Douluo Dalu: This Time, I'll Rewrite Fate

Tang should really give a thumbs up to Teacher Mu Fengchun. The first time he came into contact with Douluo was through the comics written by Teacher Mu Fengchun.

I don't understand why Xiao Hongchen and Wang Donger were paired together. Maybe the author wrote this fanfic just to make up for his regrets while reading the book? I dare to say that 90% of people ran away immediately after seeing the introduction. There is no other meaning. I just feel that without this pair of CPs, the performance of this book will definitely reach several levels.

(The first line congratulates the author on his surprise resurrection after three months) This article is the best Dou Er fanfic I have ever read on Qidian. I have read many fan stories about Huo Yuhao's Rebirth at Qidian, but I have read almost none of them. I have been thinking, what kind of Huo Yuhao can make up for the regrets in my heart as a reader? What kind of Huo Yuhao should be who he was in the first half of the original book and who he wanted to be? I think, first of all, the power of freedom. He is the proud son of heaven and the son of luck in the plane. He cannot be controlled by the Tang Shenwang. The mainstream of Qidian Douluo fans is anti-Tang, and they are basically defeated. This goes without saying. The second is concentration. Huo Yuhao's own mother died due to his father's lack of concentration, which became his lifelong regret. How could he be as sentimental as his father? If Huo Yuhao is still Huo Yuhao, his partners will only have two situations: single female protagonist and no cp. The end is redemption. Huo Yuhao may have gained a lot in his life in Dou 2, such as unparalleled strength, close comrades, and respectable teachers... Tang San has no father or mother in the setting, and he grew up in the competition between sects. After time traveling, his father is useless and his teacher is cowardly and incompetent. Therefore, he is ruthless and ungrateful, and his intelligence is almost demonic. Although Huo Yuhao had deep-seated hatred for being mistreated by the White Tiger Duke Palace, he was a child who grew up in the love of his mother. After his mother passed away, he met Tianmeng, Bingdi, and several teachers who taught and cared for him. His character was gentle (even cowardly in some things). Such character traits made him lose a lot when he faced the schemes of Tang Shenwang. His love, his choice, his freedom... He couldn't even choose whether to hate his father or save his mother, just because the God King needed the sharpest knife. On the basis of anti-Tang Dynasty, the most important thing Dou Er fan fiction should do is to redeem this boy who grew up in an environment where love and hate are intertwined. Obviously, this fan has done all of these very well. Huo Yuhao has always been that kind and clever boy, just like his mother taught him, just like what Da Huo wanted him to grow up to be. He has teachers who love and care for him, friends who cherish each other, and a lover who supports each other. He can also freely choose his own ambition: to create another path for the soul beast... Everything Da Huo wanted to do, but in the end was not perfect or even accomplished. Even Wang Dong has a good path, and it is appropriate that the author uses the auspicious beast as the heroine. In the original work, in addition to the fact that the martial soul fusion has no connection and looks like it was made up, it is also obvious that Wang Dong's personality changed significantly before and after he recovered his daughter's body. The boy's Wang Dong is arrogant and reserved, while the girl's Wang Dong is somewhat forward-looking and sentimental. Their relationship in the original work is indeed very touching, but I think if a love makes people blind and unconfident, then the love itself may not be suitable enough. After changing the CP, Wang Dong and Xiao Hongchen unexpectedly reached a delicate balance. Wang Donghui is willing to change his cultivation path for the sake of the team, and Xiao Hongchen is also willing to give up his future and spend a lot of money. The two are so similar and cherish each other. And Rui Shou finally had the ending he deserved with his fate. But no matter what the cp is, Wang Dong and Rui Shou are different from traditional pendant male protagonists. In the original work, T3 integrated the two very charismatic female protagonists Wang Donger and Wang Qiuer created in the first half of the book into Tang Wutong, a father's tool man without any personal characteristics. Let Dou 2's heroine become the second most criticized aspect of this novel. Fortunately, Wang Dong in this article gave birth to her own flesh and blood. She is no longer a scabbard, but a newly forged sword. She is not Tang Xiaoqi, not Tang Wutong, but the sword of revolution that stabs the powerful. The last thing I want to say is what I think is the most touching passage in this article. In the two chapters "No Longer Leading to My Future" and "The Day of Harvest", Da Huo said to Xiao Huo, "The price I gained this ability was the loss of my teacher, so you don't have to pay any price for this." Just like a popular Internet meme, "The first child you raise as an adult is yourself." I think at that moment, he finally forgave the boy who could only watch his teacher disappear like sand between his fingers, and then gradually lose the power to control his destiny. The charm of fan fiction is generally like this. When there is no second chance in life, the characters in the book still have the opportunity to grow flesh and blood. Huo Yuhao, continue to grow in the love of readers. This time, no one can stop you.

The synopsis of the group portrait of a female protagonist makes me feel sick to my stomach. I don't often read books with single female protagonists, so I really don't understand. It's okay if you only write about single female protagonists, but the original female protagonist? I don't understand why you forcefully get together with others.

Blood gushed out from the Shaohao fist! The sword soul and body are separated! Suo Tongzhang is infertile for thousands of years! Qiankun Wenqing's murder and father-in-law's love! Qiankun Wenqing's suicide, father's kindness! The Buddha's Light and Buddha of the Ninth Soul Skill has arrived! God cannot interfere in the human world, be flexible and have double standards!

It is rare to see a fan who carefully creates the character, and it is still a Douluo fan at the starting point. If this kind of work can be considered poisonous, then some people might as well die early.

Chapter One "Weird" World Tang San found that everything around him was strange, beyond his understanding: metal pipes could produce water with just a flick of the hand, and round objects in the kitchen could easily emit flames. The strangest thing is undoubtedly the "crystal panel" in the living room, which can actually display various images. Tang San couldn't understand all of this, but he could feel that to the people around him, these were common sense. He didn't dare to reveal his identity as a time traveler, and naturally he didn't dare to ask questions, so he could only observe and explore in secret. Chapter 2 The establishment of the Tang Sect failed Tang San's ideal of revitalizing the Tang Sect failed. He originally wanted to find a blacksmith shop to build his first hidden weapon from another world. Unexpectedly, when I walked through the streets, there was no blacksmith shop. Instead, I saw silverware shops on several busy streets. Unfortunately, they couldn't meet my requirements at all. Fortunately, through unremitting efforts, he finally found a traditional blacksmith shop. The advertisement said that they could customize according to user needs. However, when the other party heard that Tang San wanted to forge it himself and refused outsiders to observe, he immediately thought he was here to cause trouble and kicked him out directly. "A guy who looks down on others with dog eyes." In Tang San's opinion, the people in the blacksmith shop treated him so meanly and dismissively, and they already had a plan to kill him. Unfortunately, he didn't have any hidden weapons on hand, and he didn't even have the materials to use hidden weapons, so he had to retreat temporarily. Chapter 3 The Way to Death "I didn't expect that there are so many people in this world who have the way to die." Tang San said secretly. When he went shopping for groceries today, an aunt snatched the last spicy rabbit head from the cooked vegetable shop with him. Not only did she mock him, but she even mocked him: "What age are you? A young man doesn't even know how to scan a QR code to pay." Tang San recognized that aunt and lived in the building next door to theirs. It is not convenient to do it during the day, but after dinner, the aunt will go downstairs to do some "square dance". That was Tang San's best chance, the best chance to kill with a hidden weapon. He was absolutely sure that no one would find out that he did it. Without evidence, who can say that he committed the murder? Although he does not have mechanical concealed weapons, he can still use the Tang Sect's hidden weapons. He went downstairs with the fruit knife at home and carefully hid behind a private car. When Auntie approached, the fruit knife in Tang San's hand suddenly flew out. Tang Sect's hidden weapon technique ranks tenth, Bat Wing Reincarnation. Although he has only been practicing for a short period of time and the fire level is still shallow, Tang Sect's hidden weapons cannot be evaded by such things. Chapter 4 Finale The Stupid Murderer "You dare to arrest me, but you don't know if you dare to make a bet with me!" "What nonsense!" Tang San shouted while struggling, but no matter how strong he was, two policemen each held down one of his arms and stuffed him into the police car. As for the bet? What do they do when they are policemen? When they are full and full, go make a bet with a criminal suspect? The leading police chief exhaled: In all his years as a detective, this is the first time he has seen someone so stupid. This is almost the easiest murder case he has ever handled. Not only were there fingerprints on the murder weapon, but the young man was very sneaky and hiding around when he committed the murder. I don't know who he was trying to deceive, but he didn't know that it was all clearly captured by the camera. Chapter 5 (continued) Prison Storm Tang San limped to the glass and sat down, looking at Tang Hao and A Yin on the other side. He has been in jail for a month and his life is not good. On the first day of imprisonment, Oma's leader, a tall and strong man, wanted to give him a blow. After he knocked him down, the other party became furious and beat him up. Then he ravaged him severely. There are different teachings: The chrysanthemums are broken, the ground is covered with wounds, and your smile has turned yellow... Tang San endured the humiliation and took the opportunity a few days later while eating, using chopsticks as a hidden weapon, and attempted to attack Mr. Oma, but was subdued by the prison guard. During this period, he almost had his hand broken by a baton because of the attack on the prison guard. He was then thrown into a solitary confinement cell. "Mistress, please reform in prison and don't cause trouble. After you come out..." Ah Yin was still talking on the other side of the glass. But Tang San thought of the humiliation he had suffered in recent days, his eyes flashed with hatred, and he said in a hateful voice: "I would rather have broken jade than complete tiles!" "Xiao San!" Ah Yin was horrified when he heard this. When he was about to speak, he was so anxious and angry that a mouthful of blood spurted out, and he fell to the ground unconscious. Tang Hao helped his wife up and stared at Tang San through the glass, his eyes almost bursting with fire. "You, you evil beast! From now on, I, Tang Hao, will only think that I don't have a son like you!" Tang San's expression remained as usual, as Xuantian Baolu recorded: Mount Tai collapsed in front of him but his appearance remained unchanged, and the Yellow River reached its top without being surprised! A true master of hidden weapons always has a calm mind! Chapter 6 (continued) True ending: The murderer was brought to justice "Pa!" Many years later, with the sound of a gunshot, everyone around him breathed a sigh of relief. Some people sighed: The murderer was finally brought to justice. No one would have thought that for a young man who was imprisoned for murder, his conscientiousness and obedience during the labor camp were all a disguise. What is even more unbelievable is that after he was released from prison, he would wait for an opportunity to poison the prison, resulting in the death of many people. It is reported that the poisoner once uttered arrogant words at the scene, claiming that the prison was a gathering place for degenerates, and that he was doing justice for heaven. The impact of this case was so bad that it shocked the whole country. The task force traveled to many places, and after more than a month, they finally wiped out the criminal gang "Tangmen", and Tang Mou, the mastermind of the prison poisoning case, was arrested and brought to justice. According to reports, in compliance with the death penalty order issued by the Supreme People's Court, the local people's court has executed Tang Mou, a criminal who endangers public security in dangerous ways, releases dangerous substances, and is an intentional murderer in accordance with the law.

Every time I see the three characters Miss Qiu, I am surprised because they sound the same as Miss Qiu. The idea is very powerful, and it has benefited me a lot from changing my account and writing this book.

Please, book friends, can anyone recommend a fanfic to me? I really only found this one that suits my taste. It contains the original novel Huo, a different life, and the important friends have not changed (they don't like transgender), and they don't have a harem randomly. The logic and IQ are all online, and the protagonist is very strong and very enjoyable. Does anyone have similar recommendations for peerless fanfics? 😫 (It's not limited to the starting point, it's okay if the software is not finished)

Your Majesty the Supreme Author returns today to his faithful starting point! 😍