
My Players Are so Fierce
我的玩家好凶猛
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Alas, the new books published by some of the authors I'm following are all multi-protagonist portraits, which is killing me. I really can't stand this kind of thing
I can't stand it anymore. I saw more than 370 chapters. I'm really good at it. There is one chapter for update announcement, one chapter for post-update and one chapter for pre-update forum chat. This problem was still acceptable in the early stage. I couldn't stand it after reading this chapter. Before the update, I discussed catching vampires. After the update, a player said that his vampire servants had debuffs and would be a hindrance. No one talked about it anymore. . . ? No, do you believe the author's reason? It's understandable to write about the lawful camp for the sake of the audience, but can you elaborate on the reason? This player's minion has a debuff, can I just find a healthy one to capture? Even if you write about a protagonist who uses strong tactics to ban his account and kill chickens to scare monkeys, wouldn't it be more effective than this? Are you looking down on the wives who play games too much? Not everyone is rushing to the first echelon. I mentioned earlier that players planned to use Clever to rob tombs. I could comfort myself that I might deal with it later, but now I feel like I don't understand how to deal with it. I also want to write that the players are from the lawful camp. When the players start to gravitate towards the chaotic camp, they are unable to provide reasonable corrections or solutions. They only issue announcements to divert the players' attention. I've read more than 700 chapters of Black Disaster in the comment section and haven't finished them yet. Okay, I originally thought that Black Disaster would have a war element soon, so let's forget about this progress. Finally, I want to complain. There are obviously only a few girl players, but they occupy a lot of space in the early stage. Moreover, 80% of the local characters appearing are female characters. I was confused in the early stage. This is obviously for pure love, but it is written in a harem way. After reading the comment area, there are also characters like xxn appearing later. . Okay, luckily I took a look at the comment section and withdrew.
Technology above a certain range may be considered more magical than magic by lower-level civilizations.
For example: a mobile phone. Ordinary people today don't understand the basic principles of its operation. Three hundred years ago, it would not have been regarded as some kind of artifact. This is only three hundred years and one or two industrial revolutions, there is such a big gap. The gap between real civilization and the creator civilization across the universe and the servants of interstellar civilization will only become wider. Even if cold nuclear fusion, a predictable technological creation of mankind, is placed in front of the best contemporary scientists, they can only come to two conclusions. First, this thing is most likely to use helium-3, and second, this thing is called cold nuclear fusion. The technology tree has to be climbed up bit by bit, and it has nothing to do with personal genius or not. Without certain basic technologies and theories, it is impossible to even understand, let alone imitate. If you really want to take the technological route, you might as well find the low-level technology retained by the servants in the server. The technology of some interstellar civilizations is enough. The creator who can be deciphered by desperate dogs using exhaustive methods to crack confidential projects is really low. 😤😤
Currently, it seems that Lao Lu's new book should refer to part of the Vampire world view, so in order to facilitate everyone's understanding, here is a picture to explain a small part of the settings that appear to be currently used. The first is the classification of vampires. Cain is usually considered to be the source, and the descendants directly created by Cain are the second generation, and so on. However, if the lower-level vampires suck and devour the upper-level vampires, they can increase their generation and strength, and the direct elders are the best (this is the biggest crime in vampire society). As shown in the picture are the main clans. The origins of these clans are the third generation vampires (except Ruimor) who launched a rebellion against the second generation vampires. Cursed by Cain for killing Cain's children, each race has its own weaknesses. Vampires have different views on humans. The basic consensus is to hide the existence of vampires in human society. The degree varies but at least the number of people who know the existence of vampires must be controlled, including but not limited to temptation, mind control and even killing. Vandro, Turedor, and Letember are considered to be the three superior clans, while Revno, Nosferatu, and Gangaro are considered to be the three lower clans because of their bestiality and deception, but each clan has its own secrets. Ruimor (currently the blood vulture that Lao Lu pinches the most) is the only non-third-generation vampire. It originated from a group of human mages' research on vampires. This research used magic to transform humans into vampires. On this basis, Ruimor (name) devoured a third-generation vampire and upgraded himself to a third-generation vampire. At the same time, Ruimor pursues complete control of mankind, going against the wishes of all clans. So it is basically the public enemy of all ghosts, and the ghosts will kill them if they get it. Knights of the Blood Palace: Vampires have different pursuits of their own lives, including money, power and even various desires. However, some vampires believe in chivalry, and they form the Knights of the Blood Temple. Use unlimited ghosts to devote themselves to the pursuit of virtue and travel around the world. They will protect other vampires and humans, and kill crazy vampires and those who harm society. They have no law enforcement power, but there is no weak person who can survive to patrol and enforce justice. Kindness is not weak. Monsters: Currently, not much can be seen in the background. The werewolves, mummies, demons, and even the fallen immortals and ghosts from the East have not yet appeared. Witch Hunter: Inquisition, in the endless night when dark creatures rule mankind, some people glimpse the truth and swear to protect mankind and eliminate evil. This group of people formed the Witch Hunters and used their own methods to protect the ignorant. In their lives, they will encounter various setbacks and pains, and some will succumb to vampires and demons because of their immortality and strength. However, their existence is the line of defense between humans and dark creatures. (The above is the promotional slogan) In fact, there are a mixed bag of people among witch hunters, from monks and believers to bandits and villains, and there are also perverts like Kotomine Kirei, who are just trying to see how many skins vampires can peel off, and whether demons can tattoo themselves. Faith: In the supernatural world, faith is powerful. It does not matter whether God exists or not. As long as humans have something to believe in fervently, they will gain extraordinary power. For example, if you believe in God and get the Holy Light, you believe in the sickle. In the idealistic world, power comes from the heart and is displayed outside. In the background setting of the Vampire Clan, the strongest true believer can turn a vampire into a human in a single thought. Five loaves and two fishes are just a small problem.
I always feel that the emotional line is too awkward
It's not over yet. I'm tired of reading it. Let's start a new book.
The old road won't work anymore! There are only 227 monthly passes in March. If you add more there will definitely be more than these.
Well, let me also post a book review. This book is highly recommended.
This book is well written, the author's writing style is still online, and I am also reading the Ming Guang book. Let me tell you, these are two completely different styles. In the Ming Guang book, the protagonist has been basically symbolized, including Xiaoyu, and the female boss has no role. The protagonist is too "holy" and has no selfish desires (little description). Although this book is also about players, the central axis is always close to Murphy, and the protagonist is more humane, and has all the astringent and sinister tricks. The author has a good balance in this aspect
Shocked, Lao Lu turned out to be the inventor of the Mingchao style!
When I was looking at the shadow tracks today, I found traces of Mingtide style.
Happy April Fool's Day
Happy April Fool's Day everyone. The books are getting better and better. Ten updates a day are even better. Looking forward to it.
Come, come, update
April Fool's Day-Give me freedom or give me death
It was late at night on April 1st, a very ordinary night. The creator "Frank the Handsome Dog" was repairing the "My Player is So Fierce" universe (ps. In Fenbi Jishu). Suddenly, the Universe Tiandao (ps. Laptop) sent a message: Lord Creator, Murphy is leading the players of "Real Alien", with the help of the book club friends, trying to break through the shackles of the universe, and is reporting to the Creator to see if he can stop it! "Handsome Dog Frank": Don't panic, I wrote this book, and I created the universe. If you want to break the shackles, leave the money to buy your life! I saw "Frank the Handsome Dog" taking out the creation artifact - the golden finger keyboard, and using the world-destroying trick "Plot Modification". In an instant, Murphy and the "Real World" players were erased from the "My Player is So Fierce" universe and space! At this point, the 1001st resistance in the universe of "My Players Are So Fierce" ended in complete failure! But as long as Murphy and the players know the truth of the universe, then the 1002nd...1001+Nth resistance will surely come! This is the belief that belongs to Murphy and the players: "Give me freedom or give me death"!
Dad (will be kicked down anyway) 😜😜😜
April Fools' Day: Looking for Elena
Suddenly traveling through time and becoming a vampire, Murphy laughed heartily after being confused for a moment. "Wahahaha... I can live forever." "Wahahaha... I can marry Elena." I just watched "The Vampire Diaries" a few days ago, and now I have traveled to this different world and become a vampire. Thinking about Elena's long legs and Caroline's plumpness, Murphy was very excited. But thinking about the blood-red eyes of Stefan and Damon, the two ancestors of vampires, Murphy suppressed his unreasonable thoughts. However, it would be a beautiful thing if you could become their little brother, being protected by the two ancestors and admiring your slim waist and long legs every day. Murphy accepted the fact that he had traveled through time with the small thoughts that all men have. The first otherworldly vampire Murphy saw was Tris, a weak and sickly beauty. Tris is Murphy's elder, and they live together in a dilapidated castle. Murphy did not find any information about Elena from the memory of the original owner. After several roundabout inquiries from Tris, there was no trace of Stefan and Damon, the two highly respected vampire ancestors. Could it be that the other world here is not the same plane as the one in "The Vampire Diaries"? Murphy asked about Bella and Edward again, but found no such person. This is not the Twilight Zone either. Unwilling to give up, Murphy began to go outside to inquire. He helped people work, chatted with people, brought his questions into the conversation smoothly, and then looked for answers from the other party's words. It was just that there was no information about Elena, which made him even more anxious than his system progress bar that grew by 12% every day. Soon, the whole town knew that Murphy was looking for a girl named Elena, but no one in the whole town knew Elena. Until one day, Murphy met someone he had never seen before. He got close to that person as before and asked for information about Elena. "Are you looking for Elena? The long-legged beauty Elena? I know where she is." The man stretched out a hand and motioned for Murphy to hand over the relief food he had just received. Finally, with the news about Elena, Murphy gave all the relief food to her without even thinking about it. The man took the relief food and pointed the way to Murphy in this way. Murphy went to find Elena excitedly. Walking out of the town, passing through a large green wheat field, passing an orchard, and then crossing a large river, Murphy came to a manor. Standing at the door of the manor, Murphy was extremely nervous, he was about to see Elena, Elena with a slim waist and long legs. Murphy stretched out his clothes, smoothed out his hair that was blown by the wind, took three deep breaths, and then stepped into the manor. In the huge yard of the manor, some girls dressed in uniforms came and went carrying wooden barrels. There were many cows tied up in the shed on one side, making a mooing sound. Several men are feeding the cattle. "Young man, who are you looking for?" A little girl carrying a barrel discovered Murphy. "I'm looking for Elena." Murphy was extremely nervous. "What are you doing with Elena?" The little girl looked confused. "I want to become her teacher." Murphy said frankly. "Pfft..." The little girl burst into laughter. "You... Are you looking for Elena... To become your apprentice?" At first, I noticed that this young man was good-looking, so I came up to talk to him. I didn't expect that he was a fool. "Elina will not accept you as her disciple." The little girl was about to burst out laughing. Murphy thought the little girl looked down on him, and his face was full of shame. "Even if Miss Elena doesn't agree, please sister let me meet Miss Elena." Murphy kept begging. He almost knelt down before the little girl. In order to get rid of Murphy's entanglement, the little girl agreed to take him to see Elena. Turned around a row of houses and came to a fence. The little girl shouted to the small house in the fence: "Elena." Murphy wondered why Elena was in a place like this. Isn't it more suitable for raising animals? Murphy's doubts were explained by a giraffe that came out slowly. A long-legged giraffe came out from behind the small house. That's right, it's a long-legged giraffe, not long-legged Elena. "Is it Elena?" Murphy felt that something was wrong. "Yes, Elina Meili." The little girl looked at Murphy with crooked eyebrows. The beauty is quite beautiful, but she is not the Elena that Murphy is looking for. "What I'm looking for is a girl, the beautiful Elena, not the beautiful deer Elena." Murphy refused to give up. "There are many beauties here, but there is no one named Elena. How about you find someone else?" "No Elena? Vampire Elena, don't you know?" Treating the giraffe as a great beauty and worshiping it as his teacher, Murphy just wanted to find a crack in the ground and crawl into it. "There is no Elena, I'm sure there isn't one here." The little girl said firmly. "Today is April Fool's Day, have you been deceived?" The little girl reminded kindly, looking at Murphy's lost look. Murphy's handsome face turned red with embarrassment, and he fled the manor like the wind. Murphy, who returned to town in a state of embarrassment, heard people pointing fingers at him. "That loser was deceived." "I want Lu to be his master, hahahaha..." "Today is April Fool's Day, he doesn't even know." Murphy, who was deceived, did not find Elena in the end, and wanted to kill those who laughed at him. However, what he wanted to kill more was his stupid self.
April Fool's Day FanGame Test
In the basement of Tris Manor, Murphy finally successfully loaded the "Real World" beta administrator system, which allowed him to summon players and trick them into doing work for him. However, whether it is to familiarize yourself with the system or to familiarize players with the game, you must first do a test and complete the novice guidance task. So, what kind of test task should be designed? Murphy's gaze fell deep into the basement. Although the floor was covered with spider webs and broken wine bottles, Murphy still thought confidently: "This basement is large enough. I can set up some simple traps and puzzles, so that these players who think they are playing a virtual reality game can show their true nature as players who rummage through the cabinets to find things." So, he used his few dark psychic powers to inspire summons and summoned two players. "Warriors from another world, you are welcome to answer the call. However, I need to see if you are healthy, energetic enough, and sharp enough." "I have prepared a treasure hunt game for you. As long as you can successfully find the hidden treasure box in the basement, you can pass the test and be officially qualified to play in the "Real Alien World" game." After saying that, Murphy's figure disappeared into the basement. After the two players excitedly touched up and down, they began to hunt for treasure in the dark, rummaging around in the basement. Needless to say, players are indeed very talented when it comes to rummaging through boxes and cabinets. Even if there is no light in the basement, the two players can't actually see anything. But the immersive virtual reality game experience made the two players particularly active. They groped around in the dark and finally found a bunch of things. When the basement door reopened, Murphy took inventory and found two unopened bottles of dwarf ale. The labels were 250 years old and could be used to honor Tris. Then there is a set of exquisite wine sets placed in a decaying box, which looks a bit like the art style of the elves. A worn-out pocket watch with a dented case was dropped by Murphy's predecessor in the basement, and there were still blood stains on it. There is also a pile of coins. In addition to rusty copper pieces and dull silver coins, there are also several golden Portia gold coins. Finally, there is the hidden treasure box that Murphy had hidden before. Players opened the treasure box, and there was a note inside, which read: [Congratulations to the players for completing the April Fool's Day treasure hunt adventure and officially gaining the qualification to test play "Real World". This game solemnly declares that "Real World" is not a 100% holographic virtual reality game. All bugs encountered during the game are not guaranteed to be repaired, nor are they guaranteed to be suitable for the gaming experience of all players. The two players looked at each other and didn't take it seriously. Although this game is indeed very hardcore in terms of experience, the two of them were rummaging through boxes and cabinets for more than half an hour and were panting from exhaustion. The intensity was no lower than doing general cleaning in reality. But the immersive gaming experience is indeed very attractive. They originally thought that this game was promoted under the guise of a virtual reality game on April Fool's Day, but it turned out to be true. It was really Blue Star's first holographic immersive virtual reality game, and it was bound to become popular in the future. As the first batch of test players, they can catch up with the popularity and become star players in the future, which will make them rich! The two asked in unison: "Administrator, do we want to continue to recruit test players for this game? My roommate/brother can also sign up and ask the administrator to turn over the cards and give him a chance to test." Murphy nodded happily: Leek is so active, why worry about failing to achieve great success? ————
Why isn't it my player track? Forced to death by obsessive-compulsive disorder?
Suddenly I understood why Lao Lu's original original failed. Originally, Lao Lu wrote either Azeroth or American comics, which were all about Western fantasy worlds. As a result, the original theme is directly related to the oriental martial arts world, which is obviously not in line with the temperament of Lao Lu. It should be like this one, with a Western fantasy worldview.
A brief review on cement sealing
Concrete Heart is the leader of a group of highly intelligent human women. He is known for his high IQ as soon as he appears. This group has a special feature: only women with high IQs are eligible to join the group. As the group leader, her IQ score is far higher than the second place in the group. She is suspicious by nature. Even if all her good friends have entered and exited the game, she still feels that the game is planning to harm her. Therefore, until her death, she never used the helmet. She has an insight into people's hearts. With just a few words, she can make her friends in foreign countries take risks for her own sake, until she is caught by the government. She has a simple mind and can use the funds from the laboratory grant however she wants. Because of such a simple idea, she was controlled by the country's government. She has an eternal IQ. In the harsh situation where the helmet cannot be disassembled by any means available to humans, and no user data is obtained, she successfully contacted the aliens by patting her forehead, using I Xunsi Can Dafa, and rubbing an instrument with her hands to successfully contact the aliens She is not afraid of life and death, she is the only one. The broken machine she rubbed with her own hands, when she thought it was likely to explode, she bravely took the risk and successfully cured herself of an incurable disease She was not particular about trivial matters. In order to be able to contact aliens, she did not hesitate to use the strange machine she rubbed with her own hands to send the coordinates of the earth to the aliens with her life. As for the small things like attracting evil gods and destroying the earth immediately, she didn't take it to heart. To sum up, this may be the most perfect female image in the author's mind.
You have proved with facts that the best way to solve the slow heating problem is to update quickly.
It's all water. After watching 1/4 of it, the novice village has not even been built. There are only 60 players. It's all nonsense. The routines are all copied from the Morning Star book. It's so embarrassing. This is the worst Fourth Natural Disaster article I have ever read.
The so-called fourth natural disaster is just a joke. You cannot rely on your immortality and fearlessness. If you really throw a bunch of people into another world, they will not survive for a month with zero survival skills in the wild.
It feels like the beginning is a bit broken, and some logic and rationality are relatively loose For example, the "player" summoned me, and I was surprised at the realism of this world, but just said "so real" and it was over. There was no more exploration behavior. Look at Wang Lei this year, every player is just like doing scientific research, there is a strong sense of fragmentation here In addition The protagonist "travels" and the player "summons", but after seeing the player, the protagonist shows no doubt about the reality of the current world or curiosity about the player's world. This is unreasonable How the player feels about this world is not explained at all. It is just a "feeling of pain weakened". How much is it weakened? There is also the specific physical condition of the players in this world. After all, it is outrageous that a group of useless college students can defeat demon hunters who have gone through training and life-and-death hunting. It is not explained to what extent they have been strengthened after coming to this world, and the players are not curious about their own changes at all This is unreasonable
The author is really suitable for writing fan fiction. Because the first few books are big IPs, everyone has a general impression of the supporting characters. The author can expand the original characters in a very innovative way. The interaction between the protagonist and the characters in the book will be very interesting. The readers also have a vague impression of the main events in the book. Therefore, when promoting the plot, as long as there are reasonable operations that the readers cannot imagine, it is easy to shape the image of the protagonist. But this book is the fourth natural disaster novel, and it is an original world. It is difficult to describe the world view and characters. The protagonist has no impression of the world background, so a venerable person is given to educate the readers and the protagonist. Without foresight, the protagonist can only rely on the players to reverse the situation. The description of the characters in the original world of the Witch Hunter is really good, and several local characters are brought to life, from the destruction and reconstruction of the city of Transia to the preparation and response to the black disaster. , Players account for a huge proportion, and Niu Niu Hei and Meow Meow King are relatively comfortable to write in. One is the first player in the game who does not regard interactive characters as NPCs, and the other is a highly skilled heroic player. They both look like normal people, at least like players who really come to play games instead of working. But the key came. Later the novel became [high-quality men and women in the new era bravely venture into a different world and use technology to defeat indigenous magic], which is full of political correctness and gender correctness. The role of the protagonist decreased at the beginning, and the emphasis was placed on describing high-quality players. The proportion of descriptions of local characters also dropped, and the descriptions of local characters began to become tool-based and face-like. The magnificent steam magic world was reduced to a background version, and the proportion of science and technology was greatly increased. Cold weapons, magic, and steam technology all became the auxiliary of modern guns. I seemed to have become a clown when I was watching the plot carefully. In general, the slow plot progression, poor overall player shaping, and imbalanced proportion of technology and magic are disadvantages, while the complete world view, interesting plot, and fast updates are advantages. I could give 95 points to the last book, but I can only give 70 points to this one.
After reading part of it, I felt that it was depressing and confusing. Maybe there are already one or two books with a relatively complete setting on the same subject. Now I read this book and I feel that there are many setting loopholes and the swing between the player group image and the protagonist's personal image. As a result, the image of both parties has not been established. Coupled with the author's unique writing style and narrative techniques, well, how to put it, the characters that have appeared are not very likable. Of course, this book is also written by a big author, and there are many fans. It can only be said that each author has his own audience, so let's wait and see until it is finished 🙂
Cement is probably the most disliked player at the moment. If I don't want to see her, Cement will die early or leave the game if she is alone.
It's not as good as the previous book, which is second-rate. Many characters and settings in it are one-sided and disgusting. There are no outstanding characters and storylines. There is only slapstick chaos. There is no spirit worthy of praise. There is only the ability and talent in setting. It feels like watching a poor puppet show. The characterization is superficial, the character setting is unflattering, and the plot direction is mediocre. I see the shortcomings of the author's talent, even though he works hard? Second rate work
Finished spreading flowers!
Every book written by Lao Lu is somewhat toxic, but they are all bearable... This book gave me the feeling that I had the sequelae of being beaten by a female puncher before, and the injury was so severe that I began to have delusions. Give up, Lao Lu, no matter how many high-quality women you write about, it won't change the fact that you are a man!
I feel like it's boring to watch.
When I read Chapter 453, I felt good at first, with the theme of a different world. However, once it got involved with reality, and then with the high-quality girl group, everyone's backstory, and the inexplicable emotional drama, the taste changed. It's hard to describe. The development of the psionic side is far inferior to that of the technological side. The description of psionic spells is less than the description of cold weapons and firearms. The whole book was a bit confusing for me. I felt like I had to do one thing, and then I immediately told you to do another. Then I told you that the original thing was done later, but there was no real sense. I read in the comment section that this book focuses on the protagonist, but when I saw this, I felt that the protagonist had no sense of existence. Kurogane has been practicing for so long, and it is not enough to tell us. The training process is basically explained in one stroke, and the sense of substitution is very poor. It is basically just peeping at forum players and making decisions on a daily basis. yysy, this book doesn't feel like a fantasy world to me now. It's just that the things people shoot with guns have turned into some alien species. And I only remember a few of the characters so far. Many of them I have almost forgotten that there are such people.
It's too cliche, brother, do you have to write a cliché about a genius beautiful girl? And there are also clichés like the player guessing the truth, uh-huh.
I remember the author is married? I can only say that it's no wonder. The last book wasn't so outrageous. In this book, genius girls have appeared and a small group of genius girls have appeared. Now there is a genius girl spy. That's about it. Are you going to have a genius girl official next? Also, did your editor give you hard targets? Do you have to write it on intelligence contacts? Generally speaking, you don't touch this thing if you can't touch it. You don't touch it too much when you go up the pole like this. It will be fun to disappear from my bookshelf one day, which means that you update a lot... But when it comes to updates, why do I always feel that you update a lot but at the same time very little? After looking at the amount of information and details, there is nothing? Maybe it's because I'm not smart enough, so those talented girls can understand the tricks you're playing at a glance.