A Dream Journey Beginning in Naruto

This is such a forced plot twist! Why did they have to get involved in the massacre of the Uchiha clan? What's the point? Why should someone starting as a commoner help the Uchiha? They don't even know them, so why force it? I can't take it anymore! 🙂

I feel like the author hasn't watched Naruto at all. The slice-of-life scenes are ridiculously absurd, and a genin already knows the Rasengan? Are you from the Uzumaki clan? If you can learn that just by knowing the method, what's the point of calling it a no-seal ninjutsu?

The premise is novel, but the world of cheaters shouldn't have been chosen. Experience is only useful for those of the same level. Just like Naruto, if you don't have overwhelming strength, you'll only be pinned down and listen to his talk-no-jutsu later on. Ultimately, it will probably still rely on various modifications and transplants! In short, it's okay in the early stages, but there's not much to look forward to in the later stages!

It's called a dream, but it feels like The Sims with a different name...

Did the author clearly analyze the characters' personalities in the original work? Their ages weren't considered either; the dialogue is like a casual, perfunctory chat with an acquaintance in the park. It's impossible to immerse myself in the story. For example, in the book, Naruto says things like, "It's okay, we're classmates," and "The one who's tired is XX, I'm just a gofer."

Dreams can simply inherit memories directly. The biggest taboo in writing about time-traveling children is playing house with kids.

Having read up to Chapter Seven, I found it to be a bit too far-fetched. Starting from the Land of Rain and becoming the Sixth Ninja Country, with a population of ninjas, a three-army system (land, sea, and air), and a head of state system, what kind of story is this?

You guys always write the same old stuff, so let me give you something fresh. In Konoha, Hinata was kidnapped at age 3, Sasuke's clan was wiped out at age 7, and the story began when Naruto was 12. The Cloud Village dared to kidnap the Hyuga princess, and afterwards, they emboldened Hizashi to death.

What's the point of a genin practicing Rasengan? You can't even throw it; holding it in your hand is no better than using a kunai. At least it can still be thrown out.

Um, it's an emulator type, but it feels a bit... How should I put it, a bit like taking things for granted...