Back Under the Sun

This style is more like an anime than a novel. Why does the protagonist believe that there is a pure land in such an environment just because the protagonist has traveled through time? If this is the case, then you should know that looking for a pure land on such a planet is not as good as looking for a colonizable planet.

The writing is okay, but the writing is a bit rough, and some details are not well written. For example, the protagonist's car, the base car, the protagonist's plug-in in this article, and the most important thing, what the car looks like, are basically not described in the article. It is the track. Well, it's still wheels, how tall and wide it is, and it carries so many tons of cargo at the beginning, how it was brought, where the cargo box is, and the protagonist's own cockpit, which specific location, where the employees live, and where they eat. Basically, they describe where the protagonist is, but the protagonist and his group are in the car. Everything about eating, drinking, sleeping, sleeping, etc. Is mentioned in one stroke. There is also the power source of the car, whether it is electricity or oil. The protagonist has not done anything about it. Also, such a big car cannot pass through mountainous areas. It is all flat roads. These details in life are not mentioned. It is very important for the development of farming. Flow is a big taboo, because the original point of view is that the protagonist develops himself step by step. He doesn't even have an idea of what the protagonist's most important tool is. If the protagonist improves the tools in his hand, the readers will have no idea, because the readers only know what it was like before they know what has been improved.

Why do you want to find a pure land? Compared with finding a pure land, it is easier to create your own pure land. Just build a dungeon, or go to space

If the protagonist wants to find a pure land, there are only two places. One is hundreds of meters underground and there is no nuclear radiation. The other way is to go to outer space and colonize the moon or Mars.

Without a group of teammates you can trust, how can you avoid being robbed?

In the end of the world, a small, semi-enclosed space with limited food and water sources. In this case, I generally won't let anyone get in my car, especially men. As long as people are under a lot of stress and get hurt, they will have psychological problems. People in the apocalypse are all mentally ill, with all kinds of PTSD... Who dares to live with strangers is really too long to live.

When I was a child, I didn't speak Mandarin well. During a Mandarin dictation test, I sat in the front row and listened intently to the teacher's pronunciation. The teacher read: "suspect" I immediately wrote "salty rice" in my notebook. The teacher accidentally glanced at my paper, but he couldn't bear to embarrass me, so he raised his voice: "Suspect!" I hesitated for a second, seemed to have some understanding, and picked up the pen to change "salted rice" to "salted fish rice." The teacher was a little dizzy after taking another look. He deliberately raised his voice and said: "The suspect of the prisoner" I thought it made sense, so I added the words "salted fish rice with salt". The teacher couldn't help it anymore and looked at me with a blank look: "I said there is a suspect'. I was a little nervous at the time, so I slowly wrote down "Yuyu flavored salted fish rice" with trembling handwriting. The teacher had no choice but to walk up to me, press my shoulder, and said: "He is the kind of suspect who has committed a heinous crime and is going to die." My brain was full of confusion and I timidly erased what I had written before, and then changed it to "Salted Fish Rice with a Big Mouth" Finally, the ambulance came, and the whole class carefully carried the teacher into the car...

The writing is very rough, and if you don't use the cheats, you just don't upgrade the base vehicle, and it wanders around. Pig's Feet has always said that he aims for the Pure Land, but he just wanders around anyway. The plot advancement is very mechanized, and there are many pits dug at the beginning. Not attractive to look at.

Looking at the introduction, without the sun, the entire planet will enter a dark ice age, and the entire planet will be frozen. What other solution is there except changing planets?

The protagonist's actions are not rigorous, and he is not careful enough where he should be cautious. In general, he wastes a lot of words to describe it. This will make the article read awkwardly, and it often feels like a piece of plot is missing somewhere.