A Dream Journey Beginning in Naruto

Forced into the plot, I can't stand it. I have to join in the night of genocide. What's the point? Why should I help the Uchiha in the starting route of civilians? I'm not familiar with it, so I can't stand it. 🙂

I feel like the author has never watched Naruto, the daily writing is nonsense, and the genin knows Rasengan? Are you also from the Uzumaki clan? If you know the method, you can learn it. What else is it called Muji Ninjutsu?

The setting is novel, but you shouldn't choose a world that is too complicated. Experience is only useful for the same level. Just like Naruto, you don't have the strength to crush him. In the later stage, you can only be pinned to the ground and listen to his words to escape. In the end, it is estimated that it will still rely on various modifications and transplants! In a word, it was okay in the early stage, but I don't have much to look forward to in the later stage!

Calling it a dream, it feels like the Sims have changed their names...

Has the author made a clear analysis of the characters of the original characters? ? ? The age group is not taken into consideration, and the dialogue between the characters is the same as meeting an acquaintance in the park and having a casual chat. You can't bring it in at all.        ："""xx"？ No matter how you look at it, it violates the law. Each character has no distinctive speaking personality and speaks in exactly the same way. And there are no mood swings. Kai: "There are ANBU nearby, no one dares to cause trouble." I'm so sick. Can Kai's character really speak? And Sakura said to Ino: "Ino, you are so unladylike." Oh my God, you can break up as much as you want Kakashi asked Naruto: How are you doing recently? Naruto said: It's okay. Kakashi replied: That's good! Look what you wrote

It would be better if dreams directly inherit memories. When writing about children who travel through time, it is most taboo to play house with children.

When I saw Chapter 7, it was a bit too much nonsense. From the country of rain to the sixth country in the ninja world, all the ninjas, the three armies of the sea, land and air, and the head of state system, what is this? Ninjas from all over the world have not been explained where the resources come from, but they can be universalized inexplicably. What is the use of the sea, land, air and navy? They are still exploring new roads. This is a planet that has been invaded by aliens, and there is a new continent of wool, let alone an era of war... The head of state is even more outrageous. The five major countries and various small countries will work together to kill you the moment you cancel the daimyo system. I really think Hanzo is so awesome. He doesn't even need ninjas, and the economic and material blockade can kill you. After reading it, I suddenly found it boring. It's all the same work. What's the difference between the simulator and reality? The history of Konoha is only more than 60 years. Why write so many simulations?

You have been writing books like this over and over again, so let me give you something new As for Konoha, Hinata was kidnapped when she was 3 years old, Sasuke was exterminated when she was 7 years old, and Naruto was 12 years old. The plot begins. Kumo Gakure dares to come and rob Miss Hinata, and forces Hinata to death afterwards. He is so courageous that he did not dare to invade after five years of genocide. Konoha is still safe. What is Konoha's strength? Do you need to speculate maliciously? Uchiha Shisui I personally think that Shisui has more contact with Danzo, but his heart is more towards the clan, and in the end Afterwards, he couldn't see the solution to the conflict between the tribe and the village. He was attacked by the trusted Danzo and took away one of his eyes. He committed suicide in despair Uchiha Itachi should obviously trust the third generation, and the third generation kept showing goodwill. As a result, this bastard did not trust the family and the third generation. Generation, I wrote to Danzo, who destroyed his family and relied on the third generation to save Sasuke. The fact is that after Danzo relied on Itachi to destroy the Uchiha, he was beaten by the third generation until Tsunade succeeded to the throne for three years before he climbed out. Is this enough to write, does he really have such a good impression of Itachi?

What is the use of genin practicing Rasengan? You can't throw it out, and it's worse than a kunai in your hand. At least it can be thrown out.

Well, the simulator type just feels a bit, how should I say, a bit taken for granted. . .