Pick up Parchment at the Beginning and Take Advantage of It

Fei Shuangwen, even though he is weak, he is still humiliated~

There are hints of dragons, although the story told is different. It's a pity that I'm no longer a passionate young man, and I can't take on the role of a protagonist who is against the world but also wants to save something.

It's almost 100,000 words, and the first copy is not over yet. I almost forgot what the main mission is.

The writing is emotionless, like a mentally ill person moaning for no reason.

The main character is so miserable, I feel like more than 99% of the people will die in the first wave of dungeons

I saw that you spent a long time preparing the first copy, but you still relied on upgrades to make a comeback. A waste of expression.

In the dungeon, the male protagonist's family, including relatives, friends and classmates, said that the child killed his parents, and put some false information, and everyone believed it? Do you really think the readers are fools?

A parody of a book, the protagonist's script is almost exactly the same

Look at the character list, there are so many women, how can I read this kind of novel? This kind of novel mainly focuses on the sidelines, there is no plot, no imagination, and only very hungry people can read this kind of novel.

It is undoubtedly the human skin paper in Mysterious Resurrection.

I wrote 100,000 words of the first plot and haven't finished it yet. I spent a lot of time and effort, but by the end I knew what I had read.

The first copy was anticlimactic.

Directly copy the mysterious recovery? Can any insect write an article?

Don't be ambiguous when taking risks, and don't be such a child's play when it comes to real life and death.

The writing is very good, like a children's adventure fairy tale The title of the book is too bad

It made my heart ache and make me feel unhappy. Why did the father of the male protagonist join the government after he became a government official? What kind of moral thing is there? There is no sense of pleasure and grudges. Is this a post-apocalyptic novel?

I seriously doubt that I bought it in the beginning.

14 Year old girl. Too much description. I didn't add it before. After entering, the attitude turned 180 degrees. Rich in emotion. Enter the second paragraph. Just sad for a day. One a day. Sad every day. What the hell

It's so frustrating. For the first dungeon, I have to make a so-called s dungeon. It's totally unreasonable.

I've opened a new book, so I'd better not read it₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

The S-level dungeon matches the S-level, and the writing style is good, but it is not the Chinese mythology system that I like. There is also an emperor in the Odin system who doesn't know which system he is from. The depiction is very good. If you meet someone you like, he can be very popular. I don't think this book has any major poisonous points and it is very well written.

Chapter 57: With so many female supporting characters, is this book a serious book?

It is said that the first three chapters are golden. What the author wrote is a bit messy. The character descriptions are too exaggerated and seem to have no feeling at all. The first three chapters are not written well, and the following chapters are even less interesting. There are no plug-ins, no cheats, and nothing interesting.

Don't make the protagonist so handsome and outstanding that he doesn't have a sense of empathy.

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

No need to watch, the pig's feet are dead in the ending

The author's book in Lian Geng has a really good subject matter, but the writing style may be a bit lacking. For example, at the end of the first chapter, a micro-dissuasion begins. The general direction cannot be changed. It can be changed to "the big box is inconvenient to carry, and the protagonist picked two larger pieces of gold." Although it is a bit abrupt, it is really better than not being able to get all the family property in the first time travel. Reading the reviews of that book, it seemed that the plot fell apart a bit later on... But to be honest, just reading the first chapter, I felt that it would be difficult for you, the author, to reach the 500th chapter without relying on emotions. Forget it, let me review your work and post it here, because I think I won't spend a lot of time reading the paid chapters.

The author's book in Lian Geng has a really good subject matter, but the writing style may be a bit lacking. For example, at the end of the first chapter, a micro-dissuasion begins. The general direction cannot be changed. It can be changed to "the big box is inconvenient to carry, and the protagonist picked two larger pieces of gold." Although it is a bit abrupt, it is really better than not being able to get all the family property in the first time travel. Reading the reviews of that book, it seemed that the plot fell apart a bit later on... To be honest, just reading the first chapter, I felt that it would be difficult for you, the author, to reach the 500th chapter without relying on emotions. Forget it, let me take a look at your work again, and I will post it here, because I don't think I will spend any time reading the paid chapters.