Douluo Villain Simulator Starts by Persecuting Qian Renxue

I saw a part of it. -------- -------- 1. On the way to Poseidon Island, Purple Pearl saved the injured six monsters. Tang San just beat Purple Pearl because he didn't know the special treatment method (actually it was too much, but at least he could barely clear it up, it was a misunderstanding), but after knowing that Purple Pearl was rescuing people, he still mocked the other party's rescue methods. As netizens said, I'm afraid if you invite Tang San to a meal one day, he will beat you up after the meal because there is coriander in the meal. -------- -------- 2. Regarding soul beasts, Wuhun Palace hunted Xiao Wu and his mother. You can take revenge, but it is a personal revenge. It rises to the level of righteousness and calls others evil... Please also ask Tang San to look at the soul ring on his body before speaking. After he resurrected Xiao Wu, he almost wiped out all the soul beasts that were over 50,000 years old in the Sunset Forest. Just to choose the right soul ring, he didn't kill them all because he had the mentality of "preferring nothing to nothing". In addition, the behavior of the three Qianjun Ant brothers is also extremely double-standard: Is it possible that Da Ming, Er Ming, and Xiao Wu were born in this geomantic treasure land? Not to mention that Tang San killed Ghost Douluo with a sneak attack with his front foot, and a sneak attack with his back foot means that for a strong man, sneak attack is a very shameful behavior, and it is also a typical representative of double standards. -------- -------- 3. Killing/injuring people wantonly. The concierge looks down on others, and conflicts with people when traveling because of housing/eating/shopping, etc. These are common plots in some cool novels (especially urban novels), which usually involve beating people up. And what about Douluo? The concierge looked down upon others, so Tang San said that he could kill him with his sleeve arrows. The so-called "way to death" comes from this episode. Fighting for a room with Dai Mubai, Dai Mubai said that if you win, the room will be yours, but if you lose, get out. Tang San said that I can risk my life with you. I really don't understand why he is so desperate. The key point is that Tang San just said that Dai Mubai is not a bully... More importantly, it was a normal problem from the beginning "there is only one room left in the hotel and this room is booked". Dai Mubai only started to plan to take action after Xiao Wu had a bad mouth. When Tang Hao, Tang San and his son went to Yuexuan, they were told that they would only accept elegant guests and not disheveled people. When they came up, they said they wanted to see the proprietress. When the other party stopped them from entering, Tang San disabled both of the other party's hands. But the question is, is it normal for a high-end place to require clean clothes? What's more, among the father and son, although Tang San was neatly dressed, Tang Hao never took care of himself and dressed like a beggar. The appearance description in the following article (an objective description, not someone else's perspective) was simply "a dirty and downtrodden old man." Isn't it normal not to let them enter under such circumstances? -------- -------- 4. Eyes of ice and fire. To be honest, after Tang San proposed to take away some of the medicinal herbs earlier, if there was no such description and it would jump directly to him distributing the medicinal herbs to his teammates, no one would think there was any problem. But the author happened to write this paragraph, making Tang San like locusts passing by, sweeping away the herbs around the Ice and Fire Eyes at once. Let me tell you, there was a lot of nonsense about the so-called pure and innocent person before, and the image of a gentleman was not established, but in this paragraph alone, an image of insatiable greed was vividly portrayed. At the same time, under this premise, Tang San distributed the fairy grass in batches to others, but as the original owner, Dugu Bo didn't even get a single weed, which was even more criticized. By the way, even when Tang San took advantage, and Dugu Bo was displeased but acquiesced considering his words, Tang San did not forget to lie to him again: "With the nourishment of the ice and fire eyes, this place will be prosperous again in just a few decades." Then the psychological description showed that it would actually take at least hundreds of years, at least Dugu Bo would not be able to do it in his lifetime. The effect of this was nothing more than to highlight that Tang San was smart and could take advantage for nothing, even though Dugu Bo was so much higher in cultivation than him, he was still fooled around by him. -------- -------- 5. When did Tang San steal the Tang Sect's inner secret book? It is known that Tang San was 29 years old when he jumped off the cliff and traveled across time, and it took Tang San 20 years to create the Buddha's Fury Tang Lotus. Therefore, at the latest, 20 years ago, when Tang San was 9 years old, he had already stolen the Tang Sect's inner secret book. The actual time should be earlier, unless Tang San steals the secret book and immediately starts the research and development of Buddha's Fury Tang Lotus - which is obviously impossible. Based on Tang San's familiarity with Xuantian Technique and other inner sect exclusive stunts, it means that he has spent a lot of time in his previous life, at least he has memorized all the various techniques and blueprints, and is familiar with them. In addition, according to Tang San's own account, he was brought back to Tangmen when he was an infant. He grew up in Tangmen, and Tangmen was his home. However, such a person stole the Tang Sect's inner sect's secret book when he was less than 9 years old... In addition, considering that the inner sect's special skills are not a big deal, it is impossible to be unprepared, and Tang San was able to steal the secret book for at least 20 years before he was exposed. In theory, it would not be a spur of the moment behavior. In other words, he should have the process of "generating ideas-making plans-carrying out the theft". So the question is, Tang San stole the secret book of the inner sect when he was 9 years old at the latest, so when did he come up with the idea? -------- -------- 6. I won't say much about the various confusing operations involving Xiao Wu. Including but not limited to double-standard battles in the arena. Poseidon Island Test Fantasy Land Tang San Hong Wen wants to kill someone.

The protagonist is a ruthless robot, and the harem is sick and cannibalize each other. You only need to watch one volume to get into the trap, but don't be obsessed with the follow-up.

There are very few Douluo fanfics on the market, even fewer that are good-looking, and even fewer that have any brains. I have been reading novels for ten years. Below are some of my personal opinions. Please correct me if there are any differences. First of all, this book is really good. It is rare to find one comparable to it in similar Douluo fanfics. The writing is excellent, and the female characters are basically all vividly drawn, without the sense of mindless plagiarism that other fanfics have. The male protagonist is quite online compared to other fanfics in terms of strategy. As a cool writer, fighting is really fun. But the daily emotional aspects are indeed relatively lacking, and Zha Duzha doesn't understand. The Shura Field I wanted to watch has turned into a real Shura Field. The male protagonist's handling of emotions is indeed a bit outrageous. It doesn't feel good, and it is all supported by driving. The most disappointing aspect of this work is probably the last volume. From my personal point of view, it was actually unfinished in the end. From the fact that the protagonist took the bloodline route and created his own soul ring, we can actually see that the protagonist actually has a plan to solve the conflict between soul masters and soul beasts. I felt at the time that the Silver Dragon King Scroll should complete this plan, but the result did make me a little disappointed. I feel like I can write at least one more volume based on the author's previous logic. (At least if I make the outline myself) Of course, judging from the fact that the protagonist Soul Saint has a combat power beyond the limit before, it is obvious that the author does not really want to write it anymore. The increase in combat power is ridiculously fast, and many things are actually unnecessary (soul rings and soul bones that are common in fan fiction). The second martial soul is completely a decoration. In the end, it was forced to appear to fill a hole, but it has no effect. Moreover, the self-created sword moves in the front and the powerful artistic conception in the back are all gone, and they have completely become powerful flying bricks. The ending also feels forced. It makes people jump to the last chapter immediately after reading the first chapter. The ending is indeed very perfunctory. In summary, the book is indeed a rare piece of fan fiction, but from my personal point of view it is unfinished. It is inevitable to have regrets in life. If the author can maintain the level of the first two volumes, it will really be one of the most outstanding fan fictions.

The author's first and third simulations were very good. It can almost be said that publishing those two chapters alone would be at the upper level in the fandom. Most readers, including me, think that the description of the second simulation and the real text is slightly inferior. In the second simulation, it can be seen that the author acted too hastily. I guess the main reason is that he is afraid of having too great an impact on the connection between simulation and reality. Based on my personal opinion, I would like to give the author a small suggestion. Should the next book have a female protagonist as the center, and conduct multiple simulations to achieve a perfect ending, such as Qian Renxue's book, Bibi Dong's book, Zhu Zhuqing's book, etc... The author can also focus on portraying a single female protagonist without considering whether other characters will have the impact of memory, and only she has memory or partial memory. Finally, I wish the author's books will be among the best at the starting point! 👏

Junk Book Appraiser Appraisal Result: The highest quality Douluo fan at present.

A rare good article about Douluo. Unlike other articles that directly lick the bbdong, the animation really saves this character, and the three views follow the five senses. This book describes each character in a very realistic way, and the protagonist's IQ is online in the simulator. Although the reality is a bit lower. But the current 140-plus chapters are still performing well.

I originally read the book title with the simulator and thought it was a brainless and cool article. After looking carefully at other articles, I can only say that it is worthy of Brother Cheng 😏

My first monthly ticket at the starting point.

It is indeed very well written. Highly recommended to watch.

Brother, how can there be so little every day?

It's too slow, it's too slow, it's updating too slowly, please add more updates.

The author writes very well, keep up the good work!

This book is indeed much better in plot than other Douluo fanfics, and it can be regarded as a masterpiece.

Qian Renxue

The failure of Wuhun Palace had its own reasons besides Tang San's cheating. First of all, does Wuhun Palace really need a war? After all, only a few people can profit from war. What most people get in the war is that their families are destroyed and their wives are separated. Therefore, we must never talk about war lightly until the final moment. Peace will never be given up until the last moment. The Wuhun Palace does not need a war, and the two major empires and the seven major sects will also not have a hasty war with the Wuhun Palace. Because the cost of war is not acceptable to either party. What is the Wuhun Palace? Judging from the original work, the positioning of the Wuhun Palace should be an organization similar to a religion. Compared to the Empire, which is a religious organization, Wuhun Temple itself does not control land, finance, taxation, personnel appointment and dismissal rights, etc. Without these supports, Wuhun Palace would be like duckweed without roots, and it would be impossible for Wuhun Palace to be qualified to challenge the empire. Therefore, this also explains why Wuhun Palace can be spread all over the mainland. Because no one cares. Originally, the Empire and Wuhun Palace were in harmony with each other. In the context of the two empires confronting each other, as long as Wuhun Palace acted within its scope of authority, many things could be discussed. , But Wuhun Palace wants to meddle in rights that do not belong to it, which touches the bottom line of the empire. As an empire, I can give some preferential treatment to soul masters. It doesn't matter whether these soul masters join the Spirit Hall or a sect. It doesn't matter to the empire. But if you, the Spirit Hall, want to become independent on my land, I can't bear it. This is the empire's red line. Although I sympathize very much with Bibi Dong's experience, I feel that Bibi Dong's revenge would be too big a blow. If you want revenge, you can just find the Qianjia father and his son, there is no need to drag the entire Wuhun Palace to destroy them. In addition to a few scumbags like Miles, there are more people like Pixel Yuntao and Matthew Nuo in the Spirit Hall. For people like Brother Tao, this is an unforeseen disaster. Then even if I think the most miserable force is the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex family, in the finale, Bibi Dong revealed the real reason why the Blue Lightning family was wiped out. I really felt like I was being criticized. From Bibi Dong's point of view, he felt that he was not worthy of Yu Xiaogang. For Xiaogang's happiness, she helped Yu Xiaogang do things that Yu Xiaogang could not do himself, and blessed Yu Xiaogang in her own way. But if we stand in Yu Yuanzhen's perspective, it's really scary to think about it. I don't think there is anything wrong with Yu Luomian taking away Liu Erlong. This is the most basic moral concept. I believe that any educated and normal person will take away Liu Erlong. I think there is no problem. But here's the irony, just because Liu Erlong was taken away, the Lan Dian family was exterminated. I can only say that the original version of Douluo Dalu is about a group of love-minded lunatics leading a group of normal people to fight. In the end, the normal people all received their lunch boxes. After the lunatics were done, nothing happened. I think this is one of the reasons why Douluo has a bad reputation.

The protagonist in the simulation is full of strategies, ruthless and decisive, and the emotional scenes are also well written. After leaving the simulation, the protagonist is as if he has been struck by a halo that lowers his intelligence, with his EQ and IQ plummeting. Not taking the initiative, not refusing, just sitting back and watching a few women fight in the palace, what is the difference between this and Zhang Wuji. The drop in IQ is even more irritating. After Chen Xin, Qian Renxue, and Zhu Zhuqing all had simulated memories, they actually thought Bibi Dong knew nothing about her. The protagonist of Dianxiandian knows that something is wrong, but he doesn't take it to heart and waits for the problem to break out before solving it.

1. The main storyline is Dou Yi, but some characters and settings from later parts will appear, such as Gu Yuena, Snow Emperor, Di Tian, ​​etc. It doesn't matter if I haven't watched it, because I haven't watched the later ones either. 2. The emotional line should be advanced in a reasonable manner. The protagonist will not be a bitch, and the female character will not be a nymphomaniac and will not give it away when she comes up. In addition, this book does not have a single female protagonist. 3. Will appropriately expand the worldview and some settings on the basis of logical and reasonable logic. The characteristics of Douluo, such as soul rings, are definitely there, but in other aspects, the protagonist will also have his own ideas. ------ Everyone is in his own way. Readers, please don't complain if you don't like it. Please be a little more tolerant to the new authors. Thank you very much.

I just couldn't stand the end of Poseidon's Roar. I was attracted by the plot of Xiaoxue in the first volume, but I couldn't stand the rest of Shura Field. I personally prefer Shura Field, but at least there must be a bottom line, and you can't be tempted to kill people. Character of the Male Protagonist The portrayal is a bit biased towards Chen Hansheng, but that is true in modern times. Everyone is raised in monogamy. It is originally a feudal background. I can understand if I want to monopolize the male protagonist, but I will not have to kill other female protagonists without him The male protagonist's character is also He's too soft. You say he's rational but often can't understand his feelings. You say he's emotional but he doesn't dare to face several female protagonists directly. When asked about his feelings, he delays, hides, and changes the subject. He looks too weak. He's timid about feelings. He doesn't have that kind of grand and tolerant feeling. You either have to be a couple for the rest of your life, and you can't do it. The single heroine wants to open a harem but has no responsibility. She doesn't even dare to admit which women there are. The last time she wants to be a Neptune who only talks about the body and not about emotions is how you can get yourself into it. What I don't understand is that it is clearly a feudal era background. Why are you so afraid of opening a harem? The starting point I can understand that I don't want to make the heroine sad, but the starting point seems to be that I am afraid of the heroine, and I don't even dare to sit down and talk openly. I thought that Chen Xin would face his heart after asking, but it still didn't work. In the last volume, the heroine is still like an enemy. My ideal cultivation At least Luo Chang is tearing her apart, but she is not losing any sense. This is completely opposite to taking down the heroine with a domineering spirit. The hero has no influence on the heroine's feelings at all. The character of the heroine is cultivated in the simulator, and the heroine cannot even be defeated in reality. Make some changes, I don't know whether they like the male protagonist or their fantasy of the male protagonist in the simulator In general, the first two volumes are very good, and the emotional lines of each female protagonist are also very good individually. However, the treatment of the Shura field is not very to my liking, so I have temporarily quit. This is just me. Some personal opinions, don't be influenced by my comments. Everyone has their own standards. This just doesn't meet my standards. If you think it's good, feel free to read it Although I quit, I will still subscribe as a souvenir. Finally, I wish the author better and better results.

A book that opens high and moves low, it is only recommended to read the first two copies 😅

I also write about the harem and let the harem kill each other. Is this sick?

What kind of villain simulator? This is obviously a yandere simulator. All the female characters who have entered it have transformed into the shape of the protagonist. Love him deeply. I was really afraid that the heroine would take out a hatchet and split up the protagonist that day.

After all, it's the 2020s, and there is still such a trash-like male protagonist It's not Riqing, if it is Riqing, that's it Just like Zhang Wuji in The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Sword, he is a trash. He is indecisive when it comes to relationships, procrastinates, and deceives superiors and deceives subordinates.

That's it, I can't stand it anymore. Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot development is very reasonable and logical, and the heroine's character is also very full. It's hard not to like it. (Except for A Yin, it may be that the foreshadowing is not enough, which makes me feel that it is not as good as the other characters.) The author's driving skills are also very good. Not to mention Dou Yiyi, these advantages should be considered very good in the entire circle of harem novels. But I really can't accept the portrayal of the male protagonist. Being a scumbag is not a problem. There are no scumbags in harem novels. But until Xiaoxue Sunpower forced the male protagonist to choose one of the two (that's what I saw), the male protagonist was in a state of inaction. During this period, more than one person reminded the male protagonist, and the male protagonist also knew it. He even thought about a showdown but didn't say anything (play Stop for an inch (stop for an inch), stop for an inch twice), then forcefully drag it on, swearing that I will never lie to you, playing word games on the back to tell incomplete truths, and even hooked up with Ah Yin during the accumulation of conflicts between Xiaoxue and Zhuqing. In the end, it was okay, it exploded, I was tired, and I hate that iron can't make steel. Maybe the author arranged this as a foreshadowing for what he will use later, but I can't stand it anymore. Leave a post for others to read later. Those who can tolerate the male protagonist's constant inaction can read it. This is a well-written novel. If you can't accept it, forget it, so as not to be as unhappy as me.

but the monetary system settings of the third young master of the Tang family are generally not very reliable. The currency conversion rule first appeared in Chapter 8, "One gold soul coin is equal to ten silver soul coins, which is equal to one hundred copper soul coins. One gold soul coin is enough for an ordinary family of three to live for several months. It is also equivalent to Tang San's income from working at Notting College for three years." The above setting seems very reasonable, but Chapter 6 also says that Tang San's income from sweeping the floors at school is "ten copper soul coins per day", but after conversion, it is 10*365*3=10950 copper soul coins in 3 years, which should be 100 gold soul coins, which is obviously contradictory to the above statement. In addition, in Chapter 12, The Cloak Hammering Technique, Tang San's income from working in the blacksmith shop is also a bit confusing. First of all, he said, "Working for us is considered a handyman. You can always do the job of serving tea and water, but the salary is not Too high. (Original) From now on, if you come to work here, I will provide you with lunch and dinner every day. I will give you ten copper soul coins, which is also a silver soul coin. If the benefits are good, I will give you a little more." Chapter 13 shows Tang San later. After using the cloak hammering method, he said, "The employment conditions just now are invalid. For the time being, you will be paid the same as everyone else, one Gintama coin per month. If business is good, we will add commission." It seems that the basic income of a handyman is the same as that of a formal blacksmith, but according to the description, this income is actually pocket money, and the main selling point is to take care of food and drink. What's even more outrageous is that one month's income is the same as Tang San's income in one day of sweeping the floor! Then this income is really ridiculously low! Further, considering that the soul master is subsidized with 1 gold soul coin for one month, this leads to the Wuhun Palace's outrageous soul master subsidy system. The third young master of the Tang family subsidizes the soul master with 1 gold soul coin per month, and the soul master subsidizes 100 gold per month. The 100 times monthly income gap shows that either the subsidy for ordinary soul masters is better than nothing, or the subsidy for soul masters is higher than the separation spectrum. In his setting, the number of soul masters is actually relatively high. The promotion curve is steeper with higher levels. Considering that there are at least 200 soul saints in the angel legion in the later period, even if the promotion to soul saint is only one in a hundred, then there are at least tens of thousands, or even hundreds of thousands, of level 30 soul masters on the mainland. This number is very scary. Let's use an analogy. Suppose that ordinary people earn 3,000 a month. In order to encourage lithography machines, if you give a practitioner without work experience a subsidy of 10,000 a month, is it normal? But for a researcher with ten years of work experience, if you multiply it 100 times, it will directly become 1 million. Doesn't it seem a bit too high? And if you give 100,000 to those with ten years of work experience, and only 1,000 to those with no experience, then your subsidy is not pure, but it is better than nothing. According to the description of the blacksmith's income level in Tang San's settings, we can only assume that 1 silver per month is actually a pretty normal working-class income, and 1 gold per month can be considered a high income, so the income of Soul Master is incredibly high. It is unimaginable to imagine what kind of industry, with tens of thousands of people across the country, can earn tens of thousands of times the normal working-class salary without risk. In short, whether from the perspective of consumption or income, the currency setting of Douluo Continent is very unreliable, and it is endogenously unreliable. The problem with the lack of logic also lies in the price. Among Oscar's big sausages and small sausages in Chapter 20, Oscar's sausage costs 5 copper soul coins a piece, which Xiao Wu thinks is not expensive. But in Chapter 72, the lunch box has become 2 copper soul coins a box, and it is also a two-vegetarian lunch box. Who sells a two-vegetarian lunch box that is half cheaper than a sausage! If the lunch box is worth 20 yuan, will anyone buy the 50 yuan sausage?

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I regretted booking all of them. It was good at first, but the second simulation felt a little fragmented. Then the Rongrong plot came out and I was poisoned to death. It was disgusting to watch.

Ah Yin

After reading a million words, let me share my personal feelings. First of all, the advantages: this book starts with a god, especially the first copy. The author's writing level can be said to be unique in Douluo, and the arrangement is okay. Then there are the shortcomings: the first point is that it feels a bit like opening high and going low. The first copy is too good and the second copy seems bland and tasteless. The same is true for the third copy if it is not for the last few sentences. The second point is that the author made an old mistake that most authors make, forcing the plot to be suppressed. For example, even though he has the strength to surpass Bo Saixi, he is always timid. Tang Hao doesn't dare to kill, and Yu Xiaogang doesn't dare to kill. Is it because they are afraid of the Tiandou Empire? ? ? Although everyone knows that this is for the follow-up and there are plots to write, but the arrangement is disgusting, it is better not to write these. Also, in the face of Bibi Dong's unrestricted concessions, she is stronger than her, and the protagonist does not compare with her. The author, please add a sentence that the protagonist has complicated feelings towards Bibi Dong, so we can accept it better! The protagonist's martial soul is a sword, and he practices swordsmanship. When will sword cultivators become timid and give in without limit? Is it necessary to make people think that the author got high in writing later?

1. The most difficult thing for me to accept in the whole incident is that the group is gone, just because of the author's glass heart. Now that it's better, the book club group exploded. The group is originally used for discussion by paid or even free prostitutes. I haven't seen the author say a few words, and I don't know what you are doing. Just because everyone has different opinions on the plot than you, you just exploded. Do you want to filter? Behavior is not easy to evaluate. As the example has said, look at the sun and the moon. There are almost 2,000 people with a 100-level brand. As for what the author said about being in the street and not worthy of building a group, I respect, understand and bless you. 2. I like this book very much, and I also want to say something to those who want to understand the author: From the great master to the novice, the relationship between readers and authors is like this. I have also said that I hope that the author will not be affected by off-site factors, and that the author will adjust his state and write slowly. I am even worried that I am writing too much and the pressure is too much, and I have not pushed for an update once. Everyone is a fully subscribed user. Now that you are not happy, I am still angry. What a good book, it has become like this. Are we, the readers, taking the main responsibility? 3. Let's talk about the plot: When I say that the protagonist is a scumbag, I mean that he is always trying to maximize his own interests, and even only sees profit. As for simulation, then I would like to ask what else is there besides simulation? Ning Rongrong? Just because she is of no use to the protagonist, she is not as good as the little girl from Kamikaze Academy. Why do you always feel that simulation is not your own experience, and that simulation cannot reflect your character? Don't use a simulated knife blocker. To put it bluntly, Tang Fozu tried his best to save Xiao Wu, not to mention Zhu Qing and Xiao Xue who were willing to sacrifice themselves for the protagonist. As a cold-blooded hero who puts profits first and has never experienced tenderness (on the contrary, I think he and Chen Xin should be closer), it is not too much to say that he is a scumbag. All I see from the protagonist is emptiness, but there is no reason to be a scumbag. Zhuqing even gave him a reason to become stronger, but the protagonist just doesn't know what he is doing. What's even more terrible is that the protagonist has a strong sense of separation, and we don't want to portray him as Tang II, but we also created such a plot, with the scumbag Madonna jumping back and forth. Ah Yin has a female protagonist on his mind. How will he end up as a hero? Friendship comes first? Profit first? Ha Farewell, in the end, because A Yin is a woman, it is better to be included in the harem. Many people have analyzed that from A Yin's perspective, her rebellion is a dead end for the protagonist. The hero is a virgin, and her honesty is ironic. 4. For the sake of Zhuqing and Xiaoxue, I will still watch it and accept all discussions, criticisms and corrections. Above.

Bibi Dong