The Wasteland's Number One Food Stall

The writing is not like the wasteland. If the author hadn't cheated and had the halo of the heroine, and the silly and sweet character of the heroine created by the author, it would be difficult to survive in the real world, let alone the wasteland. Let's put it this way, it's a romance novel in the name of wasteland but without the atmosphere of wasteland.

The heroine is very well-behaved and innocent, but too well-behaved. In other words, she feels out of place. She traveled through time in the real world, so she can't be without any vigilance. The landlady said she had at least several thousand credit points, but she sold dozens. Because someone else rescued her, gave him the robotic arm she picked up, and made him eat well. That person was not considered a good person. When others warned or reminded her, even if the person died, there would be no police to care about her, and she would not protect herself even if nothing happened. No, are there really such simple people in real life? It looks strange and disconnected to me. In the setting of a doomsday wasteland, she has no force or background, and she also has a food system. The food system does not provide protection. She is also kind and has no edge, and a gentleman can bully her. It's like a sheep that breaks into a pack of hungry wolves and feeds them, fearing that it won't die. She is the protagonist, no one wants to strip the system for anatomy research, or imprison her so she can only make food for them. The charm of the background of the apocalyptic wasteland is that there is no clear definition between good and evil in human nature. In order to survive, I will do anything to survive. I can't see it. The background she presents is like the kind where the laws are sound and strict, and people live a prosperous life, are psychologically and physically satisfied, and have a perfect Engels coefficient. First of all, if you have a solid foundation, you will know the etiquette, and if you have enough food and clothing, you will know the integrity.

Just a small suggestion, the author should rewrite the male protagonist quickly. The current situation is like the heroine sympathizing with a beggar who once had a relationship with her, but has no emotional basis and is basically a complete stranger. Then this beggar (male protagonist) not only said that he couldn't help, but also constantly wanted to make love to the female protagonist. At night, he even wanted to hold hands and eat tofu when the female protagonist was completely unconscious. Don't say that it was the heroine who put her hand over. It was because the heroine thought that the man was paralyzed and couldn't move, so she had no choice but to squeeze into a bed due to the restrictions. Then in this situation, this male beggar still wanted to sleep with the heroine after moving. The author's mother, this really makes me want to vomit...

The heroine's character is like the little white flower in ancient novels, and she is still in the wasteland world and has no ability to protect herself at all.

This novel is okay. Articles of this quality on the Science Fiction Channel are really rare. I've invested in them so I can write more~

From the beginning I saw it and now I can't stand it. The setting of this article is a wasteland food stall. There are not enough wasteland elements and not enough food elements. Instead, it is very similar to ordinary romance novels. There is a wasteland setting, but the forces are divided according to wealth values. There are superpower settings, but there are only a few characters in total, and there is not even a research institute. The food system describes each Tianfa mission completed The character descriptions in it are not tense enough. No matter the protagonist, supporting role or even the passerby, the description is not three-dimensional. Author, you can't write like this anymore. It feels like you are writing a running account now. You will lose readers. If you really don't know how to write, it is better to just stop and start over.

I have been following the latest chapters, and I know why I kept my original identity and my family did not lose it. It really can fill up a lot of words! Each of the three members of the family would say a few nonsense words that would make their blood pressure soar, add some action descriptions, and tell a few bad things, and then the chapter would be over, sometimes even two chapters. Why don't the author hold a poll to see if you still want to see this family, and other works that write this kind of blood pressure plot In order to make revenge more enjoyable for readers, I have kept the number of words here... There is also the plot of the male and female protagonists watching a movie together. The first few chapters describe the content of the movie at large, and now there are so many movie content, which seems very boring. Instead, the food part is just mentioned! Please push the main story quickly...

Question: Doesn't the male protagonist have to poop?

What kind of apocalyptic boss is this heroine! ! She is simply more holy than the Holy Mother 🤔 I hope there will be changes in the future

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