840 Million Particles Awaken, I Push Across the Sky

The male protagonist, Jiang Yifei, who is in the same realm and in the same realm, vomits blood. The idol's prison-suppressing power is half-step invincible. If he beats the humane method, it is not an exaggeration to kill him with one finger. Don't overpower his combat power. At least Jiang Yifei, a little trash in the same realm, is not worthy of letting both of them shed a drop of blood.

I don't understand why you want to develop so many techniques or functions. The Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Power can make you invincible in the world. As long as you don't provoke the high-end prehistoric world, the supreme prehistoric world, the mythical prehistoric world and the Dragon Talisman world, it can be said that the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Power can already make you invincible in the world. There is no need for any wisdom gates. After the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Power cultivates the body of the Lord, your innate understanding and physical origin will be improved, and it will be infinitely improved. Yang Qi is the best example. Yang Qi can be said to be a genius, but he has not yet reached the level of an invincible monster. That is, after cultivating the body of a master, he becomes directly invincible in terms of talent and understanding. The body of a master includes the body, the brain, and the master. Eyes, these are all invincible talents. The more you practice the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Strength, the more invincible you become. So you only need to practice the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Strength. There is no need to practice any secret realm method. Can the secret realm method compare with the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Strength? Even the method created by Emperor Huangtian when he was worshiping the Dao could not compare with the prison-suppressing power of the divine elephant created by the supreme master, so the divine elephant was said to be invincible. I don't understand what you are doing. You have the power of the divine elephant to suppress the prison, but you don't practice the Holy King Qigong system, but practice some secret realm method. You are not picking up sesame seeds and throwing watermelons. You are stupid or stupid. Furthermore, the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Power can simulate any method that does not exceed the Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Power. Even the cultivation system can also be simulated, so I don't understand the meaning of practicing the secret realm method. And the Divine Elephant's Prison-Suppressing Power in your book has also been weakened. One giant elephant particle is equivalent to one hundred thousand kilograms, and the second one is stronger than the first, and so on. So this is the scary thing about the Divine Elephant's Prison-Suppressing Power, and it is also the reason why the Divine Elephant's Prison-Suppressing Power consumes resources. So I suggest the author revise it before writing a few chapters, otherwise the book will be unpopular. I recommend the author to read the book "Heavens, Starting from the Divine Elephant's Prison-Suppressing Power" next door. The Divine Elephant's Prison-Suppressing Power written in this book is really good, and people understand it clearly. I have said that I disdain to practice the secret realm method, make the gods invincible, and suppress the heavens. So the author hopes that you will listen to the advice. The subject matter of this book is very good, but there is a problem with what you wrote. There are many people in the comment area who have similar ideas to me. If you don't change, your book will definitely be ruined.

I'm wondering why you want the Demon Prison Xuantai? Even the Yuanshi Daluo in Jiangnan was kicked to death in front of the divine elephant. The divine elephant is a truly all-powerful and omnipotent technique that can improve countless times in all aspects, including talent. To put it more bluntly, the Demon Prison Xuantai is similar to a camera and AI, allowing you to restore Apart from the skills you see, let me put it bluntly, there is no value in practice. There is a qualitative difference between Zhaizhu's system and Shenji's system. One is an incomplete practice system, and the other is an all-round essential improvement, so neither the skills nor the system for the sake of skills have this value.

It's so stupid that you have to make someone shit on your head before you fight back.

I no longer expect the writing of Zhe Tian Fan to be so good. I just ask the protagonist not to continue to kneel down and lick them after forming a deadly feud with the Holy Land of the Ancient Family. Either downplay the bad side of these forces and don't make the relationship too tense! Don't be insulted, chased, or attacked by the Jidao Emperor's soldiers, only to have to kneel and lick them later, or even lift them up high and put them down gently when they are already fighting to the death. It's really frustrating, 90% of Zhetian fan fiction is like this. I just want to write a normal protagonist who can repay kindness and revenge. I really begged him on my knees. 😭😭😭

It appears to be a dual system, but it is actually a systematic article. There is also a group of fairy dust causing trouble around the Sixth Secret Realm. The plot is really unbearable. I don't know why I am rushing to write the Sixth Secret Realm. Is it cool that the two protagonists of the Secret Realm open the Sixth Secret Realm? ?

This is your eighth book. What supports you to continue writing? Is it love? 😏

Stop writing a bunch of random things

Weird names are hard to pronounce and listen to!

What is Xinhuo? The writing is not clear. I have a new setting and it is not clear. It gives me a headache to read.

The author's writing style is okay if he doesn't write about girls. But when it comes to writing about girls, it's really hard to describe. It doesn't feel like it was written by one person.

I feel like you just wrote "Gate" Gate of Potential, Gate of Soul, Gate of Wisdom, Gate of Power, Gate of Life You have to rely hard on the exercises and also forcefully suppress them. Reading is very distorted.

There are many people who have practiced the secret realm method after cultivating the divine elephant. In front of the divine elephant, the Immortal Emperor is the difference between an emperor and a beggar.

Never write that Gai Jiuyou can open the sixth secret realm. The sixth secret realm itself is difficult. Shi Hao only opened it in the end under all kinds of difficulties. Gai Jiuyou is a genius, but he is definitely not as good as a person who has attained enlightenment. After all, he has not succeeded in attaining enlightenment. Only anyone in Zhetianli can attain enlightenment. You are indispensable for success. Gai Jiuyou is at the same level as Chuan Ying Ning Fei at most. And if so many people know about the sixth secret realm, there will definitely be old immortals who can't live anymore and will come to the protagonist. Gai Jiuyou can't stop him. Who wouldn't? Afraid of death, especially the forbidden area of ​​life. The forbidden area is not without concern for the world. The road to becoming an immortal is about to begin. For such a big thing, if the Supremes think that the Sixth Secret Realm will bring them one step closer, not to mention extending their life span is enough to make their Dao thoughts come out. , If this is not handled well, it will be very ugly later, and the protagonist does not need to have so many magical powers to open the door, just a divine elephant can push it horizontally. If it were a complete divine elephant, its expressiveness would be stronger than that of the priest. It looks very good at the moment, don't write it down.

A lot of settings are not interesting. Pig's feet suddenly became stronger without any explanation

You can tell the style by looking at the name of the protagonist. Let's name the protagonist who is not fashionable or mainstream these days.

Damn it, do you really think I haven't seen "Zhe Tian Treating People as Fools"? Is there any ruthless weapon in Ji Ziyue's body? None of the chapters are well written, the author treats the readers as fools

The content is too complicated for a mere mortal like me to understand.

I was blowing the Holy King, Divine Elephant and Prison Suppressing Power every day, so I ran to read the original text. The Supreme Lord created the King of Divine Elephants. However, the book said that the King of Divine Elephants was slightly stronger than the Lord. The logic doesn't make sense. According to my understanding, isn't the King of Divine Elephants the Dharma-sourced spirit that gave birth to the Divine Elephant's Prison Suppressing Power? And the Wu Wu Level is similar to what was described in the original text, right? So if you have to step on other IPs, it will make you look noble. Please come up with the original text and welcome it to the idiot fans.

In fact, there is no need to kill the protagonist's master, but to learn the art of saving gods, wouldn't it be better to let the ruthless people become slaves?

I think the protagonist is too kind to those outsiders, such as the Empress, Ye Fan, wait for you. Look, the Empress is not helpful to the protagonist at all in the beginning. She has to compete for resources and items for everything. Later, the protagonist helps her with everything. It is simply unreasonable. It is at least reasonable to write a novel and enjoyable article. I feel that the protagonist is a great saint.

I used too many settings from different masters, and as a result, there were problems with the integration. It is safer for fan works to only use the setting of one great god, make some magical changes, and focus on the plot.

In fact, I should have invested in it in the first place. In this case, I could get the Street King Badge faster.

If you want to find faults, then there are no faults in this book? It's already very good to write like this, the writing style is also good, the creativity is also good, and there is nothing poisonous about it.

After raising it for a while, I came back and took a look. Well, as expected, why are the levels different? There are some that are finished like Fishing in the Heavens, but more are cut off halfway.