Mysterious Recovery: I Become Stronger by Breathing

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The writing in other aspects is quite good, not as good as the original work. The protagonist behaves more and more like a virgin, and more and more bitch. First, the protagonist is not short of money. But what kind of thing you do, what kind of reward you want, this is what you should do! This is an affirmation of the value of one's work. No one thinks that civil servants do not need to pay wages, right? Secondly, at first, only relatives and friends could be saved, but later on, anyone could be saved. When someone sprays you, you have to back up to save him. In the end, it's up to the author to come up with the original plot. Thirdly, the Holy Mother has already started, and favor cards are being handed out everywhere. It is obvious that others owe the protagonist, but it turns out that the protagonist owes others. It's hard to say whether IQ requires payment. Fourthly, I obviously didn't want to join any forces or ZF units, but in the end I went there awkwardly. Just trying to mess with people? You know it so well, what is your plan? I just don't have my own plan. The result is that every plot of the original work has to be tacked on. ………………………………………… Idealistic Zhongqing is rebellious, too young and too naive. One word to describe it is jian.

This sister, sister, brother and that Sissi can be written to death. It's really uncomfortable to watch. Just have a supernatural incident. The audience doesn't like the protagonist having a family. If the killing is more decisive, the performance of this book will take off.

It's a bit poisonous, I might as well write it as an orphan.

Write less family plots. The protagonist's family has skins and safety guarantees. Just develop more protagonist plots. It's not about writing group portraits. You, the protagonist's sister, is more like the protagonist than the protagonist. Now you are starting to pretend to be a pushover.

The protagonist is very powerful, but I would not accept the scene where his sister presses her butt against his face and farts.

To be honest, it doesn't matter if you're too hung up or not. The main issue is with the character setting. Brother, bringing up a family is a taboo for novice writers, let alone a mysterious recovery in a world where ordinary people can't survive. If you want to bring up a family, just forget about it and don't give so much attention to it, okay? Just explain it briefly and then set it up immediately. You don't want them to come into contact with ghosts. That's enough. The protagonist's family group will be cut off from him immediately. Just leave the means of protection silently. There are so many things.

Brothers, I read Chapter 4. It's so toxic that I can't stand it anymore. If it's too troublesome later, please give me a reply and tell me where to start. The previous chapter is really toxic.

The best way to resuscitate is to have a gold finger that can destroy the magic or collect the magic. After all, the ghosts in the recovery are immortal and immortal, and some are still unsolved. To be honest, the survival of the resurrected human beings depends entirely on the author's need to promote the plot. Smaller dead towns, larger dead cities, and larger ones like Goodfellas wander around the world and die wherever they go. When I saw the protagonist's two ghosts, they died in several cities, and the ones in the background were not counted. Here, even if they are born in a nest like the queen ant, it is not enough to die quickly. The key is whether the ghosts will die.

A bit like a virgin, I don't want to have a female protagonist

It's well written, but it's just that an Easterner fell into Western mythology and can't get out.

It was good to hold on at the beginning, but then I was slapped in the face, so I took the risk. Let's just say it's unreasonable and it was forced by the author.

Overall, it's okay, but the dialogue and some of the actions that lower your intelligence give you an invincible cheat and you still flinch. What's more, the most intolerable thing is that you can crush it, but you have to talk a lot before taking action. Did you learn the crooked-mouthed Dragon King Long Ao Tianwen from 20 years ago? Did the protagonist shake his m? Do you have to be ridiculed by others before you fight?

What I wrote earlier is not appealing

The Hidden Sage is the only sexual activation of the Sage. It has nothing to do with the Perfect One. How can the Hidden Sage extract the Perfect One? Can the author read the original work of Mystery and find out more about it?

In the world of Lord of Mysteries, the author's writing is a bit poor. Lord of Mysteries has been completed, and I have forgotten almost all the details at the beginning. Old Nick has almost forgotten about the perfect person. The author didn't say a word. Do we still need to read the original work again?

The character of this protagonist is not the slightest bit worse than that of the protagonist in the original work. He has no characteristics at all, and the writing is messy. The protagonist in the original work joins the headquarters to solve the problem of the resurgence of evil ghosts, and he will also try his best to get information, props, conditions, etc. That are beneficial to him to solve strange events. This protagonist is like a follower, and he has lost his golden finger in vain. The protagonist in the original work is decisive without this golden finger.

The story about Wu Luo's supporting role in the first ten chapters is really encouraging. Fortunately, I am better at poison resistance, and the writing in the following chapters is quite good. I suggest the author delete that part directly, otherwise it will lose a lot of readers.

What about the ghost realm of the Knocker? A few ordinary people dressing up casually?

The original work split Yang Jian, but you split Odin, right?

I worship you, I have also written a novel Mysterious Resurrection: The Sunken World. I hope it will also have good results.

Joining the headquarters in the early stage is a trap. There is no hope of using you until you die. I don't understand why I joined.

Yes, the plot and characterization are quite good. I originally thought that my family would be a drag, but it turned around later, which is great. The only problem is probably a loophole after the revision, causing the evolution values ​​to always be inconsistent. It is recommended that the author make a record and not let this loophole affect the good writing. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It feels like the closer you get to becoming a god, the less beautiful it becomes and it's not interesting.

Mysterious and mysterious fans can actually control it well! Very exciting!

Author, can you write the alienation parts and related skills directly together? It is easy to make mistakes if you write them separately, and the reading experience is quite poor.

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Excluding the beginning, the writing in the early stage is very nice, but in the later stage, starting from becoming a god, it is very loose.