A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: A Heavenly Spiritual Root Beginning in the Demonic Path

The Tianlinggen you wrote is not as good as the Three Spiritual Roots, and you have a lot of bad taste. I don't understand why you include private stuff. Do you think everyone will laugh? Also, since you wrote about Tianlinggen, and you were also born in a big family, and your father formed the elixir and your mother established the foundation, you have completely failed to see the treatment that your Tianlinggen should receive. Don't know what you are writing about. The setting is quite interesting, otherwise I wouldn't have clicked in to read it, but I don't understand at all the treatment of a big family whose parents were born in Tianlinggen, and your upgrade is too outrageous, not as good as the Three Spiritual Roots. It doesn't matter if you write it yourself, but mortals don't care about the original work, and many of your colleagues who clicked in to read your book have read it. Everyone knows how fast Tianlinggen can be promoted.

The protagonist's name is Yi Zhonghai. It is the reincarnation of the moral god. Use morality to kidnap people in the devil's path and get them killed. This book is finished

This is different from the ordinary people in my mind. Many times during the qi training period, I have come together to chat with the Yuanying period. Things that can obviously be avoided are completely devoid of the essence of Han Paopao. Han Paopao, let alone Yuanying, will not take the initiative to lean on him even if he is building a foundation. I mean During the period of Qi training, the key was to rely on the old demon Yunlu who was not taboo about meat and vegetables. What do you think, the key was to meet the old demon Hehuan first. Oh, I am afraid there is something wrong. It is obvious that the family can manage to form elixirs, but even if it is not possible, don't go to Nascent Soul, right?

The protagonists of the author's previous novels were all five-spirited. How difficult it was for the protagonists to improve. But now Tianlinggen is getting higher and better, but they are so difficult to improve compared to those previous novels, so why is it necessary to write about Tianlinggen? In addition, I mentioned the golden finger in the sixth picture, but I haven't mentioned it yet. In addition, in Chapter 27, the protagonist must be reminded that he must choose to refine weapons. The purpose of refining talismans is to increase his interest in cultivation. Didn't the Golden Finger Lingmiao Garden allow the protagonist to increase his interest and improve his cultivation?

I don't know what it says. The son of the leader of the Tianlinggen clan is written like this. Some people think he is the son of a Wulinggen casual cultivator.

You are a mortal fellow, and the protagonist has traveled through time. Don't you want to determine the timeline first, speed up your cultivation, and then seize the opportunity? The first few chapters were okay, but then they became a bit watered down. Fortunately, they were free chapters.

Even though you are a demon, you are still low-key. You are still low-key even though you have Tianlingen. No one from the Tianlingen family comes to take care of you. You are just like a stranger who is a cheap dad. It's really funny.

Do you know why your grades are poor? The biggest poisonous point is that your family is useless and can't help you when you are weak, but you always betray me for no reason. You can even give out the top-grade spiritual stone veins, but can you use the top-grade spiritual stone wheel? Momen, Momen, you are here, it's just like that foundation that helps people for free, just the way you write it, stop writing it, I don't understand it at all, I'm really drunk

This technique requires the cultivation of four heavenly spiritual roots with five elements attributes. It feels like it was created just to suppress the protagonist. In the human world, it is better to practice top-notch techniques similar to Qingyuan Sword Art like Han Li. At least there aren't so many restrictions. When you arrive in the spirit world, you can practice the Great Five Elements Yunling Art and the Five Internal Organs Forging Yuan Gong written in the Golden Palace and Jade Book. Or similar immortal exercises like Little Big Dipper Yuan Gong. Or Lao Mo's Brahma Saint True Demonic Skill. Or you can just set up a top magic skill yourself. If you are afraid that the protagonist will break through too quickly, you might as well write a three-spirit root or something. As a result, the entire technique requires dual cultivation of four heavenly spiritual roots with different attributes to break through. This restriction is disgusting. Moreover, Yunlu is not as invincible as he imagined even after practicing. Even the great monks can't break through 😅

Your writing style simply cannot control the way Tianlinggen is written.