Start Hanging up After Becoming a Disciple of Li Mochou

How can I throw it now if I cut it off so well?

It's good that the emotional scenes are written more delicately, which can make people feel the taboo emotions better, but the shortcoming is the same. The emotions are too complicated, and the mind is constantly thinking about big things. The second bad thing is the benevolence of women. The Quanzhen Sect comes to trouble the protagonist. It is understandable that you say you will not kill the Quanzhen Sect people because of your previous kindness, but you must at least cut off the limbs of those people, or chop off one or two limbs. Otherwise, the people who come to trouble you can leave if they want. So how are you different from trash? What's the use of practicing such high martial arts? A master should act like a master, not like a loser!

The system of this book is based on the game "The Legend of Heroes" as a cheat. I think 🤔 the function of the cheat and the background of martial arts are very similar to the concept of the game. It's a bit like the author finished the game and started creating as soon as his mind got excited.🥱

I suggest the author read the original work of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"! With the protagonist's background, let alone studying under Li Mochou, if the protagonist is not beaten to death on the spot, the author will bless him. Li Mochou had already gone to extremes after Lu Zhanyuan's death. Anyone with the surname Lu, He or Wu, even if the name contained the word "Yuan Jun", would either have a Five Poison Divine Palm or an Ice Soul Silver Needle. In the original work, it wasn't that Li Mochou didn't want to kill Cheng Ying and Lu Wushuang. First, the handkerchief delayed it for a while, and second, Yang Guo hugged Li Mochou at that time, causing Li Mochou to become weak. Shuangdiao and Guo Jing Huang Rong seized the opportunity, but finally gave Cheng Ying an ice soul silver needle to catch Lu Wushuang before retreating. Later, they met Wu Santong's family and Master Yideng, but they were defeated by Nan Di's methods. Li Mochou decided to spare Lu Wushuang's life in order to get the Jade Girl's Heart Sutra, but she still broke one of Lu Wushuang's legs.

There is no problem with Li Mochou being the heroine, but there is a problem with the setting that the protagonist is Lu Zhanyuan's son. Even if I didn't take the role, I must have been intimate with him before, and the son took over... I can only say that it is a bit awesome, and the Minotaur is awesome, with the beauty of a Hong Kong comic... Speaking of the author, when you came up with this setting, didn't you feel awkward?

Why do we just flirt with each other but not marry like in the original novel? At that time, it was normal to have three wives and four concubines. I agree with what is said in the comment section, Mochou is proud, then give her the position of a lady. The other little dragon girls, Cheng Yinghong and Lingbo, have all been arranged, otherwise they will only flirt with each other but not marry. The setting of the fiancée is so abrupt, don't be a slut.

I will watch the heroine Li Mochou. I'm watching and raising the heroine Li Mochou when the character column appears. I remember there was a novel written: Lu Zhanyuan was injured and fell into a coma, but was rescued by Li Mochou, who was fifteen years old and had just emerged from the ancient tomb. Unable to resist, Lu Zhanyuan accepted careful treatment from the cute and handsome girl Li Mochou. Before and during the treatment, Lu Zhanyuan's gentlemanly demeanor in his gestures, words, and appearance impressed Li Mochou, a young girl who had just emerged from the ancient tomb and was full of longing for love. Seeing Li Mochou's clumsy but attentive appearance, Lu Zhanyuan was also moved, but he later regretted it. Lu Zhanyuan found that he couldn't beat her, and this little girl could knock him to the ground with just a slap. Li Mochou was very conservative and wouldn't even hold hands. She always slapped him and restricted his freedom. Sister-in-law Liang was very demanding and would always tell him that he was wrong. If he didn't comply, she would slap her. Later, the injuries became more and more serious, and Lu Zhanyuan wanted to escape from this devil all the time, for fear of dying in her hands.

The most charming Huang Rong, and , the most beautiful Li Mochou

I thought it was pure love, but it turned out to be a stallion🐴

Don't worry, don't worry, you have no friends in the future

Damn, I can bear it. The protagonist must have been reincarnated in his previous life. He can bear this too.

No, the heroine Li Mochou, what do you think, you marry a person who is the same age as your mother, who is also the heroine, you are really nb

Let's put it this way. The biggest difference between modern people and ancient people is that modern people are neither Riddlers nor Silencers If there is a misunderstanding, it must be made clear So the protagonist is a fool

I haven't read the single heroine series either. In fact, I haven't subscribed to the last few chapters. I scroll through the comments section every day just to see if it has a single heroine or a harem. The key is that in the beginning it was written that there were multiple female leads, but later it was told that I wanted only one. Can you please give me a quick word, if it is a single female protagonist, I will delete the book and leave as soon as possible, so that we don't waste any time!

Has the author considered age? ? ? Even if Li Mochou fell in love with Lu Zhanyuan at the age of fifteen, when she went to kill all the Lu family, she would be at least 26,,,,,, How old is the pig's foot at this time? ? ? When the pig's trotter is 18, Li is almost 40,,,,,, when the pig's trotter is established, Li will be 50,,,,,,, Can you not play so perverted? Can the taste be more normal? ? ? ?

Let me give you some thoughts. The biggest problem with harem is that it will destroy the female characters who have worked so hard to portray. In a vivid character, independence is a very important part. If a character must rely on another person to express himself, then its brilliance can only serve as a wedding dress for others. The absolute protagonist of The Deer and the Cauldron is only Xiaobao, but in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, Xiao Longnu can be singled out and said that she is equally equal to Yang Guo. The same goes for Maomao in Sanli of Sword. His decision to sell his flesh for Sedum was entirely out of his own decision and not because Sedum asked him to do it. This character can easily stand up after he has his own independent thinking. This is the disadvantage of the harem. Taking away the independence of a female character will take away her personality charm. What people like is a free soul rather than a restrained puppet.

Are you going to kill all the people in your family and fall in love? Is the author from a female channel?

At first glance, it looks like martial arts, but upon closer inspection, it looks like fantasy, then it looks like a harem, and it turns out to be Little Yellow Book

The three views are inconsistent, and the protagonist kills the Mongolian celestial being. Wang Chongyang made great achievements in the Central Plains, because the gods killed mortals, beheaded the Mongolian leader, and demolished the pig's feet across the river and demolished the bridge. I don't have any sense of the overall situation. I wish China would perish.

I have been working hard these past few days. To be honest, the first and middle stages of the story were pretty good. However, starting from Xiangyang City, the writing fell apart a bit. Especially when Wang Chongyang used the magic whip to fight the protagonist, it was particularly unreasonable. Now that the protagonist is starting over from the beginning, there are some flaws in many places. It is a bit tricky to copy the previous chapters and make slight changes to create a new chapter. It feels like it's difficult to bring the entire novel to life here. The novel itself has reached a stage of life and death. I hope the author can make a breakthrough. Don't be a eunuch.

Make a good modern person think like an ancient person

The writing is messy and makes no sense. The writing style is not good, the logic is not smooth, and it is forced to be self-consistent. When writing about martial arts, if you practice a bunch of things systematically, you will still be useless in a few years. Writing about emotions, since I love Li Mochou so much, it seems hypocritical to write about loving each other. There are countless women in the world, are you willing to come over? Waste of time

Mo Chou in the Heart

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

I think that if a true seeker really has extraordinary power, then the person who has the power will never be confused by the complicated rules. Like in this book, a modern person travels to the ancient world and falls in love with his master, who is not related by blood. This is a problem for modern ordinary people, but it is not a problem at all. But the protagonist lives a frustrated, cowardly, cautious life, and really doesn't look like a modern person. Not to mention the protagonist is a man with power. And it is gradually moving towards cultivating immortals. Look at the people in the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, who will be able to overcome the restrictions of ordinary rules. If you like it, you will like it, and if you love it, you will love it. Don't say that my views are shocking, just say that it is incest to have sex with the mythical Nuwa and Fuxi. There are a lot of indulgent gods in Greek classical mythology. Of course, it does not mean that you can do whatever you want with power, but you have the power. If you can control your own destiny, why should you take things so seriously that will obviously hinder you?

I originally read the comments and thought they were pornographic, so I specifically picked out the "criticism" chapters to read, but it turned out not to be the case. When I came back to read the comments, I realized that it was like a martial arts romance novel that I read from my female classmates when I was a kid. I only read some critical chapters.

I really think the writing is quite good, and the writing and plot are very flavorful, right? 1. Except for Li Mochou, the other two female protagonists in this book have no emotional foreshadowing at all. They give a fiancée at the beginning and have no role at all. As soon as they meet, they stay together for a long time 2. Mid-term On the way to the Shaolin Temple with my fiancée, my mother's heart suddenly made me laugh. It's really disgusting that you, an evil person, are suddenly pitiful and compassionate. Just after killing people and robbing other people's property, you criticize Huang Rong's rich clothes and food. What's wrong? Don't they deserve it? Does it mean that if someone is poor, others must also be poor with him? ? Unbelievable

I haven't watched it for a while, and I discovered that it's limited to free of charge.

This is a good Divine Condor fanfic. I read a lot of comments and want to explain the so-called "poisonous points" (we must bring in the protagonist to think about the problem) 1: The age difference between the protagonist and Li Mochou is too big. In fact, this is not a problem at all. If it were just the original world of the divine eagle, practicing to the five absolute levels would be the lowest level. Li's qualifications are not low, and the two of them can live at least 100 years old. Not to mention that if the time traveler can find some Eight Desolations and Six Unions, it will be even easier. Plus the system... It's not like ordinary people will grow old at the age of 40, so it is not a problem at all, not to mention that the author has introduced heavenly beings and above. 2: Regarding the identity of the two, first of all, the protagonist is a time traveler. What does Lu Zhanyuan's matter have to do with him? Is it so easy for you, an adult who has traveled through the past, to identify with a new father? Moreover, whether Lu Zhanyuan had any substantial relationship with her or not, he could only hold hands with her. 3: Some people say that the protagonist is a scumbag. I don't quite agree with this. In fact, the protagonist knew from the beginning that if he wanted Li Mochou, he would have to be single-minded. It's okay that Hong Lingbo was an accident. As for Cheng Ying, it all happened under various unavoidable circumstances. For example, in Broken Heart Valley, you can't just come to help you and say with a straight face, "Cheng Ying doesn't need you, I will do it myself" when someone is about to be killed. Is this any different from being kicked in the head by a donkey? Everything went smoothly after that, nothing to say. These are all responsibilities, human beings are wise! I am actually a pure lover. In fact, I used to always think that if I traveled through time one day, I would only find one woman to grow old together with. But after reading this book, I learned that the laws of heaven are impermanent and nothing is absolute in the world. Who can say for sure what will happen in the future? 4: Some people also say that the protagonist has double standards and is not a good person. In fact, as modern people, we should know that good people and bad people are not so clear-cut. Double standards are even simpler. Everyone is selfish and laughs at fifty steps. Anyone who has seen Gu Zhenren should understand this. If you can't even understand this, haha ​​😥, if double standards are demons, then I am the devil among demons (multiple standards)

What you wrote directly ruined my good mood for the whole night 😡🔪