The Cultivator at the Wizard Academy

If this novel followed the flow and followed the plot, it would be a good masterpiece. However, you must engage in Gou Daoliu in the world of cultivating immortals because they have no money and strength. Why do you, the son of a lord, do it??? Moreover, the power of your family and your fiancée's power are not bad, so there is no need to engage in Gou Daoliu, just advance normally...

If the character is not the heroine, don't describe her beauty too much, otherwise she will end up with someone else, which will be uncomfortable.

Only the better and more high-profile can you get the highest resources. The strength shown is almost the strongest in the school The real strength is used when stealing people secretly 😡 The Couple of Finance and Law The Number One in Finance

The overall feeling is that it is still a good idea, but it is a bit sluggish, or to put it another way, the progress is too slow. I have seen two chapters so far, so I will tell you the current plot to avoid spoilers. That is, the plot seems to have not entered the main plot at all, and I am still a freshman in the college. It is okay to be cautious, but the protagonist is 13 years old, a freshman in the academy, and his normal combat power is comparable to that of a super-level. He can resist the pressure of the instructor who is half a step away from the holy realm. In his immortal state, he can even kill the holy realm unexpectedly. His family is the lord of the north. The second steward said that the protagonist is the number one combat power in the family. Then, the protagonist gets along with a group of students who are learning the first level of zero-level magic in the academy, and earns three or four gold coins by refining high-quality life potions. Just, the sense of fragmentation is quite large, not too toxic, but it cannot be said to be non-toxic. In the later stage, the main line may have to be pushed faster, otherwise this sense of fragmentation will affect reading.

Personally, I suggest you switch to the light novel section. The taste is too strong, and cultivating immortals is too aggrieved.

I hope to open a harem and solve the problem of the heroine's lifespan

The writing is good, but looking at the writing style, the setting, and the plot, it was classified in the wrong category, right? With this style, shouldn't it be submitted to light novels, even fantasy? Why did it end up in fantasy? .

Delete post? Okay, okay, just delete the post, right? Is there white phosphorus in the human body? There are only two situations when there is white phosphorus in the body of a living person. One is if you can really eat it, and the second is how much did you drink?

I suggest you kill Yin Yue, it's too annoying.

It looks like the eunuch is ready to burn incense