Douluo Dalu: Xiao Xiao's Plan to Remake Her Unrivaled Life

There are a bunch of free chapters about cultivation. I will make some comments, list some things, and finally write a few sentences about the plot. I rush to put it on the shelf and find out why there are no results. The readers don't know what they have read. How can they pay for it?

On the whole, if you don't mind the gender change, I think it can be regarded as Dou Er's best novel. I guess it's pretty good without the plot of changing the marriage, but there are too many early settings that some book lovers may not be able to stand. But it can be seen that the author is also a master of abstract entertainment 😁

There are really few articles about Xiao Xiao as the main character or the first heroine. I finally found another one and I must give it a thumbs up.

After writing and writing, it turned into a training paper, "Soul Ring Matching Instruction Manual", "Power System and Protagonist Cheating Outline". The real plot part has become pitiful.

If you don't read enough, it's easy to get bored with the book. Try to read it as soon as it's updated If you are interested, you can help the author to promote it. There may not be enough Douluo around the author Thank you all, hey.

Author, you wrote the first hundred or so chapters very well, but why do you get more and more crooked in the later chapters, with the perspective focused on people other than the protagonist? Tang San, do those God Kings, the affairs of the God Realm, and the pattern of the continent make sense to the current protagonist? Is it meaningful for a little soul king? We came to see Xiao Xiao, to see Tie Tie, to see Ping Hezhong slap in the face and pretend to be cool, not to see Tang San and the others. The feeling in the next one hundred or so chapters is that I am too weak to do anything. I want to take care of everything until the end, but I can't take care of anything. Not only that, Chuanfengruyu also lacks one of the most important hidden logic in the novel: [Lack of sense of security]. The current protagonist can't do anything and is at risk of death, which makes people feel unhappy and depressed.

The original rhythm and writing style are completely destroyed. It always feels like you are writing an outline now.

There is a huge setting in the front, the protagonist is so naughty, and then there is not even half a chapter in the actual combat, and there is no sense of satisfaction. Star Luo City is supposed to be the climax, but the protagonist can't get up or down. There is no suspense in the game. The hands-on part is only a few sentences. When it comes to the front battlefield, the strength is not enough, and the perspective is given to Munn.

I don't push the plot, I don't write about the daily life, I just pile up the settings and stack a few chapters in a row. If you don't know, you might think you are just cheating. Integrating a bunch of things that are not there, the plot ends up being either briefly touched upon, or the iteration intensity of the version is completely exhausted by God's great hand. The story is not told well, and the setting is too big. I feel that the biggest effect is to eat my coins. I feel that feeding the long chapter about the setting to the AI ​​summary will improve the perception a lot🙂

The Holy Spirit Cult has been strengthened too much. The protagonist improves his own side through operations, while the villain is strengthened without doing anything.