Final Priesthood

The early chapters are full of dry stuff, and the plots that advance quickly are very interesting to read. What the hell are you writing now? A plot only lasts for 7-8 chapters. After reading one chapter, it feels like you have read it, but it feels like you have not read anything. After reading five chapters, it feels even more obvious. If you have a subscription, it starts to become a waste of money, right?

My impression of the fight between God and the protagonist is: Two big guys, I shout out the name of the moves of the second one and punch them, and you shout out and hit a palm, it's a turn-based fight, Then the holographic projection behind them is full of firepower, I don't have to write about the fighting scenes in my evaluation. . The routine is always the same, and the protagonist is always blowing up One chapter has eighteen pages in my font size, seven to eight pages ahead (It's really difficult)

Add more refinement! !

The fundamental logic of online novels is to satisfy certain human desires. Go away perfectly achieves this step in Jidao Tianmo, which is to satisfy the reader's destructive desire to break through all restraints and shackles. This realization is pure and almost unadulterated by any other desires, so it is extremely successful during the period of Jidao Tianmo. But, for this reason, go away. In the later works, because you want to incorporate new things, this pure destructive desire loses its purity. Just like the concentration of high-purity addictive substances is reduced, old readers will be surprised if they like it. The good thing about this book so far is that the author doesn't know how to write anything else, so he can grasp the essence and insist on pure destruction without involving other desires.

Ah😦I was quite interested after reading the introduction and the first few chapters. I just ordered it a few days ago when I read the reviews and said that the book fell apart and I was speechless...

Want to follow the eunuch style? ? ? ? ?

For example, this book is like a machine, the characters are the gears, and the plot and worldview are the transmission belts. At first glance, the machine is okay, but when you look closely, problems emerge. The gears do not fit together, some gears are not well made, and some transmission belts are too tight, and some are loose. You can say that it has so many problems, but this machine can still move. To be honest, just read it as a mindless and cool article. If you want to pursue a little depth, forget it.

I have been following up since the beginning of the book, and I have been diligent in updating in the early stage. The plot is relatively slow, and there are only mindless actions. Later, book friends all reported that it should be slower and the plot should be followed up. Can't the plot and additional updates be done at the same time? I have only had about 30 books after more than a month, which is not enough to read. I took many vacations and owed a lot of updates. Can this book be updated normally? As a reader, can we still have something to look forward to? ! A little sad 😞

Wow, I wanted to check out if there are other books by the author, but I didn't expect this to be the first one! The first book made me, an old bookworm, chase it. It's awesome.

The writing is quite good, it doesn't look like a new author

Or will you break the chapter 🤫

Support me, Oh. To be honest, it's a bit delayed, and the plot of Rat Man is not over yet. Although it inserted the story of just connecting to the extraordinary and revealed some secrets, it still felt a bit dragging. It seems a bit incoherent and vague. Better come on.

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This book can be regarded as a typical case of starting high and going low in 2023. I haven't read more than 40 chapters in more than two months? It just highlights a person who doesn't listen to readers' suggestions, asks for leave without any reason, and doesn't explain his poor condition. He updates every three times and is still the same as before. I have seen with my own eyes that the monthly ticket for this book has gone from more than 10,000 to now 2,000. It's a pity.

Big poisons are not as constant as little poisons (the hero saves the beauty in the alley on a rainy night, and the coach card is cleared after being signed and said to be a coincidence). It feels like it is an embarrassing plot from ancient times. The writing is smooth and the theme setting is attractive. It is very interesting to watch, but sometimes it really feels like the author is deliberately disgusting.

Ever since the New Blood Trial, I have been particularly weak. Every time I fight, passers-by look down on the protagonist. The protagonist exerts his strength, the opponent explodes, and then the protagonist explodes and crushes the passers-by. The passers-by are crazy and shocked. The same routine is used back and forth. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, every time the passers-by look down on the protagonist 😰

I clicked here from the online article Twelve Heavenly Kings. Can this crappy book still be called Twelve Heavenly Kings?

Fortunately, I caught up to Chapter 200 and found that the writing was no longer good. I felt that the plot was about to collapse, so I stopped following it, hahaha. It's like being a eunuch. I read the new book and it's not that good either.

After reading Chapter 67, I will definitely vomit these words out of my mouth. Trouble 1: The keyword "absolute concentration". At the beginning of Chapter 2, the protagonist used "absolute concentration" to answer questions. The alarm clock rang and the protagonist woke up. In Chapter 67, the cell phone rang and the protagonist did not hear it (here in Chapter 66, it was explained that the sister might call) Trouble 2: Keywords "White Mountain Culture" and "Sister", the earliest mention of "White Mountain Culture" was the discovery site that the sister told the protagonist, and then someone from the sister's archaeological team died in the site (it is doubtful whether the protagonist knew the dead person), and then the club and the mouse are branches of the keyword "White Mountain Culture", but when knowing this, the protagonist did not associate it with his sister. When I convert it to the earth, it is equivalent to my family members being in the archaeological team. The archaeological team discovered the ruins of "Shaoshan Culture" and "Sanxingdui Culture", and then you encountered clubs and events related to the culture... And the protagonist didn't notice at all... It's related to his relatives, brother Slot 3: Keyword "career", how would normal people try to activate more careers after having a system? The answer is self-evident. Let's start with things around us: the chef who cooks (he keeps saying that the protagonist's father cooks... I don't realize it at all), and the doctor who treats diseases (my grandpa is always in the hospital...). I really don't understand why I didn't think about it after activating the fighter profession, especially after enjoying the massage and medicinal bath, and the appetite was so big, and I didn't expect to take food supplements (is the protagonist really a time traveler?) There are still a few shortcomings that I will continue to sort out after get off work. ps: With the author's permission

It's strange why so many people criticize the protagonist for being so toxic and unreasonable. The protagonist is not a perfect person. The life experience shown now is what young people have. The improvement of strength makes people public, intelligence makes them rational, conflicts and wrong behaviors, which well shape a normal young man who is growing up rapidly. It is normal for people to make mistakes and fall ill. What the author wants to portray is the transformation of an ordinary person who gets a golden finger. At the beginning, he is immature and making mistakes is normal. If he has these experiences in the later period, he grows up and still makes brainless mistakes, which is really poisonous.

I'm really convinced. The Ultimate Star Card Master and the Ultimate Priest that I watched recently were both eunuchs. What's the situation? The same goes for Samsara Paradise that I watched last year. They were all eunuchs. It's so uncomfortable 😆😆😆

The protagonist has such talent, how could Coach Qin dare to say such big words? The first few chapters have been highlighting the protagonist's extraordinary talent, making Lin Zhiqin tremble with shock every day. Why does it seem that the talent currently displayed is not very powerful? ? Isn't such a good seedling worthy of being cultivated by the owner of the sect? It's only been a few days, from a sick boy to a professional, with this potential and understanding... I'm a little confused. Since the protagonist's talent is so high, he should quickly obtain resources, such as Huang Xiong. The protagonist was covered by the female captain for rating. However, the female captain's actions have not been seen yet. Shouldn't the female captain quickly recruit and apply for resource training? After you were shocked, you patted your butt and left. How long will it take to recruit someone? If you don't recruit him, why are you covering up his talent? And Coach Lin is shocked every day, and then he doesn't reveal Lu Yuan's talents, and the resources provided to Lu Yuan are limited. Lu Yuan learned the Linghe Fist on his own. You are recommending Lu Yuan to your teacher now, so why can't your teacher look down on him? Do you have to wait until Lu Yuan's combat power far exceeds yours before recommending it to your teacher, and then the teacher can forgive you? Anyway, it's just procrastination, letting the protagonist develop step by step, and then letting the plot unfold in more detail?

Seriously, can you authors who have cut the works have some conscience? Just cut the works and finish them. If you don't click the completion button, you won't even be able to make up the number of fully ordered works. No data can help.

Has the author not realized his problem yet? Do you think everyone is joking when they say they won't vote monthly?

Such a good book treats readers like this, it is really unworthy of a king.

After browsing the bookshelf, he came back and cursed: dead eunuch

Due to other matters, the author can only update once a day. This does not mean that he will not update before the beginning of the year. Dear book friends, please read clearly. Don't say that you won't update anymore, so other book friends may misunderstand. Thank you for your support to Goudan! Bang bang bang (kowtow)

What is very funny is that the protagonist always says that precious skill points should not be wasted on skills that can be improved through practice, but he always adds points to small skills. After adding this skill, it will be useless in subsequent plots, such as "Thousand Crows Ode to the Moon" and "Grandmaster Dharma". However, the obvious developmental skill "Flash of Inspiration" has never been clicked.