Mysterious Nightmare

After reading thirty chapters, I feel overwhelmed. This book has good creativity and good character descriptions in all aspects. However, the plot and fighting are not clearly described, which always makes me feel as if I have missed a paragraph or part of the description has been swallowed up. See you in the next book if we are destined to do so 😅

As long as it's not the magic witch Liuliu Gong who makes his trumpet public, that guy can't write well and scolds readers all the time.

You'd better not be the magic witch Liuliu.

I took a look at the fantasy area. It's really cruel. This area is extremely cold

I'm really not suitable for reading Western fantasy novels. It gives me a headache, especially the chapter about the unnamed experimental subject.

I saw the author said that reading it was touching Let me talk about my feelings First, I feel that it is not very similar to online writing, mainly in terms of rhythm. The writing style at the beginning is very attractive, which is what I like, but as I read on, I found that it is not what I like (my parents are still alive in Utopia, and I am not very used to the fact that the machine will self-destruct at the beginning) , now I see the bishop here, the bishop explodes the protagonist when he comes up, and John kills him three times, five times and two times... 🤔 Third, it is too daily, and there is still no sense of oppression from the abyss I won't say more, everyone has their own preferences, I quite like Auntie's family I hope the author will write better and better, see you in the future.

4 Book friends invested 117 times, which platform master turned over? 😰

The writing is still a bit cryptic, I think it would be better if it was a little more simple.

Guess: Chris is Azathoth, the blind and foolish god. Everything in this continent, including the Utopia, comes from God's cognition. "God" is a derivative of God. If they want to exist, they must please God. God allows Utopia to appear. Why is Chris a god? Because of the thought after the death of the previous life, Chris is Azathoth from this moment on, and everything exists in that thought until eternity.

The collection is not small and the investment is not small, but why are the results so poor? I don't understand…

It has some taste. I tested the waters and recommended this book. It should be at least v4 level.

This kind of novel should not be in the starting point, it should be in a certain literary magazine. The limited readers did not increase the wide spread of this book. Instead, due to the limitations of the text, the story became fragmented.

It's on the shelves. I'd like to support it by ordering it for the first time. At present, I'm thankful that the book can be completed normally. Don't think about becoming a god or becoming a hit. It's too far away. After reading more than 100 chapters, I can feel that the author's writing style is gradually improving. After looking at the first few dozen chapters, I always felt that something was missing. At least now, the main line of the novel is gradually becoming clear, which makes people want to read it. However, I personally feel that after it is put on the shelves, the reading of this book will fall to a miserable level. The author basically can only make money by working hard. Maybe after 700,000 to 800,000 words, the reading can be longer? I wish I had these word counts. The best case scenario is that this book can be completed until it is completed, with at least one million words as the foundation, accumulating experience and honing the writing skills, attracting a few regular fans, and placing hopes on the next book, if there is another one 🙂. In the past few years of reading for Qidian, I have read not only 100 but also 80 potential eunuch books. There are only five books, only five of them 🙂 Changing Fate Against the Heavens. Well, to be precise, it is a book that has become popular after finishing one book and then starting a new one. Fuck, I just finished the first book and finished the outline in a hurry. The reality conflicts with the pressure of life. Alas, I am looking forward to the next book. Every 6 is a hurdle. Author, I am very optimistic about you. I hope you can become the sixth author.

The He Tu that was agreed upon has a young heroine in mind. The picture above is before post-production.

Picture of male protagonist Ai

I can still continue to beautify things in the later stage, such as gears and characters, but my fingers really can't dig at them and they slip away

I can't stand it anymore. How long has passed and I still haven't put down this novel... In fact, I started writing songs for the Kroff family in May. The tune was already ready, but there was no accompaniment. I originally wanted to find a tool to replace the singing voice of the poem when it was published, but found that it wasn't. I want money but it can't be installed on my mobile phone... The numbers behind the lyrics mean the picture. Yes, although it is very simple, I drew a corresponding picture for each lyric... I am still making this video now, so forget it if I can't change the sound. Anyway, this circle is small, no one listens, and I am not afraid of being discovered by acquaintances

In the new year, all the best and good health

Damn it first. The lyrics include flashbacks The audio is about four minutes, I want to think of a way. Lyrics and picture allocation: First 1-18 Long sticky short sentences 19 Adopt the fleeing wanderer 20~22 Building body to face the tsunami 23~24 So small 25 But delaying the huge waves that cover the sky 26 Why is fate 27 So absurd 28 Must be reconciled with family 29 Struggle for life 30 The tomb church at the corner under the bridge 31~34 The real name is as complex as weeds 35~36 The god-weary wears it 43.44 Cogs as disguise 45 Stepping into the temple 46 Crown as pope 47, 48 Step into the old room 37 The eldest son is finally realized 39 Promised to repair the roof when he was young 38, 39, 40, 41, 42 The heretic's son is related to the end of the family 49, 50, 51 The bottom line is not to invade property for profit 52 Nobles regard human life as lowly 53 Rewarding without hesitation leads to disaster 54 Tall and strong body is stuffed into a small coffin 55 Tears, bitterness and salty thoughts only 56, 57, 58, 59, 60 The past is as sweet as a dream 61 Can't swallow it 62, 63, 64 Hold on to the only vine 65 The silver snake climbs between the arms 66 Revenge is not empty talk 67, 68, 69, 70 Wishes are just delusions 60, 59 Everything is restored 61 Alone with one suitcase 71, 72 Praying at the dinner table 73, 74 Put on the shackles of the gods 75, 76, 77 The gears are broken and the tentacles are entangled 78, 79 The lone leader is wary of everything 80 Lies are nothing more than a clash of lips and teeth 81, 82 The proof of sincerity is 83 The light shines on the light bulb 83 (close-up light) He said children have privileges 83 (Close-up dream) Fantasy 84 The original Utopia 85, 86 Not a fantasy 87, 88, 89 There are parents in it 90, 91, 92 Embracable 93, 94 The truth of science is constant 95, 96, 97 Humanity will eventually welcome hope 98-101 Above the gods Bury all the twists and tricks 102, 103 Good times don't last long and the truth raises the knife 104, 105, 106 After all, there is no one to rely on 107, 108 The longer the road becomes, the more confusing it becomes 109 The steel building and iron mesh 110, 111 Is it a dream or a hometown ××× The so-called ideal state It is just a place for ants to hide.

I found a way to change my voice, and then I got some accompaniment. Don't ask where it came from, it's good to have it

After thinking about it, after being busy for a long time, I decided to post it and not put it in the fandom area. It's all Chris I tried drawing on mobile phone software, but the temperament is too kind, so I gave up (I'm working on my hair style, it won't be so long in the future) Hand-drawing feels much better, but the proportions look weird, and so does the hairstyle, so I give up. I will take advantage of these two days of vacation and try to come back with another version (the sketches of Cat and Kasia were really fun to draw)

Touching it is to show an attitude that I still remember the debt. If I can survive the final exam, let's talk about fandom issues. I can still practice my drawing skills during the holidays It's a sad thing not to be able to draw girls. I swear that the Kashia I draw in the future will not be as weird as the one on the left in P2 Save money: Kashia in the lower left corner of P2 and Chris in the middle - Miriam on the scarf is the cutest