportunity that is not in the original work or get a bunch of resources that can restore the origin of the soul from the rewards in the diary, and then communicate with the Dragon God's heart. We will work together to develop a method to mobilize the power of our own destiny (you can also borrow the power of Di Qiuer's destiny like the original work) and separate the soul origin fragments with their own one-sided emotions (anger, timidity, fear, greed, hard work, bravery and other separate emotions) and those without emotions. Pure soul fragments, and then use the evil emperor's external soul bone, the heart of the Dragon God, the power of destiny, and his own pure soul fragments to create a prototype of an artifact that can evolve infinitely. In the process, the absorbable characteristics of the soul bone must be retained and the prototype of the artifact overlaps with the Eye of Creatures. , After the overlap is completed, use the soul pupil martial soul origin to infect the prototype of the artifact and the eye of the living being with the aura of the martial soul origin. After the aura reaches a certain level, integrate the martial soul, the eye of the living being, and the prototype of the artifact like Ji Juechen's martial soul, and by the way, let his five souls awaken for the second time. Then use the final product of this series of operations as your own foundation for becoming a god, then find various materials as carriers of one-sided emotions that you have carved out, and then integrate these carriers into the foundation for becoming a god, mastering these emotions in the process, and then after all the soul fragments are fused, you can use these emotions to control your own soul. Finally, melt these insights into the foundation for becoming a god to create a god, thereby getting rid of the control of the divine world and becoming a god. The above are all personal opinions. If you have different opinions, please point them out in the comment area.

Trash novel, purely for the sake of being dark, and can pull out any conspiracy theory. Shrek and Sugar Buddha are not good things in the first place, and they don't need to be dark at all. But the author just pulled out a lot of unreasonable settings and plots. It was purely for the sake of being dark. It disgusted me to death.

Huo said that the diary sucked Tianmeng and Yi Lao, and the Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor came to compete for the position of the second martial soul. Aren't you afraid that the diary sucked your true souls? The Love Continent Harem fanfic is really tolerant to women!

A highly toxic harem self-pleasure story, the key protagonist is the eunuch.

After hundreds of chapters, you have been keeping your virginity for so long, but you are in love with a married woman. Then why did you write so many beautiful girls? Are you stupid to trick a dog into getting in?

It feels very lame, not to mention the poison, and the stallion story and the writing style are also very lame. I don't recommend reading it, even if you lose your mind.

I just hope that this Meng Hongchen thing won't be written as too important. They are all here for profit. If in the end the protagonist loves them to the death, it will be too disgusting!

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I don't know why, but it seems that a bunch of people are popping up in the Douluo fandom area recently, trying to tease the Third Young Master of the Tang Family and Douluo Dalu?

If Bai Xiuxiu appears, you can make things better. For example, complain about Bai Xiuxiu in Dou Si, who took the lead in hunting down ocean soul beasts, and how Rotten Salted Fish led a group of people to Tianlong Planet to kill civilians, and forcibly extracted blood and essence from living civilians.

It is undeniable that the author's book is quite special among diaries. According to the way those diaries are written, almost all good-looking women have diaries. However, in this book, Tang Ya does not have a diary, which is very good.

The author doesn't need to write something so outrageous. I want to see the Tang Buddha series suffer, but it shouldn't be so abstract. The new chapters are too abstract. If you want to write about the abstract characters that appear in the original work and suffer, it will be a big hit. I love watching it. But if you write a passer-by series where the characters are hurt like this, I'll have no idea. I can't stand it.

Boy, I thought there was a follow-up. Why was it gone as soon as Tang San died? Is this the end of the book?

What was written at the end? No matter how weak Tang San was, his Shura position could not be sealed, and the diary did not explain it clearly. It ended completely hastily.

1. The first few chapters were quite fun to write, but some of the plots were simplified. For example, when Bing Bingwu raised him, I felt it was better to write the Ice Emperor's reaction, and when he praised Meng Hongchen's white hair and red eyes 2. Because of the reward, he dared to conflict with Gu Yuena (Auspicious Beast is not that courageous, right) 3. There are too many scenes of Xiao Hongchen in the early stage. As you said later (Chapter 97), the soul guide can be replaced by Gu Yuena. After all, the scientific research performance of the Thirty Thousand Beasts Platform and the Spirit Transferring Tower is obvious to all and cannot be compared to Xiao Hongchen. Then in the middle period, Xu Tianran had more roles? ? ? Will Xu Tianran be able to become the God of Destruction? ? ? , You can definitely write more emotional scenes and more Shura fields, because notes can also improve yourself. As a result, you have too few heroine scenes when you write about two big men, Senior Sister Ling and Ye Guyi. Ye Guyi basically said one sentence, Orange God is invisible, and he has a lot of notes, but there are not many female protagonists in the plot 5. There is no need to always have a white one for the first soul ring 6. You, Ma Xiaotao, as Huo Yuhao's sister in the original work, did not have a notebook. To be honest, this is a bit unlikely. According to her status, she was also the master of the Poseidon Pavilion in the end. Don't refute that what happened without Huo Yuhao. This kind of rebuttal is not valid, because most of those who have notebooks as you mentioned above would have died long ago without Huo Yuhao. Also, they release evil fire to kill people. Why not kill Dai Huabin and let him continue to be disgusting. Later, Ma + Tang became maids 7. There are more than 300 chapters in total, and the protagonist of more than 273 chapters is like a eunuch. He does not ask you to have a relationship, and you have no warm plot at all. Gu Yuena will give you the gold of living things, Xu Tianzhen Meng Hongchen and others will definitely support you, and the Snow Emperor, etc., A lot of beautiful girls surround you, saying not to affect their careers, turning their heads to Ah Yin. What does this mean? ? 8. There are too many conspiracy theories, just write a little, including Mr. Mu. The original book mentioned that Mr. Mu told her not to worry about the child bride all the time. It was Zhang Lexuan who couldn't get out of herself and suffered from a heart disease 9. Did the story of Snow Girl's martial soul fusion skills be briefly mentioned? Have you just mentioned "Acacia Heartbroken Red" in one sentence? 10. In order to highlight the Empire of the Sun and the Moon and you as a time traveler, it is a bit too much to write that the Dou Ling Empire is controlled by the Holy Spirit Cult and that women are harems. This is the first time I have seen it written like this. Isn't it just a bad taste? 11. It ended in a hurry and was unfinished.

It gets boring after Chapter 100, and the theme of the diary basically disappears.

I read the reviews, so this book has a stomach-nourishing protagonist, but I love c🍬🥄mom, right? Then I think I can still read it

Tai Tai and Niu Tian have been provoking Gu Yuena but they still dare not kill the 666-year-old. The God Realm has lost contact with the Douluo Star. What are you afraid of? Judging from the performance of the Golden Dragon King in the Legend of the God Realm, he is definitely at the level of a God King. Then your Silver Dragon King is also a God King level. Even if he is injured, he is still a first-level god, right? What are you afraid of killing two level 99 people? Even if the two of them are blessed with life, they are only priests at most.

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A good book, this is where I started. The only book I've ever read

It's so rubbish. Can Soul Douluo only fight weak Titled Douluo? In the original work, Huo Yuhao's Soul Douluo can instantly kill Titled Douluo. You're even better at fighting than Huo Yuhao, but you can barely fight against a weak Titled Douluo.

You can't defeat the Snow Emperor of Soul Saint even though you're in Contra. Rubbish. Then why are you cheating? You're cheating better than Huo Yuhao and your performance is not as good as Huo Yuhao. Rubbish, rubbish, rubbish.

There are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it anymore